Damaged War Mecha[Needs OCG Help]

[ShinobiDark72]

Damaged War Mecha

DARK

Level 3

ATK/ 200

DEF/1600

[Machine / Effect]

 

This card can not be Set. If this card is destroyed during your Battle Phase, remove it from play. If this card is removed from play by it's own effect, draw 2 cards. When this card is Special Summoned, both players can discard 1 card to draw 1 card.

 

(effect fixed by Umbra.)

[ShinobiDark72]

Damaged War Mecha

DARK

Level 3

ATK/ 200

DEF/1600

[Machine / Effect]

 

This card can not be Set. If this card is destroyed during your Battle Phase, remove it from play. If this card is removed from play by it's own effect, draw 2 cards. When this card is Special Summoned, both players can discard 1 card to draw 1 card.

 

(effect fixed by Umbra.)

[Umbra]

This card cannot be Set. If this card is destroyed during your Battle Phase' date=' it is removed from play. If removed in this way, Draw 2 cards. If this card is Special Summoned, You and your opponent can discard one card from their Hand to Draw 1 card from the deck.

 

The OCG seems a bit off to Me, if anyone could Help Out it would be nice.

(Sorry if this is the wrong place to ask.)

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OCG, Umbra Style:

 

This card can not be Set. If this card is destroyed during your Battle Phase, remove it from play. If this card is removed from play by it's own effect, draw 2 cards. When this card is Special Summoned, both players can discard 1 card to draw 1 card.

 

That should be correct.

[ShinobiDark72]

Thank You very much. How about a rating?

[Umbra]

Let's count playability here. + is for Positive effects and - is for negative.

 

+ You have to summon it in face-up ATK position, with a mere 200 ATK

- Removal only activates if it is during your Battle Phase

- Provides a Pot of Greed if removed that way

+ Cyber Ouroboros when SS'ed

 

Basically, a 0.

[ShinobiDark72]

I see.., so what changes would I need to make it better?

[knucklesx]

the whole card is not good rethink a whole new idea (i do like the name)

[ShinobiDark72]

the whole card is not good rethink a whole new idea (i do like the name)

 

I actually find My card useful, should it be used in a deck where lot's of RFG cards are found, as well as well as cards that can bring it back, like RFTDD, DDR, ETC. otherwsie, it's as Umbra said. It gives 0 advantage.

[bandai]

Let's count playability here. + is for Positive effects and - is for negative.

 

+ You have to summon it in face-up ATK position' date=' with a mere 200 ATK

- Removal only activates if it is during your Battle Phase

- Provides a Pot of Greed if removed that way

+ Cyber Ouroboros when SS'ed

 

Basically, a 0.

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lol umbra what you wrote gave me a little laugh (in a good way)

 

well as for the rating.... i suppose a 2/10 you have an okay idea...keep it up and you will get it ^_^

[Umbra]

the whole card is not good rethink a whole new idea (i do like the name)

 

I actually find My card useful' date=' should it be used in a deck where lot's of RFG cards are found, as well as well as cards that can bring it back, like RFTDD, DDR, ETC. otherwsie, it's as Umbra said. It gives 0 advantage.

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I didn't calculate advantage, that was just personal opinions.

[Xemba]

I find it quite useful. Personally I think it deserves 350 or 400 ATK.

[bury the year]

Eh... I dunno. It just doesn't seem viable. ?/10