Valkyrie Lupia Blitzer Posted June 28, 2008 Report Share Posted June 28, 2008 Drazorics are an archetype based on the use of Equip Spell Cards. Drazorics incude monsters with "Drazoric", "Magne" or "Brethren of Batonnage" (btw, Brethren of Batonnage is a random name) in their names. Blade Magne-Snake1700/1000Level 4FIRE AttributeMetal/EffectWhen a card is destroyed when this card attacks, add 1 Equip Spell card to your hand. Drazoric Hydra Rimeas?/0Level 9WATER AttributeSea Serpent/Fusion/Effect2 or more "Drazoric", "Magne" or "Brethren of Batonnage" monstersThis card's Type is also Metal. This card's ATK becomes the number of Fusion Materials this card had x 1000 + the number of Equip cards equipped to all of this card's Fusion Materials x 500. Once per turn, you can select 1 Equip Spell Card or a card that states it is equippable by its effect and add it to your hand. The select card cannot be equipped by this card. Smashing Brethren of Batonnage1500/1000Level 4EARTH AttributeMetal/EffectWhen this card attacks a Defense Position monster, inflict damage to your opponent equal to half the monster's Defense, then destroy the monster by this card's effect. If the monster had 2000 DEF or higher, destroy 1 Spell or Trap card on the field. If there are no Spell or Trap cards on your opponent's side of the field, increase the DEF of the monster this card battles with by 1000. Retrieval Brethren of Batonnage1200/0Level 4WIND AttributeMetal/EffectThis card cannot attack directly. When this card destroys a monster as a result of battle, sends it to the Graveyard, or inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent, draw 1 card for each of these you have done. For each Equip Spell card drawn by one of this card's effects, draw 1 card. Magnet Armor Spheal (counts as a Magne monster because of the "Magnet"1600/300Level 4WATER AttributeBeast/TunerThis cyber armor-clad Spheal was deployed by the Drazoric forces because of their ability to roll out quite easily and because they are well-rounded. (Bad puns?) Mental Spheal Daemon (lol another pun)2600/3000Level 9WATER AttibutePsychic/Synchro/Effect1 Tuner Monster + 1 or more non-Tuner MonstersIf this card destroys an opponent's monster by battle, select 1 Equip Spell and add it to your hand for each 1000 ATK the opponent's monster had. By discarding 1 Equip Spell from your hand, negate the activation and effect of a Spell or Trap Card that targets 1 face-up "Drazoric", "Magne", or "Brethren of Batonnage" monster you control and send it back to the top of your opponent's deck. Drazoric Bomber Nucrealis1000/1900Level 4FIRE AttributeMetal/Warrior/Effect (lol double types...heheheh)When an Equip Spell is activated, select you or your opponent and inflict 500 damage to that player. Increase the other's Life Points by 500. Magnetic Parasite StrikeEquip SpellIncrease the ATK of a "Drazoric", "Magne", or "Brethren of Batonnage" monster equipped with this card by 600 and increase its DEF by 800. Once per turn, you must pay 500 Life Points or you may not attack with the monster eqquipped with this card. Drazoric FacepalmContinuous SpellActivate only if you control a face-up "Drazoric Paw." Increase the ATK of all monsters equipped with a "Drazoric Paw" by 500. All "Drazoric Paws" on your side of the field have their original ATK doubled and can attack directly, but you take double damage in battles involving them. If your opponent does an illegal move and you currently have a Yu-Gi-Oh! rulebook, you win the Duel. If the opponent accuses you of cheating after the Duel, you automatically win all Duels involving him and you. Drazoric Dragon Teishubuki (Weaponmaster) ATK: ?DEF: ?Level 10FIRE AttributeDragon/Effect1 monster+1 or more cards equipped to the monsterThis card can only be Special Summoned by Fusion Summon, and only with "Eternal Weapon Bond." This card's ATK and DEF is equal to the ATK and DEF of the monster used to Fusion Summon this card, plus 100 for each card equipped to it. This card gains the effects of its Fusion Materials. Negate the effects of monsters this card destroys as a result of battle. This card inflicts Piercing damage. Smash MagnetopATK: 1800DEF: 1500Level 4EARTH AttributeMachine/EffectIf this card attacks a Defense Position monster, destroy it by this card's effect instead. This card may then attack