♥ ЅϯᵲåώӀӞ℮ᴙʀɣ−ɴɨɨ−ƈħåɴ ♥ Posted September 25, 2008 Report Share Posted September 25, 2008 Alright, I'll judge. OCG is fine' date=' picture is fine. Balanced. 8/10 OCG isn't very good, but picture is fine. Effect's nothing new. 6.5/10 Okay, Blue, you win. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted September 25, 2008 Report Share Posted September 25, 2008 Wait, whoa! The OCG is good >.>I got a few "May"s instead of "can"s, but, it's good >.>Also...A judge is not supposed to help a contestant with their card in any way. I just noticed this happend. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥ ЅϯᵲåώӀӞ℮ᴙʀɣ−ɴɨɨ−ƈħåɴ ♥ Posted September 25, 2008 Report Share Posted September 25, 2008 Pfft, just ONE error. I could help you with ONE too, but that wouldn't help the other major ones you have.Here, I'll help you: When this card attacks an opponent's face-down Defense position, you may pay 400 Life Points to destroy the card immediately with this cards effect. During battle between this card and as opponent's face-down Defense Position monster with a lower DEF than the ATK of this card, you can choose 1 of the following effects:Inflict the difference as battle damage to your opponent's Life Points.Increase your Life Points by the difference. SHOULD BE: If this card attacks a face-down Defense Position monster, you can pay 400 Life Points to destroy the monster with this card's effect without applying damage calculation. During battle between this attacking card and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card, activate one of the following effects:Inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent.Increase your Life Points by an amount equal to the difference. Notice that you have LOTS of errors. You would've lost anyway, even if I didn't help out Blue. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted September 25, 2008 Report Share Posted September 25, 2008 His errors: This card can only attack if no monsters you control have attacked this turn. ---thats wrongi know that is, i have ALWAYS seen that different Should be: This card cannot declare an attack unless no monsters you control have declared an attack this turn. without Damage Calculation and end your Battle Phase.---thats off as well It's missing APPLYING When this card has no Spell Counters on it----thats off too Shoudl be:If there are no Spell Counters on this card, At the End Phase of the turn you use this effect,----another error Should be:During the End Phase of a turn that this card effect was activated, Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥ ЅϯᵲåώӀӞ℮ᴙʀɣ−ɴɨɨ−ƈħåɴ ♥ Posted September 25, 2008 Report Share Posted September 25, 2008 Nonetheless, you STILL have more than HE does. Ones that are HUGE. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted September 25, 2008 Report Share Posted September 25, 2008 SHOULD BE: If this card attacks a face-down Defense Position monster' date=' you can pay 400 Life Points to destroy the monster with this card's effect without applying damage calculation. During battle between this [b']attacking[/b] card and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card, activate one of the following effects:Inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent's Life Points.Increase your Life Points by an amount equal to the difference. Notice that you have LOTS of errors. You would've lost anyway, even if I didn't help out Blue. Bold = wrong Bold italic = YOU forgot somthing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥ ЅϯᵲåώӀӞ℮ᴙʀɣ−ɴɨɨ−ƈħåɴ ♥ Posted September 25, 2008 Report Share Posted September 25, 2008 I copy + pasted from Ninja Grandmaster Sasuke (while changing it a bit to mention face-down), and Bitelon. It is correct, according to real life cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted September 25, 2008 Report Share Posted September 25, 2008 How old is that card? I use a mix of new and old OCG, mostly new. Your card may be outdated. I'm not saying I should win. I know the effect wasn't what it could have been. but I KNOW my OCG was not nearly as bad as you make it sound. Your fixes actually make more OCG/Grammar mistakes than it had... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥ ЅϯᵲåώӀӞ℮ᴙʀɣ−ɴɨɨ−ƈħåɴ ♥ Posted September 25, 2008 Report Share Posted September 25, 2008 Yeah well, like I said, I didn't actually READ the OCG guidelines, as I use real cards to do my effects, and it's worked out probably 95% so far. I'm sorry if I offended you saying that your OCG is bad. