Altair117 Posted July 2, 2008 Report Share Posted July 2, 2008 Sorry bout the last one i sorta forgot the level.[attachment=37953] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saturn of Elemia Posted July 2, 2008 Report Share Posted July 2, 2008 The Level is better, but the OCG still needs work. Here is how I would put it: "When this monster is flipped face-up, place 5 counters on this monster. During each of your Standby Phases, remove 1 counter from this monster. When there are no more counters, you win the Duel." The ATK is still insanely high. I would give the card between 2500 - 4000 ATK because of its effect. You have a good idea giving this monster low DEF, but 500 DEF on a Level 12 monster just doesn't seem right. A DEF of around 1900 or so would make a little more sense. Remember that even if this monster is flipped face-up , it still has to stick around for 5 turns for the instant win effect. This card gets a 5/10. Much better than the first draft, but still needs a little work. Keep up the good work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlueFlame Posted July 2, 2008 Report Share Posted July 2, 2008 OVERPOWERED. 3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
moonwalk 2000 Posted July 2, 2008 Report Share Posted July 2, 2008 read the second part of my sig the part that says I WILL REFUSE TO VIEW ANY AND/OR CLICK ABLE INSERTS! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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