Huntar! Posted June 13, 2008 Report Share Posted June 13, 2008 [align=center]I dont own the artwork for this card. Now that I have been accepted into the Legendary Card Makers, I now, must make Legendary Cards. -_- It is harder than it seems. I have made a new card. I give credit to my good friend Darth Browarod for the effect idea, it is similar to his "rasputin" card. Thanks Bro! Here are the cards: This card cannot be Special Summoned. During your End Phase, you lose 400 LIfe Points. You can remove from play 1 DARK monster from your Graveyard so this card gains 400 ATK until the End Phase, and to move 1 monster your opponent controls to the adjacet Monster Card Zone to this card, one Monster Card Zone one zone to the right (In relation to the owner of this card). If the card was moved out of the Monster Card Zone on the far right, it is removed from play. For each card removed from play by this effect, increase your Life Points by 500. When this card is Special Summoned from the Graveyard, select 2 monsters on the field and move them 1 Monster Card Zone to the right (relative to the controller of this card). If either of the selected monsters moves onto another monster, move that monster to the Zone that the selected monster used to occupy. When this card is destroyed, your opponent must discard 1 card from his/her hand.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ultimate Ryan Posted June 13, 2008 Report Share Posted June 13, 2008 I don't like it, I think it is underpowered. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Senbanzakura Posted June 13, 2008 Report Share Posted June 13, 2008 Pretty cool card. I love Undead monsters. 9/10 :P Good job Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted June 13, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 13, 2008 my support card comes next. Then, this card becomes overpowered. :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blazenz Posted June 13, 2008 Report Share Posted June 13, 2008 pic is awsome but i have to agree with flygon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ultimate Ryan Posted June 13, 2008 Report Share Posted June 13, 2008 well you only posted this card, so underpowered, 6/10 (I think that is the lowest rating I have ever given you lol)EDIT - My name is Ultimateryan not Flygon >_> he is my fav pokemon not my name >_> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silencerleader Posted June 13, 2008 Report Share Posted June 13, 2008 Awesome job...on the pic decision...Awful effect...underpowered...and for a level 6... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dryad Posted June 13, 2008 Report Share Posted June 13, 2008 You know... this has a real use, like lets say the monster thats about to beat you to a pulp is on the right (closet to center monster zone), you use this guy's ability twice and you eliminate it from the field, along with that, this helps with your standard Dark Deck that loves to churn Dark monsters to the RFG Zone. Along with that it gives it a hefty 1200 ATK Bonus on top of that making it a 3100/1600 Zombie that can destroy your creatures and according to the card, its ATK Bonus doesn't go away because it doesn't state: "Until the End of the Turn" so in a hurry this guy can go way beyond double its ATK in a single turn... I love to know why thats underpowered :twisted: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted June 13, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 13, 2008 damn it. I knew I should have kept it a level 4 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ultimate Ryan Posted June 13, 2008 Report Share Posted June 13, 2008 then it would be overpowered, PM and I will help you, you have perfect OCG and cool effects but I help will balance Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted June 13, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 13, 2008 Is it Overpowered now? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dryad Posted June 13, 2008 Report Share Posted June 13, 2008 God Hunter, its the ATK Bonus it gets, it grows at a very fast rate and with a unlimited number of times of use (according to how many Dark Monsters in Grave) and a not going away ATK Bonus, it would get this per 2 Dark Monsters:2 = 600 ATK Bonus4 = 1200 ATK Bonus6 = 1800 ATK Bonus8 = 2400 ATK Bonus10 = 3000 ATK Bonusand so fourth in a single turn.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ultimate Ryan Posted June 13, 2008 Report Share Posted June 13, 2008 WWAAYY overpowered Level 4, 1900?!?! PM me seriously my cards may not be the best but I can add balance. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted June 13, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 13, 2008 I am about to ask this thread closed, so I can fix the card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ultimate Ryan Posted June 13, 2008 Report Share Posted June 13, 2008 1) lower its ATK to 16002) lower def to 200-6003) before "You can remove from play 2 DARK monsters from your Graveyard so this card gains 600 ATK" add Once per turn,4) decrease LP increasment to 300 I love the idea but you just made it to strong ^-^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted June 13, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 13, 2008 Ok. If this is not good, then I will request the thread closed.. until I can get this right. Ryan, no thanks. I need to fix this myself. Thanks White Rose. I know it would be kick ass in the current meta.. EDIT: Oh yeah, I fixed it again. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ultimate Ryan Posted June 13, 2008 Report Share Posted June 13, 2008 now it is OPed >_> it would be better as a weaker level 4 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted June 13, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 13, 2008 How is it overpowered now? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dryad Posted June 13, 2008 Report Share Posted June 13, 2008 My question as well.. its now got the EOT part along with the fact you have to use its ability twice to net 600 Life Points instead of 100 and its a mere 400 ATK Bonus so with the same bonus rate I described in a earlier post:2 = 4004 = 8006 = 12008 = 160010 = 2000Which lasts until End of Turn. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted June 13, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 13, 2008 Yeah, so does Prometheus King of Shadows. Just, mine can be used each turn. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Star Posted June 13, 2008 Report Share Posted June 13, 2008 Ok, well, I don't comment cards that often anymore, but I decided to comment this one. The effect is confusing and I think the OCG is wrong. From what I understand, once per turn you can move an opponent's monster card 1 zone to the right, and if you move the card off the field, it is removed from play. If so, that's an interesting effect. However, it's not fitting for the card itself. Also, I don't think a Reaper of the Undead would have an effect that includes gaining Life Points. Sorry dude, but I'm a tough scorer. 4/10 Needs work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yasu Posted June 13, 2008 Report Share Posted June 13, 2008 ok 9-10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted June 13, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 13, 2008 Damn.. Remix is harsh.. ouch... Remix is a n00b! Thanks FM6 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted June 13, 2008 Report Share Posted June 13, 2008 meh... 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Impact™ Posted June 13, 2008 Report Share Posted June 13, 2008 very good card i really like it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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