Huntar! Posted June 22, 2008 Report Share Posted June 22, 2008 [align=center]Here, in the land of Yugiko, there is a land filled with too many people, too many pokemon, and too much conflict. Some people dont use their pokemon for anything other than companionship and everyday life. Some people battle once in a while, then stoped. Some people, battle rarely at all. Some people, did nothing else but battle.. There was rarely peace in Yugiko, only peace maybe once a decade, when the strongest trainer made alliences and took over everyone, then, they eventually fall and back to war. There were 10 legendary trainers in Yugiko, they kept the peace, prevented war, stopped it in the middle. They were, the moderators. OsirisBrowarodKazeFrunkTyHarunoUmbraYugikioBhimSalty They were the best. They kept the peace, but not with eachother. They all had their own style, their own way of doing what they do. Some kept the peace, in their way, their beliefs. Some of the great moderators were not good. They kept peace, by convincing the side they liked to back off. Not by force, or influence on both sides. They were the dark moderators... There were 4 organizations that arose after the fall of the last government. There were the Stars, the Reds, the galaxy, and the earths. Each one wanted to do something different, and each one would do whatever it takes to achieve their goals. They each had 1 of the 4 great trainers, that were to obsessed with war and power to be chosen as moderators, they were equal in strength. Star had Anthony, the brilliant and cunning dark leader of the Star Squad. His chain of command were named after Gems, he was obbsessed with wealth, and power. He had a good heart, that was just tainted with greed. He used to be Hunter's best friend and rival. Red had Remix. Remix was cruel, vindictive, sly and elusive. He could never be tracked to one single spot. He never left trails, and always hid when others came after him. He is strong, because he holds no mercy to those who are in his way. He'll do whatever it takes. The galaxy had Meti. Meti was a smart, differnent, kind of leader. He was not greedy or dark like remix, nor having a pure heart. He was somewhere inbetween. He was not turely sure where he belonged. He got confused to the point that he did not know which group to join, so, he made his own. Now he wants a part of the action. The earth had Bloodrun, he was kind hearted, wise, and likable. He helped everyone, and never got frusturated.He always remained calm, cool, and collected. He did have his goals. He believed he was always right, so his beliefs and goals, had to be right. He would do anything. Anything at all, to fufill his 'destiny'. --------------------------------------------- our story begins, here in Enterodux, the town where all new trainers go. We meet Hunter, a smart young man, who has a nac for pokemon and leadership. He is accompanied by his close friends, James, Glasstin, and Frilf. Hunter was obviously the leader of the group. James was the inspirational one, he made everyone feel good about themselves, he was a pokemon breeder. And a good one at that. He is a great trainer too. Hard to match his skill. Glasstin was a great friend, very dependable, wise, and you could always talk to him. He did whatever he could to help you if you asked. Very kind and an ace trainer. Frilf is not the best trainer. Frilf has minor issues raising his pokemon. He is a year younger than Hunter and is still learning the trade. Hunter is teaching him the ropes. He is a smart kid, and knows how to get you when you least expect it. Hunter:James:Glasstin:Frilf:Buffer: Anthony:Meti: ----------------------[/align] [spoiler=Chapter 1 (Dang Frilf)] [align=center]*Hunter and the rest of the gang arrive in Enterodux, the city of beginnings and where most new trainers go.* Hunter: "Ahh. So, this is Yugiko." James: "I guess so. Thats what the map sais." Hunter: "I could go without the sarcasm. >.<" James: "Dont be such a party pooper. :P" Hunter: "If you could take something seriously!" Glasstin: "Cut it out you two. Dont make me throw you overboard." Hunter & James: "Noes!.. We'll stop.. okay?" Glasstin: "Lol.. wow. okay then. just.. stop argueing, or I'll have to teach you all a lesson. :P" Frilf: "Hmmm. What did I do?" Hunter: "What didn't you do? You ate the snacks, you dumped the new pokeballs in the ocean, you are uber annoying.. must I continue?" James: "Dont be like that to the kid. He is still kinda young." *Frilf runs into the crowd.* James: "See what you've done now? YOu made him run away." Hunter: "Well, maybe if he wasn't such a wuss.." James: "That is no excuse. He's just a kid. Hes still sensative." Hunter: "Whatever.. Lets go find him. James, search downtown. Glasstin, search east side. I'll look around here." James & Glasstin: "Right." *Hunter, James, and Glasstin run off in 3 directions looking for poor Frilf.