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Yu-Gi-Oh! Destiny Echoes!

 

Characters

 

[0] Sora Echoes

Deck: ???

Age: 16

Biography: The Main character of the Fan-Fic

 

[1] Wicko

Deck: ???

Age: Unknown

Biography: An Unknown Duelist from the future. He came to destroy Sora before he could recover the Duel Power he was

destined for in the future.

 

[2] Ryan Matum

Deck: ???

Age: 14

Biography: A young duelist who recently won a world tournament. He is a respected friend of Sora.

 

[3] Hunter Baker

Deck: ???

Biography:Sora's most trusted an dbest friend. Although they see eachother as Rivals rather than friends.

 

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[Episode 0] [Prolouge] [Echoes of Time]

 

[Future] [October 13, 2013]

 

???: I might have failed at defeating you now, but i will travel to your past and make sure

you never gain the skill you earned through the years.

 

Sora: I was able to defeat you in this time. What makes you think I'm any less in my past?

 

The setting is a street, emptied, and destroyed. Sora was beat up from a Duel, and he was kneeling.

He was bleeding from the lip, and left shoulder. It seemded it was broken. Three other bodies were

laying behind him.

 

???: Your foolish. You really think your past is better than the present?

 

Sora: I strongly doubt it. But it doesn't mean he'll just sit back and lose to the likes of you.

 

???: You ignorant little pest!

 

The mysterious man swung his fist into sora's gut and threw him 6 feet away.

 

???: I will travel to your past, and I will kill your friends, again. And then I will send your

past to the Shadow Realm. Then I shall rule that Dimension.

 

Sora: You've yet to understand what power of friendship really holds. I was foolish into thinking you were my friend.

I shall not make the same mistake twice.

 

???: And how do you assume you won't?

 

Sora: Because, Souls have a way of learning things from one another. The sound of Destiny shall travel through the

echoes of time.

 

Sora falls to the ground, and dies. His soul is carried through another plain.

 

???: You fool. Now, Open The Gates of Time!

 

A giant portal opens, and the man walks through.

 

[Domino City]

 

[Present Day - June 4, 2008]

 

Sora: Hey guys, weren't we supposed meet up at Kaiba Corp?

 

Hunter: Sorry, we got side tracked.

 

Ryan: Yeah, we just heard of a new duelist rising up in the ranks. We heard he was gonna be at pier today.

 

Hunter: Can we check it out? I want to show him i'm better than him.

 

Sora: Sure i guess.

 

Sora chuckles. They start to walk to the park.

 

Sora: So what's this guy's story?

 

Ryan: His name is Andrew I think. I'm not sure what kind of Deck he run's though.

 

Hunter: Probably something noobish.

 

Sora: You think everythings noobish.

 

Sora makes a smirk.

 

Sora: first let's see how you match up with this Andrew kid.

 

Hunter: This will be an easy win.

 

Ryan: Sure...

 

They suddenly arrive at the pier. there seems to be no one there.

 

Hunter: Ryan you noob, I thought you said there was a duelist here.

 

Ryan there should be, I heard from...from...

 

Sora: From who?

 

Ryan: I can't...I can't remember.

 

Hunter: What do you mean you can't remember?

 

Ryan: I don't know, I just remember a man in a cloak.

 

Hunter: Your just taking tips from random people now?

 

Sora: Give him a break Hunter, Ryan, what did he look li...

 

???: I believe your friend is talking about me.

 

Hunter: Who are you?

 

???: I am Wicko, I seek a challenge.

 

Hunter: Fine, let's duel.

 

???: I seek a Duel with the one named Sora!

 

Hunter: What? Why? I should be a good enough challenge for you!

 

???: Enough, either you duel me or I shall send your friend to the Shadows.

 

Hunter: The what? The shadow Realm doesn't even exis...

 

The man uses his mind to throw Hunter a few yards back against a wall.

 

Ryan: HEy! What the hell was that for?

