eric234 Posted June 15, 2008 Report Share Posted June 15, 2008 my card is dark so tell me wat ya think Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Purple Dinosaur Posted June 15, 2008 Report Share Posted June 15, 2008 This should go into "Realistic Cards" because you're trying to make a real card. You need more capitals. Here let me rewrite the lore: "When this card is in face-up Defense Position, it can attack your opponent directly" Plus, a Black Dragon... And a LIGHT Attribute? That's different... 5.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eric234 Posted June 15, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 15, 2008 o thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Purple Dinosaur Posted June 15, 2008 Report Share Posted June 15, 2008 You should simply edit it like I showed you and post it in the "Realistic Cards" Section and you'll get more comments. Just a pointer. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eric234 Posted June 15, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 15, 2008 ok but can i ask u somthing? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted June 15, 2008 Report Share Posted June 15, 2008 Seen this card many times in many different threads. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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