Ninjix_YT Posted March 7 Report Share Posted March 7 Here are the Current Monsters: Any Suggestions? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LazerSwordKirbo Posted March 7 Report Share Posted March 7 1st: next post please copy the card text beneath the card so it's easier to reference. 2nd: Exo Summoner's pendulum effect condition can be simplified to "When a card is Special Summoned...", and it needs at least 1 once per turn effect to prevent going infinite. 3rd: Divination Master's effect that has a failure condition needs to reveal your hand to prove that you cant ritual summon. 4th: Mouse needs a semi colon after "Zone" I'll read the rest in a bit. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ninjix_YT Posted March 7 Author Report Share Posted March 7 28 minutes ago, LazerSwordKirbo said: 1st: next post please copy the card text beneath the card so it's easier to reference. 2nd: Exo Summoner's pendulum effect condition can be simplified to "When a card is Special Summoned...", and it needs at least 1 once per turn effect to prevent going infinite. 3rd: Divination Master's effect that has a failure condition needs to reveal your hand to prove that you cant ritual summon. 4th: Mouse needs a semi colon after "Zone" I'll read the rest in a bit. Thank you! I fixed the problems. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LazerSwordKirbo Posted March 7 Report Share Posted March 7 5th: On Rabit the phrase "...reset it's effects." is to vague and uses the wrong form of "its", "When this card is a Normal or Special Summoned banish..." has an unneeded a, and most of the effects need a colon and/or semi colon. 6th: On Crow of Bad Omens, the pendulum effect needs to specify that it can only be destroyed by the effects of "Nightfall" cards and not "Nightfall" Effects, and the monster effect needs to specify that it must be used as material for the summon. 7th: On Wolf "each" should be replaced with "this" because it only has 1 activated effect. 8th: Disciple needs a colon after "Pendulum Monster" 9th: Suppression Wizard's listed materials do not work. "2 "Nightfall" Pendulum/Link monsters including "Nightfall Disciple"" would accomplish what you want. The "Ritual or" is redundant in Wizard's effect as well. 10th: Master wizard just has some spelling errors. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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