 

Ryan charges the man, even though he appears twice his age. The man also flunges Ryan into the wall

 

Hunter previously hit.

 

They were both knocked out unconcious.

 

Sora: What was that for?

 

???: I have come from the future to stop you from creating the greatest legion of duelists. The duelists who will one day stand in my way of ruling the Dimension of Echoes.

 

Sora: The what?

 

???: I shall be your opponent, the loser will be sent to the Shadow Realm.

 

Sora: Your crazy if you think i'm gonna duel you.

 

???: Then i'll do it by force.

 

The man raises his hand at Hunter and Ryan and they start to scream. The man was using telepathy to destroy their minds.

 

Sora: What are you doing to them, leave them alone!

 

???: Not unless you duel me.

 

Sora: Fine!, let them go, please. I'll duel you, just leave them be!

 

Sora raises his dueldisk. The man Laughs.

 

???: You shall lose to the wrath of the Wicked!

 

Both Yell: Duel!

 

[End of Prolouge]

 

 

Its currently a rough sketch, but thats it

 

hope you enjoy ;)

 

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Interesting prologue.

 

I think you could explain the whole "Dimension of Echoes" thing a little more though.

 

Not bad, I'll read Episode 1 when you post it, and I will decide the Fan-Fic based on the first episode.

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okay, no lie, your prolouge actually made me ROFL. I was actually rolling on the floor laughing at what my character said, I'd say it all myself. XD

 

Wow..

 

I'd have PWNT Wicko myself if his futuristic mind powerz did not knock me unconcious.

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Yu-Gi-Oh! Destiny Echoes: Legion of Darkness

[Episode 1] [Pilot] [Destined Rivals of the Shadows][/align]

 

[sora: 4000]

[Wicko: 4000]

 

Both duelists Draw 5 cards.

 

Sora: You attack me, and my friends, so I will take the initiative and go first!

 

Sora Draws a card.

 

Sora: You won't get away with what you've done to my friends! I start by summoning the Marauding Captain. (1200/400) in Attack Position.

Wicko: What a puny warrior, not worth my time.

 

Wicko stares at the warrior without emotion. Then looks at Sora, and his expression turns to hatred

 

Sora: My warrior isn't as puny as you think! When my warrior is Normal Summoned, I am allowed to Special Summon 1 level or lower Warrior type monster from my hand. It also happens, I have another Marauding Captain in my hand! so I summon the Marauding Captain! (1200/400) I'll end my turn with two face-downs.

 

Wicko: So you managed to get two monsters on the field. Their low attack stand nothing against my army of Dark Fiends!

 

Wicko puts his hand on his deck, ready to draw a card.

 

Sora: There is something you should know.

 

Wicko Draws his card, and without looking at it, he looks at Sora with a curious smirk.

 

Wicko: What?

Sora: My captain has another special ability.

 

Wicko's smirk to turned to shock.

 

Sora: You see, my captain has the effect to be the only warrior monster you can select as an attack target on my side of the field. And as long as I have two on the field, you cannot attack any of my warriors on my side of the field!

 

Wicko's expression suddenly changed to anger.

 

Wicko: Your little tactic won't work for long sora! I see he's still playing as well as ever, even his past has skill. No matter, Now I will start my turn by summoning Snipe Hunter! (1500/600)

 

Sora frowns in his sudden realization of the card just played.

 

Sora: Snipe Hunter? Unless he rolls a 1 or 6, he can stop my Captains effects

Wicko: So you know of my fiends effect do you? I hate to say, your captains combo will be stopped. Wait, I'll love to say it! Now snipe hunter, i activate your ability, By discarding one card, I can choose one card on your side of the field, and unless I roll a 1 or 6, that card will be destroyed.

 

Wicko places one card in the Graveyard from his hand. A Dice appears above Snipe Hunter, and Snipe hunter hits it slightly towards Sora. As the dice rolled, so did the spinner in Snipe Hunters Gun. The number that appeared on his gun was 5. Wicko starts to laugh.

