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Ruby with: Aquatic Fairy Lily

OCG:It sounds good. I feel something is off though. 38/40

PIC: Perfect. 30/30

Overpower/Underpower: Maybe if you got rid of the inflect damage to opponent at the end It would be more balenced. 28/30

Fit's "Standerds": 50/50

Total: 146/150

 

Frlf with: Lunar Diety-Sildia

OCG:I believe it would be Level 3 or lowar instead of Lowar then Level 4. 38/40

PIC: good. matches name. 30/30

Overpower/Underpower:Yes. 30/30

Fit's "Standerds": 50/50

Total: 148/150

 

Wombat with: Indolent Wombat

OCG:lose? 38/40

PIC:It's a wombat 30/30

Overpower/Underpower: The loss of 2000 does make it balenced. Otherwise it's quite overpowered. 29/30

Fit's "Standerds": 50/50

 

Spirit of Touma with: Crimson Warrior

OCG:The last sentences should be combined into 1. 37/40

PIC: good not great 29/30

Overpower/Underpower: 30/30

Fit's "Standerds": 50/50

Total: 146/150

 

Future Emperor

OCG:Plain and simple effect. OCG is perfect though. 39/40 I do believe this is the shortest effect in the round. Everyone make fun of Future Emperor.

PIC: One of my favorite pics. 30/30

Overpower/Underpower: 30/30

Fit's "Standerds": 50/50

Total: 149/150

 

FiRaven with: Femme Fatale-Cleo

OCG:Some sentences could be re worded. 37/40

PIC: Good not great. 29/30

Overpower/Underpower:Yes 30/30

Fit's "Standerds": 50/50

Total: 146/150

 

Cardmaster97

OCG:You need to cap some things like the types of summon. Spellcaster-Type. I suggest you read the grammar and OCG thread. 32/40

PIC: overused 25/30

Overpower/Underpower: Balenced...almost 29/30

Fit's "Standerds": 100 ATK 25/50

Total: 111/150

 

zain_reddevil with: A card that has a long name.

OCG: Do not cap field and cap card. also, Opponent's: 35/40

PIC: I seez a artist's sig and a border. 20/30

Overpower/Underpower: Balenced 30/30

Fit's "Standerds": yes 50/50

Total:135/150

 

Bloodrun with: Vectum Grooer (odd-name man.)

OCG: 40/40

PIC: 30/30

Overpower/Underpower: I find it underpowered. 27/30

Fit's "Standerds": 50/50

147/150

 

 

Darth Browarod: Fallen Sage Dude

OCG:yes 40/40

PIC:uhhhh. weird 29/30

Overpower/Underpower: Yes 30/30

Fit's "Standerds": I do believe it does. 50/50

Total: 149/150

 

Hunter With: City Night Assasian

OCG: 40/40

PIC: 30/30

Overpower/Underpower: 29/30-No big comment.

Fit's "Standerds": 50/50

Total: 149/150

 

tuffguy1992 with: Junior Dragon

OCG: Don't cap effect, face-up, hand or field. 33/40

PIC: Is that a copyright sign on the bottom? also looks squished. 24/30

Overpower/Underpower: 30/30

Fit's "Standerds": 50/50

Total: 137/150

 

Sportsplayer

OCG: DEF is only referring to the stat on a card. Not the position. 38/40

PIC: Perfe- Wait. Is that an artists sig in the bottom left corner? 27/30

Overpower/Underpower: Raise it to level 4 28/30

Fit's "Standerds": 50/50

Total: 143/150

 

 

Yes. There you have it folks. Check post 1 in a few minutes to see if you made it to the next challenge.

 

 

Hmmmm, Ruby and FiRaven tied. I never thought of that. Very well. I shall Pm you guys with a new challenge, a much easier one and have a round 1 1/2

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I'm through! Wait, my card was the most simple? Well, thats how I wanted to start. I'm glad i'm through. And I was joint 1st place in that round, too. Though,

 

Everyone make fun of Future Emperor.