*[/align] [spoiler=Chapter 2 (Downtown, James and Buffer)][align=center] *James went downtown. He goes off in search of Frilf, who he believes went to park to hide or calm himself down.* James: "Frilf? Frifl. Frilf? You there?" Stranger: "Is something wrong?" James: "Yes, Sir. My friend Frilf is missing in the city and me and my friends are looking for him." Stranger: "Oh dear.. That is quite bad. Maybe me and my pokemon can help." *Stranger throws pokeball. Out comes a Haunter." Stranger: "Haunter, go.. Follow.. wait, whats your name?" James: "lol. It is James." Stranger: "Haunter, go. Follow James and help him find his friend. *James and Haunter run off toward the park, while the stranger and his other pokemon go toward the plaza.* James: "Haunter, could you go search around the trees? I'll go look around the pond." *Haunter goes off and runs into a frusturated man wearing a Silver jacket with a large black star on it.* Star Man: "Hmm. A Haunter. Maybe Anthony wont be so Ticked if I take it to him.. hmm..." Haunter: "HAUNTER?" *Haunter runs off toward James.* James: "Haunter? What is it? Did you find Frilf?" *Haunter turns around* Star Man: "Hey, give me that Haunter or else." James: "What are you gonna do about it?" Star Man: "Just guess..." *Star Man throws a black pokeball. Out of it comes his pokemon, it was a Zangoose.* Star Man: "Zangoose, get that Haunter!" James: "Hmmph.. So you'd think." James: "Go. I choose you, Mareep!." *James throws the pokeball, it bounces off of the Star Man and lands on the ground, out of it comes a Lovely Mareep.* Star Man: "You just made me angry. That is not a smart thing to do." James: "Lets go." James: "Mareep, use Thundershock!" *A huge blast of lightning came from mareep's tail, aimed at Zangoose.* Star Man: "Hmm.. Zangoose, use Double Team." *Zangoose moves so fast, it appears to be 6 Zangoose there. The blast hits a false Zangoose.* Star Man: "Fail." James: "Mareep, use Iron Tail!" *Mareep jumps in the air, and swings her tail at Zangoose, knocking him in the air.* James: "Before it falls, use spark." *Mareep jumps close to Zangoose, it releases a shock of pure energy into Zangoose.* Star Man: "What was that? Zangoose, use Crush Claw." *Zangoose runs to the side of Mareep, thrusting his Claw into Mareep. Mareep is sent into the air* Star Man: "Now, Zangoose, finish it, use Fury Attack!" *Zangoose dashes underneath Mareep, it jumps and rapidly slams its claws into mareep 6 or 7 times. Mareep falls to the ground.* James: "MAREEP?!?" Star Man: "Now, hand over the Haunter, or I'll just have to take your pathetic Mareep instead." James: "You wish. Haunter, do you know how to battle?" *Haunter nodds in agreement.* James: "Haunter, use Shadow Ball!" *Haunter charges its energy, and releases a large sphere of Dark Energy at Zangoose.* James: "Hahaha. Now, your done." *The sphere hits Zangoose head on. Zangoose never attempted to doge it. Smoke of all kinds fills the area.* Star Man: "Are you an imbeceil? Ghost type attacks are unnaffective against Normal Pokemon." James: "We'll just have to try something different then, wont we? Haunter, use Sludge!" *Several Liters of Pure toxic Sludge are poured out of Hauner's mouth at 40 kilometers an hour, instantly coming into contact with Zangoose.* James: "Ha. Try being noneffected by that. :P" *The sludge was a direct hit on Zangoose. It was slammed against the ground and made a small crater. It was obvious that he was seriously injured.* Star Man: "Ok.. You've won this one. I'll remember this, next time you wont be so lucky." *Star Man runs away, dropping something as he ran.* James: "Hmm. What is this?" *He picks it up. He sees it is an automated ID Card for the Star Squad. He and reads it aloud. Member Name: BufferStar Squad Rank: GeneralPokemon Team:Zangoose [X]Furret [X]Seadra [X]Dodrio [+] It seems that he only has 1 pokemon left unhurt. So, to protect himself and his pokemon, he apparently ran..* James: "Frilf? Are you around? Frilf. Frilf?"[/align] [spoiler=Chapter 3 (Forest Quarrel)][align=center]*Glasstin goes off to the east side, looking for Frilf* Glasstin: "Hey, Frilf. You there buddy?" Stranger: "Hey, I just met a boy named James, he was looking for a kid named Frilf too." Glasstin: "Did he find him yet?" Stranger: "Not that I know of. I let my Haunter help him and I came to the market here in the East Side." Glasstin: "Hmm... Thanks Sir, I'll keep looking." Stranger: "No problem." *Glasstin keeps walking, shouting "Frlf? You there?", every few minuites or so." Glasstin: "Hey, what if I got some help out here.. hmm.. Go, I choose you, Lickatung!" Lickatung: "Licka-Licka" Glasstin: "Lickatung, go search over there, by the woods, ok?" Lickatung: "Licka... Tung" *Lickatung reluctantly waddles over toward the forest, until she is eventually carried into the forest, by the smell of a small party.