Experiment_001 Posted June 9, 2008 Report Share Posted June 9, 2008 [spoiler=Chapter 1]Cinteon: You are dis-gus-ting! Cinteon pushed him down on the carpet. Lykzer: Grr.... Cinteon: What? You want to hit me? Lykzer: YEA! Lyzker dashed foward and gave a heavy punch at the green haired girl. Cinteon: Ah! Lykzer: Hurt? Cinteon: CINTEON IS VERY ANGRY! Knock, Knock Cinteon: Auh...? 'Life Saver' Lykzer mumbled to himself. Cinteon: Huh? What did you say? Lykzer: Um.... Well... Cinteon: Hmmm.....? Lykzer: :!: You go open the door! Cinteon: Oh... Just that. Knock, Knock Cinteon: Comming~ Link: Cinteon? Cinteon opened the door. Cinteon: LINKu-KUN! Link: Oi, what!? Cinteon hugged her beloved Link tightly and begun to rub her head on Link's chest. Cinteon: You~ are~ Home! Link closed his eyes, looked extremely calm and put him hands on Cinteon's shoulder. Cinteon: Hm? Then without warning, was a push. Cinteon: AHHH~~! I hate you now!!! Cinteon ran outside their unit and slammed the door real hard. Lykzer: You know what's going to happen next. Link: Whatever... That won't happen if I run away. Lykzer: True. The two ran away. San: Ahh...STOP! Link: Don't get in our way! San: I'm not. Lykzer: What do you want!? San: A... Then a figure was revealing from San's back. Sin: DUEL! We have no time for that! Sin: Must be in a hurry...don't worry. We won't duel here. We will duel underground. If we win...hah! Don't think about going near Labirium! You win... we'll teach Cinteon a lesson. Link: Sounds good, I'll duel. San: No. Lykzer Vs. Sin. Lykzer&Sin: Duel! Sin: Draw! Set /m*t/! End! 8000<5-5>8000 Lykzer: Draw! Summon /Knux-The Great Swordsman(ATK-2700)/ Sin: Activate /t/! /Mirror Force!/!! Lykzer: Che... 8000<5-5>8000 Sin: Draw! /t/! The Sin's Pain! End! 4000<5-5>4000 (If you activate Sin's Pain, an you activated a trap card the turn before this one, you may halve both players lifepoints) Lykzer: Draw! Summon /Yin and Yang(ATK-0)/! Use /e/! /Tri/! Summon /CrystalStar Dragon/! Attack! Use /e/! End! 0<5-4>4000 Sin: What...!? I lost!? Sin: You rocked. Time to teach her a lesson! Cinteon: Blah blah... Hello AHHH!!!!!!!!!! What you say to what!!!???? Oh... Ok.... No I'm telling the truth!!!! AAAAHHHHHHHHH! [spoiler=Chapter 2]Cinteon:*Slams open door* You told those freaks to ambush you didn't you!? Lykzer: Because I won a duel with them. Cinteon: I hate you! But... Suddenly, my lov ecome back to Link! Lykzer: As... Cinteon: Because he's always so cool, and so kin...and... Lykzer: Always. Cinteon: Also! Duel me! If I win, you tell your servants to never bully me again! Lykzer: Why settle this with a duel? Cinteon: Well Cinteon has a great answer ofr that question! DUN DADADA! THE ULTIMATE ANSWER IS....DUNDADA!!!!!!! THE ALTIMATE ANSWER IS ABOUT TO BE REVEALED! IT IS...THE ULTIMATE ANSWER WILL NOW BE TOLD: BECAUSE CINTEON WANTS TO! Lykzer: Uhh... Great answer... Lets duel! Lykzer: No! Gee! *Walks out of room* Cinteon: CINTEON IS ANGRY!! Cinteon dashed with her ultimate feet and punched Lykzer. Lykzer: FINE! DUEL! Keywords:P1 Player one.P2 Player two/m*t/ Magic or trap card zone./m/ magic card./t/ trap card/e/ activate effect P1- Hah! I /m/ /Rituals(By offering tributes equal to the level of a monster you may special summon on RITUAL monster from your hand with it’s ritual magic card. Example: Tribute 7 Kuriboh tokens and summon dark magician and then summoning black luster soldier with black luster ritual from your hand.)/! End! P2- Dun dun dun! I will now… D-R-A-W~! And I drew the al and mighty~ Dun dadada! The card shall be revealed!!! It is… the card, the strong card…The Dark Magician Girl! P1- You need 1 tribute! P2- What is a tribute? Oh! I see! It’s the dun dadadadadadadad!~ The card that makes you adadadadadadadad stronger! P1- Argh! I surrender! P2- Because I’m too good! Ha! Lalalalalalalalalalaallalaallalaa!!! I ROCK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OMG! To be continued( Sorry for short chapter, even shorter than previous one, I'm not in the mood in making fanfics, my keyboard is near-borken and other stuff.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted June 9, 2008 Report Share Posted June 9, 2008 Explain more on your story,it's hardly understandable & use darker colours so that viewers can see it better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Experiment_001 Posted June 9, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 9, 2008 About colours, I'm sorry,and about story, I did that on purpose. I don't have enough reps to give out so till next day. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archangel of destiny Posted June 9, 2008 Report Share Posted June 9, 2008 this story is kinda confusing but it's funny,and you really should use darker colours trust me if you give out reps you wont loose them,you just loose point's when you donate them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Empolion7654 Posted June 9, 2008 Report Share Posted June 9, 2008 It's good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted June 9, 2008 Report Share Posted June 9, 2008 Good but confusing. Just use black and make it longer. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SebastiaanZ Posted June 9, 2008 Report Share Posted June 9, 2008 Work more on description of the actual stage where your story takes place. You might also want to put the effects of your own-made cards in the fanfic as well, so we understand them better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Experiment_001 Posted June 10, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 10, 2008 You can only give out 5 reps a day, that's what I'm talking about. Cinteon's gonna duel next chapter (and it's going to be real annoying!). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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