 

That hurt my feelings, Zeroshot, lol.

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How am i Eliminated' date=' calculating the numbers, i should still be in, and one the tiers should be out. And you know that -.-"

 

and underpowered?

its just like a cyber valley, with the effect of torrential and heavy storm -.-"

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First off, is there anything bothering you Bloodrun? you seem a little irritable (yeah I don't know how to spell it, I'm stupid and I except that)

 

I don't see it's resemblence to Cyber Valley but Heavy Storm and Torrential Tribute don't leave an attacking monster ready to smash your Life Points. I'm sorry that you disagree with me Bloodrun.

 

Also, when I calculate the numbers I see that 148 beats 147 so I do not know what your talking about.

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How am i Eliminated' date=' calculating the numbers, i should still be in, and one the tiers should be out. And you know that -.-"

 

and underpowered?

its just like a cyber valley, with the effect of torrential and heavy storm -.-"

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First off, is there anything bothering you Bloodrun? you seem a little irritable (yeah I don't know how to spell it, I'm stupid and I except that)

 

I don't see it's resemblence to Cyber Valley but Heavy Storm and Torrential Tribute don't leave an attacking monster ready to smash your Life Points. I'm sorry that you disagree with me Bloodrun.

 

Also, when I calculate the numbers I see that 148 beats 147 so I do not know what your talking about.

 

but 147 beats two 146's, which means in fair tourny rules, both ruby and firaven are gone -.-"

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Please after this may we take this to PMs.

 

You were only trying to beat Frlf. Everone else is in their own match.

 

If Person A was trying to beat Person B

 

And Person C was trying to beat Person D

 

Only one from there corrisponding match could be eliminated.

 

If Person B beat Person A with 140 points

 

and Person C beat Person D with 120 points

 

Why would Person C be eliminated?

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Yes. Soon.

 

 

Ok guys, I was originally going to post the tie in the Realistic Card Section but I have a better way.

 

Bloodrun, since you had the highest score of all that were eliminated, your not leaving the contest yet.

I want you to grade the tied cards on a custom grading scale and post it here. Thank you for your full participation.

 

Then I will ask the loser of whatever Bloodrun graded to compare Bloodruns card to the winner's card. The winner of that matchup will move on to round 2.

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ok, custom grading scale

 

Ruby:

 

OCG: 39/40 (its Life Points)

Sentence Structure: 19/20 (First Sentence, periods or commas, dont go inside the parenthesis. Second sentence, "If attacked in Defense Position" you did not specify which card your talking about, you wouldnt need to, if it was in the same sentence. which its not)

Name: 9/10 (you have three names in one >_>)

Balance: 19/20 (surprisingly, it was so close to being balanced, but, making your opponent lose his/her monster, and lose the exact amount of ATK points, is to much)

Uniqueness: 5/5 (some parts were a little iffy, your piercing damage, is a little over used, but with the second part of the effect, it was able to slide by my radar)

 

Final: 91/95

 

FiRaven:

OCG: 39/40 (Spell or Trap Card)

Sentence Structure: 16/20 (While in Defense Position[no comma here]. If this card successfully attacks your opponent directly.)

Name: 9/10 (you would have been better off naming it Semi Fatal-Cleo)

Balance: 20/20 (the only problem that i have, is that you can special summon a higher monster during your standby phase, which in return could clear the field for the last effect.)

Uniqueness: 5/5 (for the most part, it is completely original, and if used right, rather usefull)

 

Final: 89/95

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Alright' date=' now FiRaven is out for sure.

FiRaven will Grade Bloodrun's card and Ruby's card and the one with the highest score will move on to round two. Thank you for your full participation.

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your welcome

its what we have to do, i suppose..

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Bloodrun


OCG - 3/5 double damage thing


 

Originality/Effect - 25/65

 

OK this effect does not make sense. and then is completely underpowered.