once again. Brethren of BatonnageATK: 1500DEF: 1000Level 4LIGHT AttributeMachine/EffectOnce per turn, you may discard 1 card to take control of 1 of your opponent's monsters. The monster cannot attack, be Released under any condition, cannot change its Battle Position, and is destroyed at the end of the turn. Ultimate Brethren of BatonnageATK: 2500DEF: 2100Level 7LIGHT AttributeMachine/Effect"Sonic Magne-Snake"+"Brethren of Batonnage"When this card destroys a monster as a result of battle and sends it to the Graveyard, you may Special Summon it in face-up Attack Position to your side of the field. Multi-Element MagnetopATK: 1800DEF: 1500Level 4FIRE AttributeMachine/EffectThis card's Attribute is also treated as WATER, EARTH, and WIND. When this card is destroyed as a result of battle, you may pay 1000 Life Points to Special Summon this card in Attack Position with 2000 ATK to your side of the field. Spherous Magne-SnakeATK: 1500DEF: 1200Level 4EARTH AttributeMachine/EffectYou may discard 1 card from your hand to destroy 1 monster on the field. This effect can only be used once per "Spherous Magne-Snake" until it has been removed from your side of the field. Drazoric PawATK: 300DEF: 300Level 1FIRE AttributeDragon/EffectDuring battle with this card and a monster, or during your Main Phase, you may instead negate the attack and equip this card to the monster. You may either:-Increase the ATK of the monster by 500.-Decrease the ATK and DEF of the monster by 500. Drazoric WingsEquip Spell Increase the ATK and DEF of the monster equipped by 300. When this card is destroyed and you have at least 1 card in your deck, you may add this card to your deck. Shuffle your deck afterwards. Drazoric SpineIncrease the ATK and DEF of the equipped monster by 200. Once per turn, during your Draw Phase, place 1 Drazoric Counter on this card (max. 1). When the equipped monster is about to be destroyed, remove 1 Drazoric Counter from this card to negate the effect and destroy the card with the effect. Drazoric ChainsEquip SpellSelect 1 monster on the field. Increase the ATK of the equipped monster by 500 and decrease the ATK of the selected monster by 700. When either monster is destroyed, destroy this card. When this card is destroyed, destroy both selected monsters. When this card is sent to the Graveyard from the field, you lose 500 Life Points. Sonic Magne-Snake (errata)ATK: 1500DEF: 1200Level 4WIND AttributeMachine/EffectOnce per turn, you may send this card to the Graveyard to destroy 1 monster. If this card and the destroyed monster are Fusion Materials for a card in your Extra Deck, then Special Summon that monster from your Fusion Deck. (This Special Summon is treated as a Fusion Summon.) Drazoric Knight TeishubukiATK: ?DEF: ?Level 10FIRE AttributeWarrior/Fusion/Effect"Drazoric Dragon Teishubuki"+"Ultimate Brethren of Batonnage"This card's ATK and DEF are equal to the total ATK of its Fusion Materials. This card gains the effects of its Fusion Materials. Eternal Weapon BondNormal SpellSend, from your side of the field to your Graveyard, Fusion Materials for "Drazoric Dragon Teishubuki" to Fusion Summon 1 "Drazoric Dragon Teishubuki" form your Fusion Deck. Garuda Magnetop DragonATK: 1500DEF: 2500Level 9WIND AttributeWinged Beast/Synchro/Effect1 Tuner Monster + 1 or more non-Tuner MonstersOne of the non-Tuner monsters that has to be Released for the Synchro Summoning of this card is a "Magnetop" monster. This card gains 150 ATK for each card in your Graveyard. If a card in your Graveyard is removed from play, send all your removed from play cards to your Graveyard. Drazoric Guardian HogoshanobukiATK: 2050DEF: 0Level 4EARTH AttributeRock/EffectDestroy this card if there is no Equip card on your side of the field. As long as this card is on the field, Equip cards on your side of the field cannot be destroyed by effects. When this card is Summoned, you may Release a monster on your side of the field. If you do, return 1"magne", "Drazoric", or "Brethren of Batonnage" monster in your Graveyard to your hand. Drazoric Samurai TeishunokariATK: 500DEF: 1000Level 4EARTH AttributeWarrior/EffectIncrease this card's ATK by 800 for each card equipped to this monster. This card cannot be destroyed as a result of battle and stays in Attack Position as long as this card does not have cards equipped. You