 

Wicko: So, how unbeatable is your monsters effect now?

 

One of Sora's Marauding Captains are blown into millions of pixels.

 

Sora: Just because you managed to stop my combo, doen't mean you've won, or that you have gained some major advantage over me.

Wicko: Oh Really? We'll have to see about that then now will we?

 

Suddenly a Gold monster appeared on the field.

 

Sora: What the? I've never seen a monster like that before Why did you summon again?

Wicko: My Goldd, Wu-Lord of Dark World (2400/1400) has a special ability. When he's discarded to the grave, I can special summon him.

Sora: But when did you...

Wicko: I had to discard a card to activate Snipers effect remember?

 

Sora made an expression of shock.

 

Sora: He was able to summon a 2400 ATK monster on his first turn, this isnt going to be as easy as i though.

Wicko: Now, say good bye to your monster, Goldd, attack his Marauding Captain with Golden Trident Slash!

Sora: Sorry wicko, but i'm not allowing that, I activate my trap card Negate attack, your battle phase ends here!

Wicko: You little brat no matter. Next turn you will lose!

Sora: I believe its my turn now?

 

Sora draws a card.

 

Sora: I activate the spell card Six Samurai United. So, whenever a Six Samurai is summoned, I can add a Bushido Counter to it.

Wicko: So what does it do?

Sora: You'll find out right now, I summon the Six Samurai - Yaichi! (1300/800)

 

A Warrior with blue armor appeared on soras side of the field. A Counter appears in front of sora.

 

Wicko: I hate those damn Six Samurai's of yours, When I defeat you, i'll be sure to destroy them once and for all.

Sora: You will never get your hands on my cards, and i'll show you who will win this! I play Double Summon from my hand, and its effect lets me Normal Summon again this turn!

Wicko: It was impossible to defeat him when his samurai's were teamed up together. No matter, he is not the same duelist he is in the future, he will lose.

 

Sora: Now, I summon the Six Samurai - Yariza (1000/500)

 

A warrior, similar to Yaichi, appeared next to Yaichi, except with Black Armor, and one single staff. Another Counter appears in front of Sora.

 

Sora: My Six Samurai United has reached its limit, so i send it to the graveyard, so I can Draw 2 cards!

 

Sora draws two cards, with a big smile. Wicko stares with no emotion, as if not caring about Sora's sudden achievement.

 

Now, I Special Summon my very own Great Shogun Shien! (2500/2400)

 

A warrior monster resembling a samurai appeared in front of Sora.

 

Sora: It seems you have no possible way of winning now, do you?

Wicko: Just go on with your turn.

 

Sora starts to smile.

 

Sora: Great Shogun Shien, attack his Goldd, with Great Shogun Strike!

 

Great shogun shien slashes Goldd with his sword, and blows him to millions of pixels.

 

Sora: 4000

Wicko: 3900

 

Sora: Wicko, there is no way you stand a chance, you have yet to touch my Life Points! Now, I can't attack you with my Yaichi, but my Yariza has the ability to attack you directly when a buddy of his is on the field. Attack Yariza, Center Pierce Slash!

 

Wicko: 2900

 

Sora: I can end my turn now.

Wicko: Good, it seems your skills are yet to show themselves, oh well.

 

Wicko Draws a card. He stares and starts to laugh.

 

Sora: What's so funny?

Wicko: The fact that your little advantage, is about to come to an end. I activate the spell card Monster Reincarnation, so i'll discard this, and add gold to my hand. Since my Khakki was discarded, I can destroy one monster on your side of the field. So I choose Great shogun shien!

 

Suddenly, a big explosion appeared around soras side of the field. When the smoke cleared, Great Shogun Shien still seemed to be on the field.

 

Wicko: But how is your shogun still alive?

 

Sora smiled

 

Sora: If my shogun happens to be destroyed, I can choose another six samurai to destroy in its place. And I chose Yariza.