 

I was with it where we move this card to negate an attack. But if there is monster where we move it to, destroy the monster and double the damage? Wait I thought the that there is no damage from the attack because it was negated when I moved the card and who is receiving the non existent damage anyway? Now we finally move it for the 4th time and I destroy everything on the field, except his monster. And since the opponent can control when the effect happens he/she saves his/her trap and/or spell cards in his/her hand thus being to set/play all of them without worry of counters, plus be able to summon another monster. This is truly one of the most original underpowered cards I've ever seen. All the points from here are just from originality.

 

 

Picture/Name - 24/25 name weird but it is supposed to be like a real name, pic doesn't fit but it kinda does


 

My Personal Liking - 1/5 has no use in any deck I know except as the first monster summoned.


 

Total---------------------------------------> 53/100

 

Ruby
OCG - 4/5 Life Point thing


Originality/Effect - 40/65

 

Not super original but I don't know of a card with a similar effect. Also though other say it is over powered which I thought at first but then I realized I can just destroy all your other monsters the attack this card card. Do to the fact that this cards effect is mainly controlled by the opponent unless the card is set I believe it a bit underpowered but still useful.

 

Picture/Name - 21/25 Mainly the name not that I could of thought of a much better one. I would of used the word "princess" due to the crown and it would fit the effect better


 

My Personal Liking - 5/5


 

Total---------------------------------------> 70/100

 

I would just like to say a few comment about my cards judging

by Bloodrun.

 

But I do not disagree with the ruling since I believe Ruby's card is better than mine I just wanted to get a few things noted.

 

 

 

OCG: 39/40 (Spell or Trap Card)

 

Spell or Trap infers the word card so it is unnecessary to put card as seen in Spirit Reaper

 

Sentence Structure: 16/20 (While in Defense Position[no comma here].

"While in defense position"' date=' requires a comma since it is an introductory phrase of four or more words[/quote']

 

If this card successfully attacks your opponent directly.)

 

Name: 9/10 (you would have been better off naming it Semi Fatal-Cleo)

 

It is femme fatale since it is of my archetype Femme Fatale

 

Balance: 20/20 (the only problem that i have' date=' is that you can special summon a higher monster during your standby phase, which in return could clear the field for the last effect.)


 

Uniqueness: 5/5 (for the most part, it is completely original, and if used right, rather usefull)



 

Final: 89/95[/quote']

 

I just realized my card would get the highest of a D or 69.9 on my own scale.

 

So Ruby wins.

 

P.S. I believe frif left ycm.

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Where did you see this effect before? as for the originallity part?

 

Also I believe you don't fully understand the effect. Please talk with Bloodrun. I'd like the cards to be graded as fairly as possible otherwise this concept is just "Revenge"

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Bloodrun


OCG - 3/5 double damage thing


double damage thing? if you dont know what it is' date=' then how are you sure its wrong? :?[/b']

 

Originality/Effect - 25/65

 

OK this effect does not make sense. and then is completely underpowered.

 

I was with it where we move this card to negate an attack. But if there is monster where we move it to, destroy the monster and double the damage? Wait I thought the that there is no damage from the attack because it was negated when I moved the card and who is receiving the non existent damage anyway? Now we finally move it for the 4th time and I destroy everything on the field, except his monster. And since the opponent can control when the effect happens he/she saves his/her trap and/or spell cards in his/her hand thus being to set/play all of them without worry of counters, plus be able to summon another monster. This is truly one of the most original underpowered cards I've ever seen. All the points from here are just from originality.

ok, ever heard of Senet Switch? read that, then youll understand the switching parts. ever heard of the new gladiator beasts, or whatever set these cards come out of, there are spell and trap cards that say when this card is destroy while its face down, do such and such, this effect works perfectly with that, as well as effects like pryamid of light. btw, the grading for this section, is totally blown out of perportions >_>

 

Picture/Name - 24/25 name weird but it is supposed to be like a real name, pic doesn't fit but it kinda does