take twice as much battle damage during battles involving this card as long as this card doesn't have cards equipped. Drazoric Centaur RaidosATK: 3000DEF: 2000Level 9EARTH AttributeBeast/Fusion/Effect"Spherous Magne-Snake"+"Brethren of Batonnage"+"Sonic Magne-Snake"This card can be Fusion Summoned by removing the above Fusion Materials on your side of the field or hand from play. You may remove from play 1 card in your hand to destroy 2 cards on your opponent's side of the field. Drazoric Miner GolemATK: 4000DEF: 0Level 6EARTH AttributeRock/Machine/EffectThis card cannot attack while this card has 3000 or more ATK. You may reduce this card's ATK by an amount to destroy 1 monster on the field with the same amount of ATK. Drazoric Chain StrikeNormal SpellRelease 1 "Drazoric", "magne", or Brethren of Batonnage" monster on your side of the field. Destroy 1 monster on your opponent's side of the field with equal or lower Level than the Released monster and inflict damage to your opponent equal to the ATK of the destroyed monster. Simple Magne-GateNormal TrapYou can only activate this card when a "Drazoric", "magne," or "Brethren of Batonnage" monster on your side of the field is attacked. Negate the attack and inflict damage to your opponent equal to half its ATK. Drazoric Phoenix Kaminagi (Divine Sword)4000/3400Level 11FIRE AttributeSteel/Unite"Ultimate Brethren of Batonnage" is required to Unite Summon this card. Only "Drazoric," "Magne," or "Brethren of Batonnage" monsters can be Tributed to Unite Summon this card. When this card is Summoned, decrease this card's ATK and DEF by 2000, then increase this card's ATK and DEF by 500 for each monster used to Unite Summon this card. Once per turn, or when this card attacks, you may either:[*]Select 1 Equip Spell card or Union monster in your Deck and equip it to this card.[*]Select 1 card equipped to a monster and equip it to another correct target.[*]Send 1 equipped card to the Graveyard to destroy 1 card on the field. Drazoric Hero - Offshoot1900/900Level 4FIRE AttributeSteel/Warrior/EffectThis card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Releasing 1 monster. When this card is Summoned, destroy 2 cards on the field. Drazoric Hero - The Dead Phoenix3000/3400Level 11FIRE AttributeSteel/Warrior/Extra/EffectThis card can only be Special Summoned when "Drazoric Phoenix Kaminagi" is destroyed. When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, draw 2 cards, and then Special Summon 1 "Drazoric Phoenix Kaminagi" from your Graveyard, and increase its ATK by 2000. When this card is in the Graveyard, you may Release 1 "Drazoric Phoenix Kaminagi" you control to Special Summon this card. Increase this card's ATK by 200 for each "Drazoric," "magne," or "Brethren of Batonnage" monster in your Graveyard. Metal-type monsters are monsters which are composed of a lot of metal, but aren't neccessarily Machines. Link to comment
yeti100 Posted June 28, 2008 Report Share Posted June 28, 2008 Smashing Brethren of Batonnage is really overpowered you may want to change it so that it does piercing damage and then have the spell and trap destroy activate when the card inflicts battle damage. for Blade Magne-Snake you may want to change it to "if this card destroys a monster as a result of battle but otherwise it is fine. for Retrieval Brethren of Batonnage you may want to restrict it to either dmage or destruction to activate its effect and then e.g. when this card destroys a monster as a result of battle draw 1 card if it is an equip spell show it to your opponent and draw another card" but otherwise is a good effect. as for Drazoric Hydra Rimeas i understand the effect i am just trying to think of an easier way to word it. but still some great ideasEDIT: had an idea for Drazoric Hydra Rimeas This card's ATK becomes the number of Fusion Materials used to summon this card x 700 + this card also gains 350 atk point *the amount of equip spell in your graveyard when this card is summoned. Once per turn, you may select 1 Equip Spell Card or a card that can be equipped to a monster and add it to your hand. The select card cannot be equipped by this card. right i think that makes it a bit clearer what you meant, hope i got it right Link to comment
