Dinomaster Posted June 18, 2008 Report Share Posted June 18, 2008 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Death Metal Posted June 18, 2008 Report Share Posted June 18, 2008 hmmmm...not bad, but not great either. the cards name is in all caps which makes it look at little bad and the effect need to be rephrased so thats its more clearer. My Rating: 6.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skylarman1 Posted June 18, 2008 Report Share Posted June 18, 2008 ... what do you mean by alien, type or with that in its name? 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bahumut Posted June 19, 2008 Report Share Posted June 19, 2008 much better 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
meischoice Posted June 19, 2008 Report Share Posted June 19, 2008 I shall give the rating of....7.8/10 =] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MirrorForced. Posted June 19, 2008 Report Share Posted June 19, 2008 Not bad.But hardly original.^-^.6/10.-MirrorForced. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mad Hopz Posted June 19, 2008 Report Share Posted June 19, 2008 Not that great. Pic is pretty cool, but OCG and originality has much to be desired. 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Otaku-sama Posted June 19, 2008 Report Share Posted June 19, 2008 You didn't fail in this one, but still OCG errors and overpowered, cause you can even summon 3 queens plus one more alien in one turn. Try again.5.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted June 19, 2008 Report Share Posted June 19, 2008 Bit better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted June 19, 2008 Report Share Posted June 19, 2008 Make it a level 3 or below 'Alien' monster. Good pic. 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RacecaR Posted June 19, 2008 Report Share Posted June 19, 2008 GREATLY Improved, thank you! 7.5/10. Minor grammar errors and a tiny bit underpowered. Mispelled zerg, made EN next to numbers after AERG, and no edition. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
N00B Hunter Posted June 30, 2008 Report Share Posted June 30, 2008 MUCH better... even the picture is nice, now.Your effect has some bad OCG... this is what I'm thinking it should say:"If you control this face-up monster, you may Special Summon Level 3 or lower "Alien" monsters from your hand." That's still a bit overpowered, but can be countered with some stat changes. I recommend bringing the ATK down to 2200-2100 and the DEF down to around 2000. Nice job, you're getting much better :mrgreen: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted June 30, 2008 Report Share Posted June 30, 2008 Needs work. Fix OCG. Pic, well ok. Uh overall ok. 6/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bahumut Posted July 3, 2008 Report Share Posted July 3, 2008 fairly good, much better than b4. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cassia Posted July 3, 2008 Report Share Posted July 3, 2008 Pretty good cards. Just a few OCG errors. 8/10. Better pictures would be nice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kroama Posted September 10, 2008 Report Share Posted September 10, 2008 Make them xenomorphs, i don't know if anyone still uses them, but i do, and there are already Alien cards, they're actually reptiles, but all have Alien in the name. Change the name, or the type. 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Monkey Posted September 11, 2008 Report Share Posted September 11, 2008 not bad, not awesome, it's ok 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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