Picture: the guys on a machine that is moving away from a bomb, whats not to get? though i wont even try to argue this one, since i only lost 1

 

My Personal Liking - 1/5 has no use in any deck I know except as the first monster summoned.


explained in the originality part

 

Total---------------------------------------> 53/100

 

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Ruby
OCG - 4/5 Life Point thing


Originality/Effect - 40/65

 

Not super original but I don't know of a card with a similar effect. Also though other say it is over powered which I thought at first but then I realized I can just destroy all your other monsters the attack this card card. Do to the fact that this cards effect is mainly controlled by the opponent unless the card is set I believe it a bit underpowered but still useful.

 

Picture/Name - 21/25 Mainly the name not that I could of thought of a much better one. I would of used the word "princess" due to the crown and it would fit the effect better


 

My Personal Liking - 5/5


 

Total---------------------------------------> 70/100

 

I would just like to say a few comment about my cards judging

by Bloodrun.

 

But I do not disagree with the ruling since I believe Ruby's card is better than mine I just wanted to get a few things noted.

 

 

 

 

OCG: 39/40 (Spell or Trap Card)

 

Spell or Trap infers the word card so it is unnecessary to put card as seen in Spirit Reaper

spirit reaper lists more the just spell or trap' date=' it lists moster as well, therefore allowing it to be without the word CARD, which still applies for your card >_>[/b']

 

Sentence Structure: 16/20 (While in Defense Position[no comma here].

"While in defense position"' date=' requires a comma since it is an introductory phrase of four or more words

[b']no, its not listing an action, its not doing anything

 

If this card successfully attacks your opponent directly.)

 

Name: 9/10 (you would have been better off naming it Semi Fatal-Cleo)

 

It is femme fatale since it is of my archetype Femme Fatale

and? if you listed your mislikings about my name' date=' why cant i :?[/b']

 

Balance: 20/20 (the only problem that i have, is that you can special summon a higher monster during your standby phase, which in return could clear the field for the last effect.)


 

Uniqueness: 5/5 (for the most part, it is completely original, and if used right, rather usefull)



 

Final: 89/95

 

 

 

I just realized my card would get the highest of a D or 69.9 on my own scale.

 

So Ruby wins.

 

P.S. I believe frif left ycm.

 

and yes, frlf did leave YCM, so what happens to his spot? :?

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OK So senet switch helps it trigger its effect better.

 

It still leaves the attacking monster on the field unopposed during the opponents turn.

 

This is one of the cards that rely too much on the perfect situation.

 

With senet switch in your deck you add a card that will be useless in most situations.

 

This card still contradicts itself when moving to an occupied space since it negates the attack therefore being no damage.

 

Since it is is worded double the damage taken, doubling zero is still zero.

 

Also I said this card is very original. The problem was it contradicting it self with bad wording, being under powered, and the opponent has full control over when the effect happens.

 

It isn't a flip effect thus when set it can't activate its effect since it is targeted while face down.

 

I fully understand what this card is an what it could be.

 

No it wasn't revenge I grade very hard, but I do believe I should have raised both cards by 10.

 

Also, my card wouldn't score that well either. All my card is is an altered Spirit Reaper.

 

Also if you didn't realize I knew I'd lose since I got put against Ruby.

 

Honestly you both grade to easy. My card did not deserve a 146/150 or an 89/95.

 

Oh what about Spirit of Touma who won with 146.

 

So anyway I believe Ruby beats me.

 

and Bloodrun gets Frif's spot. Check the leaving thread frif gave his spot to Bloodrun.

 

P.S. Bloodrun now that you explained that it is an explosion back there you get a point for that, It looked like celestial lights to me at first.

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Honestly you both grade to easy. My card did not deserve a 146/150 or an 89/95.

 

 

 

haha, quite contrare my friend.

you dont give yourself enough credit :?

seriously.

becuase, if you look close enough at my card, you will see 3 mistakes

slected, may, and "if the next adjacent"

 

but meh

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