Wicko: No matter, your shogun will not survive after this. I activate the spell card Card Destruction. Now we noth discard our hands, and then draw the same amount.

 

Wicko and Sora discard their hands, and start to draw.

 

Wicko: Remember how I returned Goldd to my hand? Well because of card destruction, I can Special Summon it back. (2400/1400)

Sora: Goldd stands no chance against my Shogun!

Wicko: No, but Reign-beux does! I release snipe hunter and khakki, to Advance Summon Reign-Beux, Overlord of Dark World. (2500/1800)

 

A giant fiend appeared in front of wicko.

 

Wicko: Now, I activate my face-down, Fine, so i can discard up to 2 cards from my hand. Since I only have one, I will discard Sillva, Warlord of Dark World. And like Goldd, is special summoned! (2300/1400)

Sora: 3 monsters that strong, I...I don't think I can win this. I'm sorry Hunter, Ryan

Hunter: You can win this Sora, just believe in yourself!

 

Sora quickly turned around, and saw Hunter awake, laying on the floor, with Ryan stll knocked out.

 

Sora: Hunter, your up! Are you ok?

Hunter: I'll be alright, but you can't give up. If he wins, he will destroy you, and then start killing everyone we love. You can't let him win.

 

Tears starting falling from Sora's eyes.

 

Sora: Thanks Hunter: I won't let you down. Hey wicko, just because you have three very powerful monsters, doesn't mean you will win!

Wicko: Oh really? Lets see about that shall we.

 

Wicko smirks at Sora, and gives him a look of pure evil.

 

Wicko: Snipe Hunter, finish his Marauding Captain, Snipe Plasmic Ray!

 

Marauding Captain is destroyed into pixels.

 

Sora: 3700

 

Wicko: Now, Sillva, destroy Yaichi with Silver Trident Slash!

 

Sora: 2700

 

Wicko: Reign-Beux, attack shogun with Rainbow Shadow Strike!

 

Sora: 2600

 

Wicko: And Goldd, Attack him directly!

 

Sora: 200

Wicko: 2900

 

Sora was on one knee, tears and sweat falling from his face. He was in terrible Pain. After a good minute, he spoke.

 

Sora: Impressive. But, you haven't won yet.

Wicko: I have already won. I just need one turn, and I will win, and you and your friends shall perish.

Sora: Do you...do you end your turn?

Wicko: Fine, go. Your turn.

 

Sora draws a card from his deck.

 

Sora: I place a card face-down and end my turn.

Wicko: One card? You have one card to protect yourself with?

 

Wicko starts laughing histerically.

 

Wicko: This shall be easier than I thought.

 

Wicko draws a card.

 

Wicko: I activate snipe hunters effect, I discard a card from my hand and select your face-down card. Now, roll!

 

The dice landed on a 2.

 

Wicko: And with that, your left defensless, any last words?

 

Sora didnt say anything. His head was down, and still on his knee.

 

Wicko: Fine. Goldd, finish this, attack him directly, Golden Trident Slash!

 

Goldd charges Sora with his sword. Before the attack could hit, a bright light appears around Sora, and Goldd was obliterated into thousands of pixels. Soras Life Points went down to zero.

 

Sora: 0

Wicko: 2900

 

Wicko: Why weren't you hit, what happened?

Sora: Wicko! I told you I wouldn't allow this!

 

Sora screamed.

 

Wicko: What the...

Sora: I am the Sora of your time. Like I said, I traveled here with you, and I am determined to stop you!

 

Wicko begins to laugh meniacally.

 

Wicko: You failed in the future, and you will fail now!

Sora: Destiny will always bring us together Wicko, our souls are tied together by fate. I am determined, to stop you, if not from becoming evil, then I have only one other choice. If I must stop you, then I will have no choice.

