Jappio Posted October 12, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 12, 2010 I recomend paying better attention to some of the points and taking more time to look over your sprites. The first one isn't horrible, but 2nd gen splicing is rare so I'm not very familiar. The second one is also a rare type of splicing too. The recoloring on the 2nd needs some work though. You have both yellow and red mixed in, which just looks sloppy. It also is an uneven mix, it doesn't feel like a Charmander+Pikachu, it just looks like a Pikachu with a fiery tail. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anbu-of-Sand Posted October 22, 2010 Report Share Posted October 22, 2010 Followed your Tutorial. Here's my 1st Pokemon Sprite!! But just to warn you, it doesn't really look like a Pokemon.Color scheme was most out of the colors from Haunter and Manaphy, mainly Haunters purple shades and Manaphys blue.Uses was pretty much Voltorb itself and the fusion of both Haunter's and Dusknoir's like tail, with Manaphy's antennas as tentacles. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jappio Posted October 22, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 22, 2010 Oh god.... what's with the color? The shading is all wrong on this splice first off. The solid dark purple everywhere, the blue outline, and the inconsistent light source are all screwy. I really wish I knew how to recommend to fix it or to pinpoint your problem, but I really can't. I just recommend forgetting what you did here and going over the tutorial again but more closely. Pay attention to the part that tells you how to recolor. I'm really trying to not say this to be mean. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-:=Brandon=:- Posted October 22, 2010 Report Share Posted October 22, 2010 Great tut, ive read it before. Btw jappio ive seen one of your youtube critique episodes, is this splice made by JG or master tortoise? because in your critique episode on youtube it said by master tortoise, but on the 2nd page of this topic JG says he did it? Who really did make it? I think even the newbiest newbie at splicing could make great splices with this tutorial. I wish I would have had this tutorial when I started splicing. EXCELLENT TUT!! Thanks. hahahaha..maybe copied from the first page perhaps? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anbu-of-Sand Posted October 22, 2010 Report Share Posted October 22, 2010 Oh god.... what's with the color? The shading is all wrong on this splice first off. The solid dark purple everywhere, the blue outline, and the inconsistent light source are all screwy. I really wish I knew how to recommend to fix it or to pinpoint your problem, but I really can't. I just recommend forgetting what you did here and going over the tutorial again but more closely. Pay attention to the part that tells you how to recolor. I'm really trying to not say this to be mean.I did know something was wrong when I was recoloring it, just didn't really understand that part at best. Thank you for the suggestions though. When I find the time, I'll look over the Tutorial again and post a new Sprite, and most likely forget about this first one I've made. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jappio Posted October 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 23, 2010 Brandon, although they use the same Pokemon and they are used in a similar way, I don't think they are by the same people. The Regi combinations are very overly done theme, so a lot of the time some do look similar. Looking closely at the two, I'm going to say there probably isn't form of theft or anything here. However thanks for the attempt. It's good to know there are others out there trying to keep an eye out for theft. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-:=Brandon=:- Posted October 24, 2010 Report Share Posted October 24, 2010 Yeah, i seen the differences, its just a strange coincidence they did the same things with the exact same parts. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sweetie Belle Posted November 7, 2010 Report Share Posted November 7, 2010 My First Splice:Porygon2 + Gallade + Lanturn Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sotos Posted November 24, 2010 Report Share Posted November 24, 2010 Here, my first splice...I call it Croplupwig - and its name is what I hate mostly about it...Obviously, Crobat (Ears, tail, colour scheme)+ Piplup (Base)+ Turtwig (Head thingie) EDIT: Second Splice^^Name: HerafernixHeracross (Head thingie, hands, colour scheme)+ Monferno (Tail Fire)+ Steelix (Base) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
