Roarshack Posted Thursday at 04:24 PM Report Share Posted Thursday at 04:24 PM 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Roarshack Posted Thursday at 04:39 PM Author Report Share Posted Thursday at 04:39 PM I wanted to make a few cards around https://yugipedia.com/wiki/7. Used to think 7 related to 7 Completed, so I mixed it with Bandit Keith. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
schwa Posted Friday at 10:18 AM Report Share Posted Friday at 10:18 AM splashable 7 pend support and coin toss engines? oh hell yea these rock. plus it can still make use of the original "7" which is always funny the only thing I'd think to specify is the last 'it' in "7's Casino" last line— or maybe its just be, taking a couple rereads to realize it wasn't trying to summon the field spell itself lmao 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Roarshack Posted Friday at 02:27 PM Author Report Share Posted Friday at 02:27 PM 4 hours ago, schwa said: splashable 7 pend support and coin toss engines? oh hell yea these rock. plus it can still make use of the original "7" which is always funny the only thing I'd think to specify is the last 'it' in "7's Casino" last line— or maybe its just be, taking a couple rereads to realize it wasn't trying to summon the field spell itself lmao Thank u! There wasn't really a good way to say the last effect and the text was getting super long. Maybe "it" > "that monster"? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
schwa Posted Friday at 02:43 PM Report Share Posted Friday at 02:43 PM ^^ & for sure. starting from the beginning of that sentence, "You can target 1 DARK Machine monster" is more in line with problem solving text instead of '"take", so then the very end can become "that targeted monster", and so be referring to the same thing without any pronoun. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Roarshack Posted Friday at 03:31 PM Author Report Share Posted Friday at 03:31 PM Kk! I think that works. I used "take" b/c some cards use it when they give option on what to do with the monster https://yugipedia.com/wiki/Souleating_Oviraptor . Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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