Elemental Lord Omi Posted July 5, 2008 Report Share Posted July 5, 2008 Since it's the 4th, here are some American based cards. Remember, all these cards were made....... in America! (If you get it, you get a cookie, lol.) U.S. ConstitutionType: Continuous Trap CardEffect: Select 1 face-up "Freedom Fighter", "Lady Liberty", "American Man", or "Flag Patriot" on the field. As long as this card is face-up on the field, the selected monster can't be destroyed by battle. If this card is destroyed, the selected monster is destroyed. During each of your Standby Phase pay 100 Life Points, if you can not this card is destroyed. Amendment 1: Freedom of PressType: Quick-Play Spell CardEffect: Your opponent declares monster, magic, or trap. Then, both players add 1 card from their deck to their hand that match that type. Amendment 2: Right to Bare ArmsType: Normal Spell CardEffect: Pay 500 Life Points to activate this card. Add 1 Equip Spell card from your deck or Graveyard to your hand. Amendment 6: Right to a Speedy TrialType: Normal Spell CardEffect: Each player chooses 1 monster on their side of the field and sends it to the Graveyard. Amendment 24: Abolishment of Poll TaxType: Continuous Spell CardEffect: This card can only be activated while "U.S. Constitution" is on the field. The controller of this card doesn't have to pay Life Points to keep "U.S. Constitution" on the field. Amending of the Constitution!Type: Normal Spell CardEffect: This card can only be activated when you have a face-up "U.S. Constitution" on the field, and a "Amendment 24: Abolishment of Poll Tax" in the graveyard. Destroy "U.S. Constitution" (the selected monster is not destroyed), then you can add 1 "Amendment 1: Freedom of Press", "Amendment 2: Right to Bare Arms", and Amendment 6: Right to a Speedy Trial", from your deck, or Graveyard to your hand. Writing of the ConstitutionType: Normal Spell CardEffect: Discard 2 cards from your hand, then add 1 "U.S. Constitution" from your deck to your hand. Lady LibertyLevel: 4Attribute: LightType: WarriorATK:1100 DEF:1800Effect: If an opponent's monster attacks a face-up "Freedom Fighter", "American Man", or "Flag Patriot", you can switch the attack target to this card. Freedom FighterLevel: 4Attribute: LightType: WarriorATK:1600 DEF:1400Caption: This warrior has seen oppression and fights to keep his country free. Majestic Eagle SpiritLevel: 3Attribute: LightType: Winged Beast/UnionATK:500 DEF:500Effect: Once per turn, during your Main Phase, if you control this monster on the field, you can equip it to a face-up monster you control as an Equip Spell Card, OR unequip the Union equipment and Special Summon this card in face-up Attack Position. This card can not be equip to a face-up "Lady Liberty" or "Freedom Fighter". When this card is sent to the Graveyard, Special Summon 1 "Lady Liberty" or "Freedom Fighter" from your deck. (1 monster can only be equipped with 1 Union Monster at a time. If the monster that this card is equipped to is destroyed, this card is destroyed instead.) Flag PatriotLevel: 8Attribute: LightType: Warrior/ RitualATK:2700 DEF:2400Effect: This card can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card, "Flag Monument". Once per turn, you can pay 500 Life Points to shuffle 1 card from your Graveyard into your deck. Flag MonumentType: Ritual Spell CardEffect: This card is used to Ritual Summon "Flag Patriot". You must also offer monsters whose total Level Stars equal 8 or more as a Tribute from the field or your hand. Liberty's TorchType: Equip Spell CardEffect: A face-up monster equip with this card can not attack your opponent directly. Increase the attack of the equipped monster by 200 points for each face-up Warrior monster you control. When this card is destoryed and sent to the Graveyard, you can pay 500 Life Points to shuffle it back into your deck. Star Spangled SwordType: Equip Spell CardEffect: This card can only be equip to one face-up "Liberty Lady", Freedom Fighter", or "Flag Patriot". When the equipped monster attacks, no Trap Cards can be activated. If this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, you can pay 500 Life Points to shuffle it back into your deck. The Founding FathersLevel: 3Attribute: LightType: WarriorATK:200 DEF:1300Effect: Tribute this face-up card to negate the effect of a Continuous Trap Card. If this card attacks your opponent directly, add one Continuous Trap Card from your Graveyard to your deck. Liberty HallType: Field Spell CardEffect: Increase the ATK of all face-up Warrior monsters by 200. When a face-up "Liberty Lady", "Freedom Fighter", "American Man", or "Flag Patriot" is destroyed by battle you can discard one card from your hand to shuffle it back into your deck. Neither player can activate any Continuous Trap Cards as long as this card is face-up on the field. Jr. SoldierLevel: 2Attribute: LightType: WarriorATK:500 DEF:700Discription: Watching his family go off to war, this child dreams of defending his country. Time for War!Type: Normal Spell CardEffect: Tribute 1 "Jr. Soldier" on your side of the field to Special Summon 1 "Freedom Fighter" from your hand or deck. Protector of Liberty & FreedomLevel: 7Attribute: LightType: Warrior/FusionATK:2400 DEF:2000Discription: Lady Liberty + Freedom Fighter Now I also made a Civil War based set..... Seperation of the UnionType: Normal Trap CardEffect: Pay 500 Life Points points to Special Summon 1 "Confederate" monster from your Graveyard. The monster Special Summoned by this effect is destoryed during the End Phase this card was activated. Confederate Guard LV.8Level: 8Attribute: LightType: WarriorATK:1950 DEF:3300Effect: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by the effect of "Confederate Guard LV 6." As long as you control this face-up monster, you opponent cannot select a Defense Postion monster you control as an attack target. Confederate Guard