Mutant Monster RAEG-HAPYP Posted June 14, 2008 Report Share Posted June 14, 2008 Decided to make a PMD fanfic. Hope you like it. If you want to submit a team, go ahead but I might change some stuff) There's some stuff different . Ep 1 is a little short though Main TeamsTeam Name: Deity FirePokemon: Charizard, Aggron, SalamenceLeader: Dialga(He's one of my favorites) Team Name: Mystic ForcePokemon: Gengar, Alakazam, FlygonLeader: Garchomp Team Name: Heavy MetalPokemon: Golem, Steelix, ScizorLeader: Aggron Team Name: FightersPokemon: Hitmonchan, Hitmonlee, LucarioLeader: Blazekin All I got so far and Salamence isn't the human even though he's the main character. Can anyone guess who the human in this is(It's a main character) Episode 1 A pokemon is lying unconsious Aggron: Hey you okay? Charizard: He's not responding... Dialga: Get him to the hosptial A pokemon is waking up on a medical bed Salamence: W-what the... Aggron: He's awake Dialga Dialga enters Salamence: Who are you? Dialga: I'm Dialga, the legendary pokemon who controls time. Aggron: I'm Aggron Charizard: I'm Charizard Dialga: Who are you? Salamence: Salamence Then Nurse Chansey came in. Chansey: He's ready to get out of the hosptial Dialga: Good(Turns to Salamence) Do you want to join out team? Salamence: You saved me, sure So, Salamence joined Dialga's team and they were to have a great adventure. Ninjask: So should we attack them for the fun of it Gabite: Houndoom... Houndoom: I'm on it Houndoom uses Flamethrower on Ninjask Ninjask: Ow!! What was that for? Houndoom: We'd be the one getting attack. We need to find a weaker teamCacturne: Heh will do Houndoom: Well Boss? Gabite: Let's do it Meanwhile... Palkia: Dialga has a team, I better find him or make my own team Meanwhile... Aggron: This is Seaford City Salamence: Sure is big... Charizard: You should meet the mayor They go to the mayors mansion Aggron: Mayor Rampardos, we want you to meet someone Rampardos: Oh? Who is it? Salamence: My name is Salamence Rampardos: WHAT?! The Legendary Outlaw Hunter Salamence? It's an honor to meet you. What brings you here Salamence: I moved here but I went unconsious due to a nasty storm. Aggron: He also joined my team Dialga: Aggron... Aggron: Sorry Dialga Rampardos: Well enjoy life here Salamence. I'll alert the city. I'm sure Cheif Alakazam wil love to have you on the force. Salamence: I'll go see him Aggron: I never knew he was famous Charizard: Me either Dialga: I'm surrounded by idiots Aggron: If you knew, you shoud have said somthing Dialga: I didn't feel like it Salamence can't even walk one step without being reconized Salamence: It seems I'll have no problem getting used to this city ?: Help!! Salamence ran toward the scream Aggron: Wait up!! Charizard: Man he's fast Pikachu: G-Go away Bagon: W-what do you want Ninjask: We want to play... Houndoom: ...the hard wayCacturne: What's wrong, scared Gabite: Take them away Salamence: Hold it Gabite: Oh no, it's Salamence. RUN!! Salamence: No you don't Take this: HYPER BEAM The Hyper Beam knocked out all 4. Soon cops took them in Haunter: Thank you Salamence Sablye: We couldn't have busted them without your help Salamence: No problem Pikachu: Thank you Mr. Salamence Bagon: You saved us Salamence: It's my living: Busting outlaws Salamence life here is just beginning. What will he do? Find out in episode 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Exyst Posted June 14, 2008 Report Share Posted June 14, 2008 wow, sweet. Nice fic 10/10 for idea 10/10 for grammer 9/10 layout 69/70 Personal opinion ^I just made this up 98/100! A* and 2 reps Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mutant Monster RAEG-HAPYP Posted June 14, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 14, 2008 wow' date=' sweet. Nice fic 10/10 for idea 10/10 for grammer 9/10 layout 69/70 Personal opinion ^I just made this up 98/100! A* and 2 reps[/quote'] Thanks and I'm happy you like it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Whitey Posted June 14, 2008 Report Share Posted June 14, 2008 Very nice fan fic! I wonder who the human is! Also, i have a few ideas for some teams Team Name: Blazing FirePokemon: Charmander, Rapidash, NinetailsLeader: Charizard Team Name: WhirlpoolPokemon: Lapras, Mudkip, StarmieLeader: Prinplup Team Name: Delta ForcePokemon: Hitmonchan, Riolu, EeveeLeader: Lucario Hope you like them! ^.