 

The light in Sora left him quickly towards Wicko. Wicko was hit hard backwards onto the floor. The Light surrounding Wicko was sent back by a force of darkness, It looked like a big shadow.

 

Shadows: You might be able to stop me from killing them,but you can't stop me from sending all of us to the plain of darkness.

 

The Shadow surrounded the whole pier, taking everything into its shadows. It seems as if the area was completely obliterated, no where around. Sora woke up.

 

Sora: What the? Where am I?

 

The surrounding area had the small buildings around like the pier, but it seemed too dark, and no one was around.

[End of Pilot]

 

[Next Episode: Enter - the Realm of Darkness]

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Lol my eyes went numb for looking at these but woohooo this is really great. Lolz can't wait for the next chapters. It's really cool that you use part of the anime like what's so funny and these kind of things.

Good luck writing the next chapters. ;)

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great story

but the dark world monsters must be discarded for the sake of discarding only & not to play other effects to play their own effects.

 

that whole thing confuzzled me ?_?

rephrase plox

 

and thanx excalibur

just go to yugioh.wiki & type in Dark World to get your answers.

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Yu-Gi-Oh! Destiny Echoes: Legion of Darkness

[Episode 2] [Destined Rivals of the Shadows][/align]

 

[On the last Episode of Destiny Echoes]

[The duel between Sora and Wicko had started, and even with Sora's eary advantage, he was unable to deafeat the stranger from the future. Before Wicko was able to send Sora to the Shadow Realm, A force of Light appeared in Sora, stopping Wicko. Wicko used the Dark Powers he had, to create a Giant Shadow around the pier where they dueled, into a portal where Sora wakes up with no one around.]

 

 

Sora awoke suddenly, to a sound he heard just a few feet away. He was alone, laying on the floor. He seemed to be in pain. He screamed.

 

Sora: AHHHH!

 

He stood up, barely on one foot. His head was down, tears started falling from his face.

 

Sora: HUNTER!...RYAN!

 

Sora was yelling loudly, through the empty street. He could be barely see anything, it was so dark. Though his sight was weakened, his other senses were full aware of the surroundings. Sora could sense someone coming close to him.

 

Sora: Whose there?

 

After a short pause, he speaks again.

 

Sora: Please, is anyone there?

 

???: A Human?

 

Sora falls back on his back, looking around everywhere, not seeing anything.

 

Sora: Whose there?

 

???: Tell me boy, where did you come from?

 

Sora: What? Please I need help. My friends...they were...they we..

 

???: Answer my question boy!

 

A giant cloaked creature charged sora, and picked him up by the neck.

 

???: You are not meant for this world child. You are still living, tell me now how you got here, or we'll have a problem on our hands. SPEAK!

 

Sora: I...Can't...Let...me...go...

 

Suddenly A purple light appeared in front of the creature, coming from Sora's Duel Disk. A giant Warrior with purple armor, and a single sword appeared. He had some kind of device around his eyes, that made him look like a cyclops.

 

Purple Warrior: Step away from the boy Reaper!

 

As the warrior appeared light began to fill the area, causing the creature to move back still in the shadows.

 

Reaper of the Cards: What business does a Human have in the shadow realm, Duel Spirit?

 

Purple Warrior: We were brought here by a man called Wicko. He sent us here.

 

Reaper of the Cards: There is no possible way any human can open a portal to the Shadow Realm, now tell me how you were able to get here.

 

Sora looked up at the warrior and noticed it to be his favorite card, The Six Samurai - Irou.

 

Sora: Irou?

 

Irou continues to stare at the reaper.

 

Irou: Leave reaper, as you can see, we still have our Duel Aura, we are not permitted to be taken by you yet.

 

Reaper: It may be true I only take the souls of duel spirits with no aura left, but...It would be a real treat to have Duel Aura once again.

 

The reaper makes a smirk and charges Irou. Irou puts up his sword towards the reaper, but the reaper continues to charge.

