Cyber Altair Posted June 19, 2008 Report Share Posted June 19, 2008 CnC please. me thinks the hand is overtopazed and don't complain about the text cause i know it sucks eggs. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tkill93 Posted June 19, 2008 Report Share Posted June 19, 2008 Effects on left arm stand out too much, Altair's too blurry ( The arm isn't a good focal if that's what you're going for ), not many other effects, and then theres the text >_>. Not one of your best, but with some modification it would be better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seth Posted June 19, 2008 Report Share Posted June 19, 2008 I agree with TKill.The blue doesn't match very good with the yellowish background. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frlf Posted June 19, 2008 Report Share Posted June 19, 2008 Yeah, the blue doesn't match a lot. It is very good tough. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber Altair Posted June 20, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 20, 2008 Ya i realise that, i had guests when i was doing it (2 9 year old kids) and they were watching the portugal vs germany match and i was distracted to say the least and finished it in a hurry to watch the match. Off Topic: yay we won 3:2, hurray. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted June 20, 2008 Report Share Posted June 20, 2008 I don't think the text is that bad... But, I agree with what Tkill said. There aren't that many effects, and it isn't your best work. Overall, amazing job! I'm really looking forward in viewing more of your work! :) -Glasstin Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
schyshter Posted June 21, 2008 Report Share Posted June 21, 2008 i'm gonna agree with the rest about the colors - the topaz just aint working. you could have gone with a more yellowish color. maybe even white. also, the ribbon overlaps his hand, which kind of messes with the illusion of the ribbon snaking around his arm... his left side was blurred out a bit too much, and the focal point could have been sharpened up some more... i like the glare on the point of his blade - small details can make a big difference... there's not much to say about the background, so no comments there... good, but i've seen better from you... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber Altair Posted June 21, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 21, 2008 thanks for the rating dude, that's what i want... anyway in case you didn't notice the hand was the focal. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cassia Posted June 23, 2008 Report Share Posted June 23, 2008 I agree with everyone. The light color doesn't match with the dark background. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Tiger Posted June 23, 2008 Report Share Posted June 23, 2008 6/10 Try to work on the lighting Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ultima™ Posted June 23, 2008 Report Share Posted June 23, 2008 The blue is pretty random, fix that and it will be alot better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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