^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mutant Monster RAEG-HAPYP Posted June 14, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 14, 2008 Very nice fan fic! I wonder who the human is! Also' date=' i have a few ideas for some teams Team Name: Blazing FirePokemon: Charmander, Rapidash, NinetailsLeader: Charizard Team Name: WhirlpoolPokemon: Lapras, Mudkip, StarmieLeader: Prinplup Team Name: Delta ForcePokemon: Hitmonchan, Riolu, EeveeLeader: Lucario Hope you like them! ^.^[/quote'] Accepted. I present Episode 2 Episode 2Salamence is walking when he sees a buliding Salamence: Hey what this? Charizard: This is the place where all exploration teams stay. It's run by Machoke. Let's go inThey go in Aggron: Dialga how do you fit in here? Dialga: Shut up Aggron: SorryHoundour: Isn't that... Dugtrio: It's the famous Outlaw Hunter Salamence!!!! Machoke: WHAT?!He run out of his room Machoke: It's an honor to have you in here Salamence Salamence: The pleasure is all mine Machoke: I see Team Deity Fire has recruited you. Salamence: Yeah Machoke: It's been a while since we worked together Everyone except for Dialga: WHAT?! Dialga: Why didn't Arceus give these guys brains? Machoke: Yeah, Salamence and I were once Regional Outlaw Hunters and were on the same team.Meanwhile... Kirlia: When do we strike? Grotle: When the boss gives the order Charmeleon: Where is he anyway? Crocnaw : RIGHT HERE!!! Charmeleon: Let's do this Back at the city.... Machoke: What happend to the other 2? Salamence: T-They... Machoke: Well? Salamence: They died Machoke: What?! Salamence: I don't know what happend Meanwhile... Dark Electrode: Master Groudon. We have found what we been looking for. Dark Groudon: Good. All we have to do is find Celebi, but first, We need to corrupt Zapdos. HEAD OUT!!!! Dark Dragonite: Shall I go there? Dark Groudon: Yes... Meanwhile... Kyogre: I figured. Groudon has been corrputed by darkness. Jirachi: So you already know? Kyogre: Yes, Dialga already knows. Warn the rest of the legendaries but warn Rayquaza first Jirachi: Got it Jirachi goes to warn the other legendaries while Kyogre is wondering what happend. He hopes Rayquaza can do somthing. Back at the city... Shink: W-Who are you? Dark Muk: We want to play Dark Gabite: We want to play the hard way ???: Enough Dark Gabite: Y-you? Dark Typlosion: Who'd you expect? We don't have time. We got to go before Dialga, Salamence and their crew find us. Dark Muk: You got lucky but that's not gonna happen next time Meanwhile... Rayquaza: Groudon, what happend to him? Jirachi: We don't know Rayquaza Rayyquaza: Dialga might be able to help. I'm going to find himBack at the city... Salamence: I see. So that's Groudon's plan Dialga: Yes..we must stop him no matter what What is Groudon and his army of Dark* Pokemon up too? Find out *By dark, I mean evil Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Whitey Posted June 14, 2008 Report Share Posted June 14, 2008 wow you are very good! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mutant Monster RAEG-HAPYP Posted June 14, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 14, 2008 Thank you. I appreciate that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mutant Monster RAEG-HAPYP Posted June 15, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 15, 2008 I present Episode 3 and non legendaries now called legendaries Lord or LadyEpisode 3 Aggron is sleeping and Dialha uses Roar of Time to wake him up Aggron: I'm awake I'm awake Salamence and Charizard are dying of laughter Aggron: IT'S NOT FUNNY!!! Dialga: If I say it's funny, it is Aggron: Sorry Garchomp: For a legendary pokemon, you sure have a big sense of humor Dialga Salamence: Hey Garchomp Garchomp: Salamence, it's been so