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted September 25, 2008 Report Share Posted September 25, 2008 Meh, it's no prob.It just struck a cord when you said his OCG was good, and mine was not, while, from reading it and all, it was not true. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥ ЅϯᵲåώӀӞ℮ᴙʀɣ−ɴɨɨ−ƈħåɴ ♥ Posted September 25, 2008 Report Share Posted September 25, 2008 Yeah well, I briefly skimmed the effects, because I was doing something else. Truthfully saying, I only used at most 1 minute to view your cards, because it was pretty obvious that Blue won already, and I didn't need to do much else. I'll use more time to judge, next time. Just really busy right now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted September 25, 2008 Report Share Posted September 25, 2008 How was it obviouse he won? Longer effect? If thats how you judge... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥ ЅϯᵲåώӀӞ℮ᴙʀɣ−ɴɨɨ−ƈħåɴ ♥ Posted September 25, 2008 Report Share Posted September 25, 2008 Nah, not that. I just read the effect itself, and I thought it suited the card well. Yours was very bland and overused. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted September 25, 2008 Report Share Posted September 25, 2008 Overused by me XD I didn't have alot of time to make a card anyway, alot of school today >_< BTW, Browarod rates the card 13.27/13.69...xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥ ЅϯᵲåώӀӞ℮ᴙʀɣ−ɴɨɨ−ƈħåɴ ♥ Posted September 25, 2008 Report Share Posted September 25, 2008 What? Oookkayyy then... Want to have a competition? Right here, right now? I got the perfect idea for one. And it's not too difficult. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted September 25, 2008 Report Share Posted September 25, 2008 Umm..Ok?I'll see if I got time.Whats the compition? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥ ЅϯᵲåώӀӞ℮ᴙʀɣ−ɴɨɨ−ƈħåɴ ♥ Posted September 25, 2008 Report Share Posted September 25, 2008 2 Light Effect Monsters, doesn't matter which type. Just no Synchros, Fusions, or Dragons. That's all. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted September 25, 2008 Report Share Posted September 25, 2008 Why no Dragons with you all the time?And, ok, I accept. When do we have to turn these in? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥ ЅϯᵲåώӀӞ℮ᴙʀɣ−ɴɨɨ−ƈħåɴ ♥ Posted September 25, 2008 Report Share Posted September 25, 2008 I don't care. How about in the next like, 2 hours? I gotta go eat right now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyub Posted September 25, 2008 Report Share Posted September 25, 2008 O.o That was random. W/e. My cards suck, yeah, got a problem with that, Yankee? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥ ЅϯᵲåώӀӞ℮ᴙʀɣ−ɴɨɨ−ƈħåɴ ♥ Posted September 25, 2008 Report Share Posted September 25, 2008 Lol.. Ooh... Somebody's mad. Anyways, it seems Yankee's not here anymore. Blue, want to challenge me instead? Same rules as the ones I stated before for Yankee. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyub Posted September 26, 2008 Report Share Posted September 26, 2008 Yeah, I'm mad. >.> But not at Yankee. Just taking it out on Yankee. :D Though I do feel a bit slanted that you seek to put me down, Yankee, when you obviously have the upper hand. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥ ЅϯᵲåώӀӞ℮ᴙʀɣ−ɴɨɨ−ƈħåɴ ♥ Posted September 26, 2008 Report Share Posted September 26, 2008 I'm going to sleep now. I'll challenge you tomorrow, Blue. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Hunter™ Posted September 26, 2008 Report Share Posted September 26, 2008 I'm still in this contest right? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted September 26, 2008 Report Share Posted September 26, 2008 Yeah' date=' I'm mad. >.> But not at Yankee. Just taking it out on Yankee. :D Though I do feel a bit slanted that you seek to put me down, Yankee, when you obviously have the upper hand.[/quote']pssh, I wasn't putting you down. I was just poed that apparently my grammar was bad and your wasn't, thats all. I wasn't putting you down persay. I'm still in this contest right? I belive so, yes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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