Ultimate evolution

[13s unlucky 1]

Bassically upgraded versions to old cards.Please leave a good picture url if you have a idea for a picture on theese it would appreacated.oh please rate my card ideas.

[shyseido]

I don't have pictures for you, but i can say, you need to work on your spelling.

There was constant mispelling with "opponent" and "special" and that first card's effect was too overpowered. There were also random errors like how u put a fourth "+" after "Blue Eyes Dark Dragon" in that fusion card's effect. There was also no ID on the first card. I'm not gonna examine ever error for ya, but those are some.

i give a 5/10

[Elemental Lord Omi]

I like your first card the best so I'll fix the OCG. It would be more like..... This card can only be Summoned by removing 3 Dark Attribute monsters from your Graveyard from play. If your opponent attacks this card, flip a coin. If heads, cancle their attack and inflict damage equal to half their monster's ATK to their Life Points. If tails, you lose 1000 Life Points (plus whatever their attack does). If this card is destroyed, take control of one of your opponent's monsters and equipt this card to it. If this Equip Spell Card is destroyed, your opponent's monster returns to their side of the field.

Thats just my suggestion!

[shyseido]

I like your first card the best so I'll fix the OCG. It would be more like..... This card can only be Summoned by removing 3 Dark Attribute monsters from your Graveyard from play. If your opponent attacks this card' date=' flip a coin. If heads, cancle their attack and inflict damage equal to half their monster's ATK to their Life Points. If tails, you lose 1000 Life Points (plus whatever their attack does). If this card is destroyed, take control of one of your opponent's monsters and equipt this card to it. If this Equip Spell Card is destroyed, your opponent's monster returns to their side of the field.

Thats just my suggestion!

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Yea the first card would be better if it had a loss getting tails on a flip, plus making the opponent's monster an equip spell card sounds a bit better than just taking over an opponent's monster. That would be a repeat of the banned Change of Heart card, except more cheap.

[2003enzoferrari]

8/10!!!!