long. I heard the others except Machoke died. Salamence: Yeah the cause of death is unknown. Pikachu: Mr. Salamence!!! Salamence: What is it? Bagon: Our leader Camerupt has gone missing. Salamence: What?! Lord Dialga, what do we do? Dialga: We find Camerupt. Let's go. Aggron, you protect these 2. Salamence and Charizard, you comming with me. Let's go!! Aggron: Where did he go? Pikachu: He went that way!!! Afterwards... Pikachu: Camerupt!!! Dark Arbok: I posioned him Dark Slowking: Let's see you fight for his freedom Dark Hypno: Ready? Dark Scizor: We are Dialga: Let's do this Dark Arbok: Take this: Posion Sting Charizard: Eat a Flamethrower!!! The Flamethrower was more powerful, hitting Dark Arbok Dark Slowking: Water Pulse Water Pulse was a direct hit on CharizardAggron: Charizard!! Charizard: I'm okay. Keep fighting Dark Scizor and Dark Hypno: Hyper Beam Dialga: Meet my best move: ROAR OF TIME!!! All 4 were knocked out Dialga: Camerupt you okayCamerupt: L..Lord Dialga..(Goes Unconsious) Salamence: We need to get him to the hosptial at once They rush to give Camerupt medicial treatment Chansey: He'll be fine Pikachu: That's a relief Bagon: Thank you Lord Dialga and Mr. Salamence...Oh and thanks Aggron and CharizardSalamence: You're welcome Dialga: Let's go Meanwhile... Dark Groudon: It's was expected since Dialga was with them Dark Arbok: Sorry Lord Groudon Dark Groudon: No matter. We will succed Meanwhile... Salamence: Lady Jirachi!!!! Jirachi: Salamence...Long time no see Aggron: Salamence knows a lot of pokemon Dialga: Salamence, can you tell us how you know Jirachi Salamence: She's was my partner before I came here. Jirachi: I came to see if I can become part of Dialga's team? Dialga: Sure the more we have the better chance we have to defeat Dark Groudon and his army.Aggron: I...I have somthing to say Dialga: What? Later... Charizard: WHAT?! YOU ARE A HUMAN?! Aggron: Yes before I came here, I was a human Salamence: You look like a normal Aggron to me though? Aggron: I know. They all say that. Dialga: He's right. I have the power to control and distort time and I've seen his human life. I turned him into an Aggron or he would have died. Salamence: That's shocking isn't it Lady Jirachi? Jirachi: Yes. Celebi told me as she can travel through time. Meanwhile... Mewtwo: Groudon, you dare to betray us? I shall take you down with my power. You can run but you can't hide from me: The second strongest of all the pokemon* What is Groudon plan? Also Jirachi seems to be a close friend of Salamence. Maybe too close... *Before D/P Mewtwo was the strongest pokemon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Protoman Posted June 15, 2008 Report Share Posted June 15, 2008 1 great fanfic and 2 who is the strongest? Team legends Arceus Darkrai ShayminLeader Arceus Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mutant Monster RAEG-HAPYP Posted June 15, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 15, 2008 1 great fanfic and 2 who is the strongest? Team legends Arceus Darkrai ShayminLeader Arceus Can't accept if that was a team and for your question, Dialga's team is the strongest. If you meant who's the strongest pokemon, it's Arceus Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Protoman Posted June 15, 2008 Report Share Posted June 15, 2008 could the team be Legends Arceus Blastoise Chairzard? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mutant Monster RAEG-HAPYP Posted June 15, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 15, 2008 could the team be Legends Arceus Blastoise Chairzard? Sure but I'll put Palkia and Typlosion instead. Blastoise can stay Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Guest Supreme Gamesmaster Posted June 15, 2008 Report Share Posted June 15, 2008 I won't comment on the inclusion of legendaries at this point: voicing those opinions would probably get me banned. However, at this point, the text is almost unreadable; there's no spacing at all, let alone spacing for drama. Fix the spacing and the grammar, and I'll probably start liking this some. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mutant Monster RAEG-HAPYP Posted June 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 16, 2008 I'll fix it. Don't worry. Also if you guys hate really sad scenes, be careful of Ep 12 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mutant Monster RAEG-HAPYP Posted June 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 16, 2008 Here's is episode 4Episode 4 Charizard: He fell asleep again? Salamence: Looks like it Charizard: Lord Dialga... Dialga: Stay back Dialga uses Roar of Time to wake up Aggron Aggron: I'M AWAKE!!! Salamence: We have to visit Machoke. Jirachi: Let's go Salamence Salamence: Shall we go Lord Dialga Dialga; Yes Salamence: Comming Lady Jirachi? Jirachi: Yes!! Aggron: Is it me or do you think Jirachi has special feelings for Salamence? Charizard: Yeah I think so Dialga: COME ON!!!!! Aggron: Comming Lord Dialga!!!! At Machoke's place Salamence: UGH!! What's that smell? Koffing: That'll be us Stunky: We're Team Smelly Weezing: So stay aw...Wait a second...you're the... Salamence: Seems you know me Weezing: Let's get out of here!!! Salamence: Losers.... Machoke: Salamence...Oh and Lord Dialga and Lady Jirachi and those 2 Charizard: Does he even know our names? Aggron: I guess not Machoke: Cheif Alakazam wanted to meet you here Alakazam: Salamence, do you want to join the force? Salamence: Sure Alakazam: Very good. Let's go to the station Meanwhile... Dexoys: Darkness is threating the region. It must be stopped no matter what. Dexoys(Attack Form) What should we do? Dexoys: We find the cause of this Dexoys(Defense Form) I'll go find Celebi. She'll knoe somthing Dexoys(Speed form): I'll go to Dexoys: Good Back at the city... Salamence: I gotta work more now. Jirachi: You'll do fine Salamence Salamence: Thanks Aggron: I still think we'll see romance soon Charizard: Me too Dialga: YOU TWO MOVE IT!!!! Aggron: Wail up Lord Dialga Meanwhile... Giratina: I'll take out Groudon by myself. It's my revenge. Darkrai: You're too solo Giratina Giratina: Says you... Back at the city... Salamence: 4 years ago... I lost my closet friends. However I still have you Lady Jirachi... Jirachi: We need to find out about the past and how they died. Will the succed? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mutant Monster RAEG-HAPYP Posted June 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 16, 2008 Here's is episode 4Episode 4 Charizard: He fell asleep again? Salamence: Looks like it Charizard: Lord Dialga... Dialga: Stay back Dialga uses Roar of Time to wake up Aggron Aggron: I'M AWAKE!!! Salamence: We have to visit Machoke. Jirachi: Let's go Salamence Salamence: Shall we go Lord Dialga Dialga; Yes Salamence: Comming Lady Jirachi? Jirachi: Yes!! Aggron: Is it me or do you think Jirachi has special feelings for Salamence? Charizard: Yeah I think so Dialga: COME ON!!!!! Aggron: Comming Lord Dialga!!!! At Machoke's place Salamence: UGH!! What's that smell? Koffing: That'll be us Stunky: We're Team Smelly Weezing: So stay aw...Wait a second...you're the... Salamence: Seems you know me Weezing: Let's get out of here!!! Salamence: Losers.... Machoke: Salamence...Oh and Lord Dialga and Lady Jirachi and those 2 Charizard: Does he even know our names? Aggron: I guess not Machoke: Cheif Alakazam wanted to meet you here Alakazam: Salamence, do you want to join the force? Salamence: Sure Alakazam: Very good. Let's go to the station Meanwhile... Dexoys: Darkness is threating the region. It must be stopped no matter what. Dexoys(Attack Form) What should we do? Dexoys: We find the cause of this Dexoys(Defense Form) I'll go find Celebi. She'll knoe somthing Dexoys(Speed form): I'll go to Dexoys: Good Back at the city... Salamence: I gotta work more now. Jirachi: You'll do fine Salamence Salamence: Thanks Aggron: I still think we'll see romance soon Charizard: Me too Dialga: YOU TWO MOVE IT!!!! Aggron: Wail up Lord Dialga Meanwhile... Giratina: I'll take out Groudon by myself. It's my revenge. Darkrai: You're too solo Giratina Giratina: Says you... Back at the city... Salamence: 4 years ago... I lost my closet friends. However I still have you Lady Jirachi... Jirachi: We need to find out about the past and how they died. Will the succed? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mutant Monster RAEG-HAPYP Posted June 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 16, 2008 Here's is episode 4Episode 4 Charizard: He fell asleep again? Salamence: Looks like it Charizard: Lord Dialga... Dialga: Stay back Dialga uses Roar of Time to wake up Aggron Aggron: I'M AWAKE!!! Salamence: We have to visit Machoke. Jirachi: Let's go Salamence Salamence: Shall we go Lord Dialga Dialga; Yes Salamence: Comming Lady Jirachi? Jirachi: Yes!! Aggron: Is it me or do you think Jirachi has special feelings for Salamence? Charizard: Yeah I think so Dialga: COME ON!!!!! Aggron: Comming Lord Dialga!!!! At Machoke's place Salamence: UGH!! What's that smell? Koffing: That'll be us Stunky: We're Team Smelly Weezing: So stay aw...Wait a second...you're the... Salamence: Seems you know me Weezing: Let's get out of here!!! Salamence: Losers.... Machoke: Salamence...Oh and Lord Dialga and Lady Jirachi and those 2 Charizard: Does he even know our names? Aggron: I guess not Machoke: Cheif Alakazam wanted to meet you here Alakazam: Salamence, do you want to join the force? Salamence: Sure Alakazam: Very good. Let's go to the station Meanwhile... Dexoys: Darkness is threating the region. It must be stopped no matter what. Dexoys(Attack Form) What should we do? Dexoys: We find the cause of this Dexoys(Defense Form) I'll go find Celebi. She'll knoe somthing Dexoys(Speed form): I'll go to Dexoys: Good Back at the city... Salamence: I gotta work more now. Jirachi: You'll do fine Salamence Salamence: Thanks Aggron: I still think we'll see romance soon Charizard: Me too Dialga: YOU TWO MOVE IT!!!! Aggron: Wail up Lord Dialga Meanwhile... Giratina: I'll take out Groudon by myself. It's my revenge. Darkrai: You're too solo Giratina Giratina: Says you... Back at the city... Salamence: 4 years ago... I lost my closet friends. However I still have you Lady Jirachi... Jirachi: We need to find out about the past and how they died. Will the succed? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Protoman Posted June 17, 2008 Report Share Posted June 17, 2008 one sweet chapter I'm okay with sappy unless its mystery dungeon games endings witch usually make me cry. 2 nice chapeter when will 5 be out?!?!?!?! 3 thanks for using part of my team idea. $Keep up the good Work! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Protoman Posted June 17, 2008 Report Share Posted June 17, 2008 one sweet chapter I'm okay with sappy unless its mystery dungeon games endings witch usually make me cry. 2 nice chapeter when will 5 be out?!?!?!?! 3 thanks for using part of my team idea. $Keep up the good Work! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted June 17, 2008 Report Share Posted June 17, 2008 Good, nice work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted June 17, 2008 Report Share Posted June 17, 2008 Good, nice work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mutant Monster RAEG-HAPYP Posted June 17, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 17, 2008 one sweet chapter I'm okay with sappy unless its mystery dungeon games endings witch usually make me cry. 2 nice chapeter when will 5 be out?!?!?!?! 3 thanks for using part of my team idea. $Keep up the good Work! When I think of it or a kind person offers their assistance:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mutant Monster RAEG-HAPYP Posted June 17, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 17, 2008 one sweet chapter I'm okay with sappy unless its mystery dungeon games endings witch usually make me cry. 2 nice chapeter when will 5 be out?!?!?!?! 3 thanks for using part of my team idea. $Keep up the good Work! When I think of it or a kind person offers their assistance:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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