daimon620 Posted November 28, 2010 Report Share Posted November 28, 2010 this is my 1st splice : i think my 1st was goodmy 2nd : this secound is very bad3rd : i dont got any much3 of my first time made are 3 pokemon onlythis is the 4 made from more ^^ : if you got any commment pls tell me right away Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sotos Posted November 28, 2010 Report Share Posted November 28, 2010 First of all, don't post attachments. Upload your sprites to a site like imageshack.com, get the direct link and type:[img=Paste the direct link here] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Htamret Posted December 20, 2010 Report Share Posted December 20, 2010 great tutorial, but just 1 thing abot tha faster vid: it's "PRIMARY" not "FIRSTARY" ;) . other than that great vid.ps i use the spriter's resource 2! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dokktorawesome Posted March 18, 2011 Report Share Posted March 18, 2011 Here's my first splice: Torterra + GroudonIts pretty bad, I know. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~>Grovyle<~ Posted March 18, 2011 Report Share Posted March 18, 2011 First Splice = NidoslashFirst Scratch = Enigne (pronounced En-ig-nay), Rotom Evolution Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dokktorawesome Posted April 10, 2011 Report Share Posted April 10, 2011 Third Splice: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MartMaemees Posted April 19, 2011 Report Share Posted April 19, 2011 Great tutorial :) My first splice is in my signature :D I know it's bad. Didn't have time, just wanted to try it. Will do again tomorrow :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jappio Posted April 19, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 19, 2011 D= How is it my tutorial lead you to make that?! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hunter. Posted August 26, 2011 Report Share Posted August 26, 2011 thanks needed a refresher course. getting rusty. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jappio Posted October 11, 2011 Author Report Share Posted October 11, 2011 I have finally done it. I have finished the spriting tutorial. This is it, every video. I will reiterate, you should watch all parts. The main meat I will admit are in parts 4 and 5, but useful information is in each, all of which can help you become a better spriter. Scratching Tutorial Part 1 - Intro Part 2 - Concept and Planning Part 3 - MS Paint Basics Part 4 - Form and Line Art Part 5 - Coloring and Shading Part 6 - Finishing Touches and Posting ---------- Hopefully with this out of the way, I can go back to my casual spriting since this wont' be looming over my now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hunter. Posted October 13, 2011 Report Share Posted October 13, 2011 good to have you back, Jappio. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Donvermicelli Posted October 17, 2011 Report Share Posted October 17, 2011 So I watched and read the tutorial, very interesting I must say, took me a while to find a fitting combo though.I'd like some feedback on this, be harsh because this was my first attempt and I am sure there are many things I can do to improve. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jappio Posted October 17, 2011 Author Report Share Posted October 17, 2011 What I see is Tyranitar with an upside down jet pack. The issue you have is that it doesn't feel like something new or different. You added very little. Blastoise and what ever supplied the fire are under realized. Small stuff too like gray in the fire, the cannons are crooked and not straight, the tail is upside down. It doesn't do anything amazing, and small little errors just make it extra forgettable. I wish I could go into more detail, but there isn't much to go into at this point. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Corgi Posted October 17, 2011 Report Share Posted October 17, 2011 I have finally done it. I have finished the spriting tutorial. This is it, every video. I will reiterate, you should watch all parts. The main meat I will admit are in parts 4 and 5, but useful information is in each, all of which can help you become a better spriter. Scratching Tutorial Part 1 - Intro Part 2 - Concept and Planning Part 3 - MS Paint Basics Part 4 - Form and Line Art Part 5 - Coloring and Shading Part 6 - Finishing Touches and Posting ---------- Hopefully with this out of the way, I can go back to my casual spriting since this wont' be looming over my now.As said in my youtube comments, it didn't help me att all and made me all confused, but I enjoyed your voice :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Donvermicelli Posted October 17, 2011 Report Share Posted October 17, 2011 What I see is Tyranitar with an upside down jet pack. The issue you have is that it doesn't feel like something new or different. You added very little. Blastoise and what ever supplied the fire are under realized. Small stuff too like gray in the fire, the cannons are crooked and not straight, the tail is upside down. It doesn't do anything amazing, and small little errors just make it extra forgettable. I wish I could go into more detail, but there isn't much to go into at this point. Ok thanks for being honest, I wasn't that confident so I picked something that would go ok I guess..I'll try and work up something more creative. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Donvermicelli Posted October 18, 2011 Report Share Posted October 18, 2011 OK new attempt, only this time a completely custom sprite.Pls tell me what to look out for and what doesn't work/was made wrong. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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