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splashable 7 pend support and coin toss engines? oh hell yea these rock. plus it can still make use of the original "7" which is always funny
 the only thing I'd think to specify is the last 'it' in "7's Casino" last line— or maybe its just be, taking a couple rereads to realize it wasn't trying to summon the field spell itself lmao

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4 hours ago, schwa said:

splashable 7 pend support and coin toss engines? oh hell yea these rock. plus it can still make use of the original "7" which is always funny
 the only thing I'd think to specify is the last 'it' in "7's Casino" last line— or maybe its just be, taking a couple rereads to realize it wasn't trying to summon the field spell itself lmao

Thank u! There wasn't really a good way to say the last effect and the text was getting super long. Maybe "it" > "that monster"?

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^^

& for sure. starting from the beginning of that sentence, "You can target 1 DARK Machine monster" is more in line with problem solving text instead of '"take",  so then the very end can become "that targeted monster", and so be referring to the same thing without any pronoun.

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