* Galaxy Man: "Pshh.. what a pathetic Lickatung.. Its all fat, it has to waddle." Lickatung: "LICKATUNG?!?!" Galaxy Man: "What are you gonna do to me? Huh? Worthless blob of fat." *Lickatung shoots his toung up into the air, swinging it around until it knocked over a branch. It picks it up with its tounge.* Galaxy Man: "Ok.. You have a stick... now what?" *Lickatung chucks the log into the air, it lands near the east side marketplace* Glasstin: "Hmm.. It got into some trouble. Frilf will have to wait." *Glasstin starts running into the forest* Glasstin: "Lickatung? You there buddy?" Lickatung: "Licka-Licka-TUNG!" *Glasstin finds Lickatung, he looks over at the trainer.* Glasstin: "What do you think your doing? Do you want to be schooled in front of your friends over there?" Galaxy Man: "You sure do got alot of nerve, dont ya kid?" Glasstin: "You can have nerve when your as good as me." Galaxy Man: "Prove it kid.. Lets rumble." *Galaxy Man throws a pokeball, out of it comes a Porygon* Porygon: "Pory..GON" Galaxy Man: "Ok. Now I've got my Porygon.. Give up, or get beat." Glasstin: "Lickatung, are you ready to teach this goon a thing or two?" *Lickatung nodds in agreement* Glasstin: "Ok. Lets start then. Lickatung, use Lick!" *Lickatung runs toward the Porygon, with its toung out and ready.* Galaxy Man: "Fool" *Lickatung licks Porygon.* Galaxy Man: "Ok. Now that thats over, Porygon, use sharpen." *Porygon's points become sharp as razors* Lickatung: "LICKATUNG?!?!" *Lickatung runs away, part limping and part crawling. Getting slower by the second, as its tounge is in so much pain.* Galaxy Man: "Ok. now that your sharp, take him down, Take Down!" *Porygon flies through the air, rushing toward Lickatung at great speeds* Glasstin: "Try to dodge it!" *Lickatung tries to run away, but is too slow. It gets a direct hit by porygon.* Glasstin: "NO!?" *Lickatungwas sent a few yards back, its body was surely in pain, it looked like it was just stabbed.* Glasstin: "Damn you." Galaxy Man: "At least call me by my name, I mean, a legend needs it's credit, Im Tectonix." Glasstin: "Your name does not matter. Go, I choose you, Lucario!" *Out of the pokeball, comes a brilliant, fine bread lucario, young and strong.* Glasstin: "Ok.. Thats it. Lucario, use Aura Sphere!" *Lucario jumps high in the air, charges a large sphere of blue energy, grabs it in his right hand* Glasstin: "Okay, Lucario, this is what we practiced, use your Aura Sphere!" *Lucario dashes toward Porygon with the Aura Sphere in his hand* Glasstin: "Now!" *Lucario relesed the ball with great force, it hits Porygon almost directly, it gets hit hard, but instead of flying through the air, it just falls to the ground.* Tectonix: "Ok.. you can have this fight, but I only used one pokemon. :neutral:* Glasstin: "Ok.. Return Lucario, return Lickatung. Have you guys seen a little kid, his names Frilf, and he kinda ran away." Tectonix: "Yeah, I have, he ran past the camp a while ago. He was running into the woods. If you keep following that trail, it'll lead you back to the town center." Glasstin: "Thanks alot. Your not so bad." Tectonix: "No problem, you'd better hurry" *Glasstin nodds and runs down the trail, looking for Frilf*[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted June 22, 2008 Report Share Posted June 22, 2008 What a rather amusing parody you got there,I would like to see how it goes. Post Count:This is my 2800th post. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Ruby Posted June 22, 2008 Report Share Posted June 22, 2008 great Fan-fic, but you need a longer chapter >.< hurry up and bring me out :twisted: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted June 22, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 22, 2008 >.< You dont come out until chapter 10. There are 25 chapters in Season 1. Chapters get longer as it goes along. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Ruby Posted June 22, 2008 Report Share Posted June 22, 2008 Chapter 10 ? fine...better see good chapters >.< Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted June 22, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 22, 2008 :P you will. :D You are the boss at the end. ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frlf Posted June 22, 2008 Report Share Posted June 22, 2008 Why im.. a kid >:[... why i am.. so.. weak >:[[[[ i dont run away!!! *runs away* j/k. I want to see me pwnting anyone soon >:] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bury the year Posted June 22, 2008 Report Share Posted June 22, 2008 Is there any way for peoples like me to get in? I'm curious. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted June 22, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 22, 2008 Tectonix, sure. You can be part of Team Galaxy.. Frilf, you kick butt in chapter 4. :P You take on like 3 dudes at once and win. :P chapter 2 added. :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frlf Posted June 22, 2008 Report Share Posted June 22, 2008 Why is it Frilf >_> i like chapter 2. And i like Buffer's butt kicked xD [rant] Why everyone calls be Frif or Frlif !!?!!? >.< [/rant] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted June 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 23, 2008 Frilf, is the easier to pronounce version of saying Frlf. I spelled, the way I pronounce it. To me, your name sounds out :F-R-I-L-F [Frlf] thx.. Chapter 3 by Wednesday at the least. :P Trainer Cards added. >.> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Ruby Posted June 27, 2008 Report Share Posted June 27, 2008 Chapter 2 is hilarious XD hope to see more :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted June 28, 2008 Report Share Posted June 28, 2008 the story's ok so far,but I advice a longer chapter next time. BTW,will I be in it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted July 5, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 5, 2008 maybe.. Ok. I have neglected my fan fic. I will be updating it, this week end, so look foreward to see Glasstin and Tectonix. ^^ And to remix, if you read this, note that this is my second fan fic.. ever. >_> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted July 5, 2008 Report Share Posted July 5, 2008 maybe.. Ok. I have neglected my fan fic. I will be updating it' date=' this week end, so look foreward to see Glasstin and Tectonix. ^^ And to remix, if you read this, note that this is my second fan fic.. ever. >_>[/quote']we'll see by then, we'll see... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Supreme Gamesmaster Posted July 5, 2008 Report Share Posted July 5, 2008 Nice. If you add me, make me evil, powerful, and unaffiliated (BUT NOT POWER-HUNGRY). Please? Not bad at all. I detect major Frlf-bashing, and shameless self-promotion, but other than that, it's awesome. Out of curiosity, does Draco ever come into this? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
End Of The Abyss Posted July 6, 2008 Report Share Posted July 6, 2008 Can I be in? It's great. Can I PLZ be a character? ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted July 6, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 6, 2008 ok Wyhe..^^ Gamesmaster, .... I'll think about you in it.. I just may have a spot open. About Draco? doubt it, but I'll see. Sorry Swift. =/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted July 6, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 6, 2008 sorry for the double post, but chapter 3 is up. ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
End Of The Abyss Posted July 6, 2008 Report Share Posted July 6, 2008 T_T It's good, but that was mean. You considered those 2, but not me. *Sad Face* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Ruby Posted July 6, 2008 Report Share Posted July 6, 2008 umm...ok chapter kinda weird that the galactic man just gave him the location :? but still a good chapter ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted July 6, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 6, 2008 Well they are members that can fit in my fan fic. umm.. thanks EDIT: Not everyone is bad. Read the description of meti, he leads his team, which means his team is like him. ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted July 6, 2008 Report Share Posted July 6, 2008 good episode there,would like to see more from you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted July 6, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 6, 2008 ok.. I'll have my chapter 4 by next week. ^^ It will be more exciting, I rushed through that chapter. =/ Maybe I can find a place for you and SGY soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted July 6, 2008 Report Share Posted July 6, 2008 ok.. I'll have my chapter 4 by next week. ^^ It will be more exciting' date=' I rushed through that chapter. =/ Maybe I can find a place for you and SGY soon.[/quote']Oh,if you really can,contact me by PM & I'll give you what kind of pokemons I would like to have... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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