My Latest Monster (Need some advice)

[J-Max]

Right I'm designing a new monster which can have varied effects depending on the amount of Tributes used to summon it. Also I'm hoping to incorparate a Power Boost depending on the Amount of Tributes used.

 

Here's what I have so fair. (Name is highly Beta)

 

Rainbow Angel

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2000/1200

This monster gains the following effects on how many Tributes you use to Summon.

- 1 Tribute: No Effects

- 2 Tributes. Increase the Original Attack of this monster by 1000

- 3 Tributes: Select 1 Spell card from your Graveyard and add it to your hand. Then discard 2 Random cards to the Graveyard.

- 4 Tributes: This monster may Attack your Opponent directly

- 5 Tributes: Destroy all cards on the field except this card. This card gains 500 ATK for each card destroyed by this effect.

[Wyhe]

great card,but you should include the "effects do not accumulate" part

[J-Max]

Is that all? It can't be that perfect? Oh and where would I add Effects do not accumalate?

[Wyhe]

Rainbow Angel

******

2000/1200

This monster gains the following effects on how many Tributes you use to Summon.[insert here]

- 1 Tribute: No Effects

- 2 Tributes. Increase the Original Attack of this monster by 1000

- 3 Tributes: Select 1 Spell card from your Graveyard and add it to your hand. Then discard 2 Random cards to the Graveyard.

- 4 Tributes: This monster may Attack your Opponent directly

- 5 Tributes: Destroy all cards on the field except this card. This card gains 500 ATK for each card destroyed by this effect.

 

just follow the boldened portion

[Bloodrun]

This monster gains the following effects on how many Tributes you use to Summon.

- 1 Tribute: No Effects

- 2 Tributes. Increase the Original Attack of this monster by 1000

. . . . . . ... .. .... . . . . . . . . . . . ATK

- 3 Tributes: Select 1 Spell card from your Graveyard and add it to your hand. Then discard 2 Random cards to the Graveyard.

- 4 Tributes: This monster may Attack your Opponent directly

- 5 Tributes: Destroy all cards on the field except this card. This card gains 500 ATK for each card destroyed by this effect.

[Nightfallen]

also, unless you plaining on makeing a card that increases sacrifices needed for a card, I would sujest that you put somewere, "You can tribute any number of monsters to tribute summon this monster."

[Umbra]

Also, change the first sentence into "This card gains one of the following effects, depending on the number of monsters you Released for this card.