TwIsTeD GaArA_95 Posted July 3, 2008 Report Share Posted July 3, 2008 well heres my first set so please dont critisise me loads im a newbie to all this i am updating on a weekly basis so enjoy update: lots space saved for new franklin badge Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lazer Yoshi Posted July 3, 2008 Report Share Posted July 3, 2008 Some OCG problems, better pictures would be cool, and better effects. Good effort though! Maybe switch the title to SSBB cards 6.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlueFlame Posted July 3, 2008 Report Share Posted July 3, 2008 Bad OCG and Grammar. Plain as that 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cassia Posted July 4, 2008 Report Share Posted July 4, 2008 Be nicer Blue FLame. Especially to new people. Great job kid. Keep up the good work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pikachu Posted July 4, 2008 Report Share Posted July 4, 2008 my recoomendations:1. use pics that have been never used before2. improve ocg3. ur not really a newb, u registered at december4. for r.o.b's effect, it'll take 21 turns for it to die lol change it5. keep it up! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Donquixote Doflamingo Posted July 4, 2008 Report Share Posted July 4, 2008 ocg errors Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
=aTaLiG= Posted July 4, 2008 Report Share Posted July 4, 2008 your cards are overpowered and you have many OCG errors... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Marisa Kirisame-ze Posted July 5, 2008 Report Share Posted July 5, 2008 Some OCG errors, but not so bad. PS I love your avatar! Gir singing the Doom Song! LOL! ^^Anyway, nice cards! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Ruby Posted July 6, 2008 Report Share Posted July 6, 2008 OCG and Grammar aren't good nice pics though i suggest browarod for help with OCG ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Villojody R. Posted July 6, 2008 Report Share Posted July 6, 2008 Woohoo! Super Smash Bros. Brawl! Love the pic, but bad ocg. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TwIsTeD GaArA_95 Posted August 9, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 9, 2008 ok thanks foer all you help i am trying to get my old thread closed to have more time improving this i would take any suggestions and am stuck for a new card any help Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doctor Posted August 9, 2008 Report Share Posted August 9, 2008 you have really bad ocg in your cardswhy dont you LOOK for a thread which will help you to make good cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
super dimentio Posted August 9, 2008 Report Share Posted August 9, 2008 cool its good except the franklin badge grammer but hey you are a new member so i give you a 9.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TwIsTeD GaArA_95 Posted August 11, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 11, 2008 thanks for all your comments im updating the thread in about 10 mins so look thenkay plus they are not going to be all ssbb Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kohake Posted August 11, 2008 Report Share Posted August 11, 2008 R.O.B's effect is kind of point less. becasu odds are he won't remain on the feild for 21 truns. And 2300 for 2 tributes is very low, espeicaly since it doesn't have a good effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TwIsTeD GaArA_95 Posted August 11, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 11, 2008 ok big update new cards and made R.O.B a level four Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
obi-dumb-one Posted August 11, 2008 Report Share Posted August 11, 2008 ok cards but it is okk your starting out, youll improve over time Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TwIsTeD GaArA_95 Posted August 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 16, 2008 thanks for all comments need more ideas for card plz help Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doctor Posted August 19, 2008 Report Share Posted August 19, 2008 bad picsbad cardsput more effort in -_-*not satisfied*/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted August 19, 2008 Report Share Posted August 19, 2008 Some have simple effects. Not bad though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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