LV.6Level: 6Attribute: LightType: WarriorATK:1850 DEF:2700Effect: While this card is face-up in Defense Position, your opponent can only choose this card as a attack target. During your Standby Phase, you can tribute this face-up card to Special Summon one "Confederate Guard LV.8" from your hand or deck. Confederate Guard LV.4Level: 4Attribute: LightType: WarriorATK:1300 DEF:1900Effect: This card can not attack your opponent directly. During your Standby Phase, you can tribute this face-up card to Special Summon one "Confederate Guard LV.6" from your hand or deck. Confederate GeneralLevel: 6Attribute: LightType: WarriorATK:2000 DEF:2000Effect: You can discard 1 "Lady Liberty" from your hand to Special Summon 1 "Confederate Soldier" from your deck. If you use this effect, this monster cannot attack this turn. Confederate SoldierLevel: 4Attribute: LightType: WarriorATK:1600 DEF:1700Discription: Fighting for his vaules, this soldier is feirce on any battlefield. Confederate General- LeeLevel: 8Attribute: LightType: WarriorATK:3100 DEF:2300Effect: This card can only be Summoned by tributing 2 monsters on your side of the field with "Confederate" in their names. This card may attack twice during the Battle Phase. Lee's Last StandType: Quick-Play Spell CardEffect: Discard all the cards in your hand. If you have a face-up "Confederate General- Lee", you must only discard 1 card. End your opponent's Battle Phase. Link to comment
Cless Alvein Posted July 5, 2008 Report Share Posted July 5, 2008 Pretty cool bro! my rating: 8.7/10 Link to comment
cameronsdog Posted July 5, 2008 Report Share Posted July 5, 2008 your talkin bout bandit keith from the abriged series arnet you besides that thos are good 9/10 and Keith:you cant use that word cause your not american only americans can use that wordKaiba:Shut the ****upKeith: in america Link to comment
Elemental Lord Omi Posted July 5, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 5, 2008 yup, lol, watching him say that over and over gave me the insperation for this set. Link to comment
cameronsdog Posted July 5, 2008 Report Share Posted July 5, 2008 yep the abriged show is awesome cant wait for little koriboh to stop bein lazy and make the next one PS: thankss for the cookie PSS: When you make them cards can i see if you do PSSS: in america Link to comment
superchaos2585 Posted July 5, 2008 Report Share Posted July 5, 2008 10/10 because you did a good job and I like to show my patriotism!! Link to comment
The Oncoming Storm Posted July 5, 2008 Report Share Posted July 5, 2008 "And now for my favorite Shakespare quote: Alas, poor Yorick, I knew him...In America!" Link to comment
texaschickenlittle Posted July 5, 2008 Report Share Posted July 5, 2008 Cool cards, but they have some major grammar and OCG errors. For grammar, remember:1. "i" before "e" except after "c".2. "Its" is possessive, "It's" = "It is" For OCG errors:1. It's "can" not "may" in card text.2. When using numbers, don't spell it out. Use the actual number itself. Not "one", but "1".3. For Confederate Guard LV 8's effect, it should probably read:"This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by the effect of "Confederate Guard LV 6." As long as you control this face-up monster, you opponent cannot select a defense postion monster you control as an attack target.4. For Confederate General's last sentence in its effect should read:"If you use this effect, this monster cannot attack this turn."5. Confederate General - Lee is overpowered. He only requires 1 Tribute, has high ATK, and can attack twice per turn. You should probably have his effect changed to:"This card can only be Normal Summoned or Set by Tributing 3 monsters with at least 1 being a "Confederate" monster...6. You need to make Majestic Eagle Spirit's effect less confusing. Is it a Union monster, that can't be equipped to Lady Liberty, Freedom Fighter, American Man, or Flag Patriot?7. Also, is The U.S. Constitution a Continuous Trap Card or an Equip Spell card because in Amending the Constitution!, that card says: The monster it's equipted to is not destroyed. There are other errors, but I don't want to nag you ears (actually your eyes) off. But, I like these cards. They have great effects, and could probably make a good Deck when combined with other cards. Anyways, that all for now. Happy 4th of July and enjoy the fireworks wherever you may be. Link to comment
Elemental Lord Omi Posted July 5, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 5, 2008 Thx TCL, lol I made these cards when I was just starting out and never edited them again (will do now). And any fixes you have please say them, thats the only way they'll get better! Update: I fixed the errors stated above and any others I found, for Mejestic Eagle Spirit I used a Unions monsters text to get it right this time. :) Link to comment
komui2 Posted July 5, 2008 Report Share Posted July 5, 2008 Cool! Can't wait to see the cards. 10/10 Link to comment
Wyhe Posted July 5, 2008 Report Share Posted July 5, 2008 good cards there,I should also do them for my country's national day too. Link to comment
Elemental Lord Omi Posted July 5, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 5, 2008 I am starting work on "Country" sets, so hopefully those will come out eventually. Link to comment
Larxene Posted July 5, 2008 Report Share Posted July 5, 2008 These cards are good.....in America! ~Clariex Link to comment
Guest Tiger Posted July 6, 2008 Report Share Posted July 6, 2008 These cards are good.....in America! ~Clariex Exactly. They are very good...In America! Link to comment
danieldoo Posted July 6, 2008 Report Share Posted July 6, 2008 i want too see them as cards Link to comment
byron Posted July 6, 2008 Report Share Posted July 6, 2008 Very nice, I can't wait to see the pic's on the cards. 10/10 Link to comment
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