Valkyrie Lupia Blitzer Posted June 28, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 28, 2008 Smashing Brethren of Batonnage is really overpowered you may want to change it so that it does piercing damage and then have the spell and trap destroy activate when the card inflicts battle damage. for Blade Magne-Snake you may want to change it to "if this card destroys a monster as a result of battle but otherwise it is fine. for Retrieval Brethren of Batonnage you may want to restrict it to either dmage or destruction to activate its effect and then e.g. when this card destroys a monster as a result of battle draw 1 card if it is an equip spell show it to your opponent and draw another card" but otherwise is a good effect. as for Drazoric Hydra Rimeas i understand the effect i am just trying to think of an easier way to word it. but still some great ideasEDIT: had an idea for Drazoric Hydra Rimeas This card's ATK becomes the number of Fusion Materials used to summon this card x 700 + this card also gains 350 atk point *the amount of equip spell in your graveyard when this card is summoned. Once per turn' date=' you may select 1 Equip Spell Card or a card that can be equipped to a monster and add it to your hand. The select card cannot be equipped by this card. right i think that makes it a bit clearer what you meant, hope i got it right[/quote'] Let's say 1 have 2 Retrieval Brethrens of Batonnage. There is an Axe of Despair in the Graveyard. Also, there is Axe of Despair equipped to the 2 RBoBs. Then 1 activate Polymerization. I send both RBoBs to the Graveyard to Fusion Summon Drazoric Hydra Rimeas. Now, if I changed the text to what you said, its ATK would be 2050. But by the text I had, its ATK would be 1700. (Btw, what a ripoff. I'm going to change its text a bit.) Link to comment
yeti100 Posted June 28, 2008 Report Share Posted June 28, 2008 okay fair enough i was just trying to make the text a little less complicated Link to comment
texaschickenlittle Posted June 28, 2008 Report Share Posted June 28, 2008 Nice cards, but some OCG and Grammar mistakes. 1. It's can, not may in card text.2. In Smashing Brethren, replace or with and in the last sentence. It's "1 Spell or Trap Card", not "1 Spell and Trap Card" (the latter would make it even more overpowered).3. For Blade Mange - Snake, this wording would probably be better: Whenever this card destroys a monster by battle, add 1 Equip Spell card to your hand. Other than that I don't see any problems (otherthan Smashing Brethren's overpowered effect). Link to comment
Valkyrie Lupia Blitzer Posted June 29, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 29, 2008 Nice cards' date=' but some OCG and Grammar mistakes. 1. It's [i']can[/i], not may in card text.2. In Smashing Brethren, replace or with and in the last sentence. It's "1 Spell or Trap Card", not "1 Spell and Trap Card" (the latter would make it even more overpowered).3. For Blade Mange - Snake, this wording would probably be better: Whenever this card destroys a monster by battle, add 1 Equip Spell card to your hand. Other than that I don't see any problems (otherthan Smashing Brethren's overpowered effect).Time to explain the danged Blade Magne-Snake. So...what if a card was equipped to Blade Magne-Snake that allowed you to destroy 1 Spell or Trap card on the field? (This is only an example.) Then a card would be destroyed, and BM-S's effect activates. If it was "destroy a monster as a result of battle.", then during the previous example, its effect wouldn't have been activated. And fine, I'll erratta my cards for the rest. EDIT: Added Magnet Armor Spheal, Mental Spheal Daemon, and Drazoric Bomber Nucrealis. Link to comment
yeti100 Posted June 29, 2008 Report Share Posted June 29, 2008 the tuner monster is ok i like the puns, the only thing you might consider is making it a lower level and less atk like most other tuners. mental sphael daemon is a good card i like it. Drazoric Bomber Nucrealis is great you might want to however change its effect to just targetting your opponent because at the minute it is kinda confusing trying to work out who is being targetted Link to comment
Valkyrie Lupia Blitzer Posted June 30, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 30, 2008 Added Drazoric Facepalm and Magnetic Parasite Strike. EDIT: Added LOT of cards. Link to comment
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