 

Sora: I play, The six samurai's, Yaichi, Kamon, Yariza, Nisashi, and Zanji!

 

Five more warriors appeared next to Irou. One back, one green, one yellow, one red, and one blue. The Six samurai's aura's spread around the whole area, spreading a light at least a mile wide.

 

Reaper: What the? Its the...the Samurai's...the legendary six...

 

The reaper seemed to be very surprised to who he saw before him. The light seemed to consume the Reaper completely, banishing him from the darkness itself.

 

Sora: Duel Spirits? Are you my Duel spirits?

 

Kamon: Yes... we are.

 

Yaichi: Sora, have you noticed the surroundings? Have you any idea where we are at?

 

Sora: Umm, well. The reaper said we are in the Shadow Realm.

 

Nisashi: Exactly. Which is why it is crucial that we leave at once!

 

Yariza: How do you expect to do that, we don't have the power to get out of here ourselves.

 

Yaichi: The only way back i with the power of the one who brought us here.

 

Zanji: If we can ever find him. Last we saw, he was being taken down by sora's future half.

 

Irou: First thing is first. We need to find Hunter and Ryan.

 

Kamon: I don't expect to find them now. They've been brought here with other Dark creatures who could just have easily taken them out for good.

 

Sora: Don't say that! I mean it. I know they're alive. I just know it.

 

The six samurai's looked at sora, his face was pale, and he seemed pretty beat up. He looked as if half awake.

 

Yaichi: Sora, you should try and get some rest, you don't look so good.

 

Sora: NO! Tell me first, what does this Wicko want with me?

 

Sora feel onto his knees. Yariza went over and picked him up.

 

Zanji: Wicko is someone who is destined to befriend you. His weak mindedness turns him evil, and with his new found power, he try's and take over the two worlds, Earth and the Duel Spirit world.

 

Irou: Through fate, he has always been able to come in contact with you through each age, each Generation.

 

Nisashi: Your Destinys are tied together, yet when met through a generation, you two usually end your lives with a tragic death.

 

Sora feezes, and looks up towards Nisashi, then to Irou.

 

Sora: Wait. How do you six know all of this?

 

Yaichi: You see, through each generation that you are reborn, you manage to recieve the power of the Six Samurai Deck. And tragically, Wicko always ends up with a Dark World Deck.

 

Kamon: Just like yourself, Wicko is able to see all the duel spirits of his Dar World fiends. The thing is, he is able to control them.

 

Zanji: Yet, the deck seems to always end up with him too early in life, and. The deck taints his soul.

 

Irou: Through each Generation, you both get followers, a team in which you each fight eachother.

 

Yariza: You always manage a team of friends, while he finds a team of power. Each person usually ends up dieing, yes in your future, Wicko did not.

 

Irou: Yes, something must have have happened in order to change Destiny itself.

 

Zanji: Destiny can't be altered.

 

Zanji makes a face of disbelief. Irou and Sora both look at zanji with amazement. Irou is about to begin to speak towards Zanji, but Sora cuts in fast.

 

Sora: Thats not true! Destiny isn't something that is planned from the beggining of birth, its something you shape yourself with the decisions you make.

 

Irou: Exactly! Destiny does not control your life or soul.

 

Zanji: Really? What is it that makes sora and Andrew die every generation.

 

Irou: Its not...

 

Sora: Andrew?

 

Yaichi: Andrew Wickens is Wicko's real name.

 

Sora: Andrew Wickens? Why is the name so familiar?

 

Kamon: Probably because your destinys are connected, and the name just automatically comes to mind.

 

Sora: No! I'm sure I heard the name before.

 

Irou: Think, maybe you already met him before.

 

Sora: I...I..

 

Sora suddenly passes out on the floor. Yaichi picks him up.

 

Irou: He just needs some rest. Take him to that house over there.

 

Zanji: And we do we do now?

 

Irou: We wait for him to wake up. Then, we go in search for his friends.

 

[End of Episode 2]

 

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