Atomix Posted June 11, 2008 Report Share Posted June 11, 2008 This is brill, sorry I haven't commented sooner but I've sayed out of this section for a bit. And I have to say congratz, you didn't stop and start over again :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliminateHRN Posted June 11, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 11, 2008 Wow thanks yall liking it making me keep writing this so I'm glad you like it the next episode should be up Friday Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliminateHRN Posted June 11, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 11, 2008 Wow thanks yall liking it making me keep writing this so I'm glad you like it the next episode should be up Friday Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliminateHRN Posted June 12, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 12, 2008 Sorry for double post but here is a preview of episode 5 and the preview takes place after the duel (as i don't won't to give any of the duel away) [spoiler=Preview of Episode 5]Riley: What is wrong with him?! Alxe charged forward and a sword appeared in his hand. He slashed at Riley, but Riley jumped away. Ryan and Arron both tackled Alxe. Alxe fought back on the ground. Ryan got up and Riley took his place. Ryan: Move your hand Riley. Riley moved his hand. Ryan took out his bow and arrow. Ryan: On three let go, guys. One........................two....................three. Riley and Arron let go and Alxe jumped up just in time to get hit by a arrow from Ryan. He fell backwards and clinched the arrow. He then looked up at them. Alxe: It ain't over.  Hope you like the preview Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted June 12, 2008 Report Share Posted June 12, 2008 Guess someone can't take a defeat gracefully. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliminateHRN Posted June 13, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 13, 2008 Well what if he wins? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliminateHRN Posted June 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 16, 2008 Here is Episode 6 and I came up with something entertaining after the episode, BLOOPERS!!!!!!!!!! So once the episode is done there will be bloopers from scenes in the episode just like a real TV Show. There might be errors in the duel if so just tell me. Episode 06 - Busy Crush Alxe: I'll go first. Draw! Now I place 1 card face-down, and now I Summon Zure, Knight of Dark World in DEF Mode to end. (4000 Life Points) Riley: I draw. Now I play Pot of Greed to draw 2 more cards. Now I Summon Undersea Serpent in DEF Mode. End. (4000 Life Points)[spoiler=Cards]  Alxe: Draw! Now I place 1 card face-down, then play Graceful Charity to draw 3 cards then discard 2 cards. Now one of them was Kahkki, Guerilla of Dark World so I get too destroy one of your monsters, so say goodbye to your Undersea Dragon. Now the other was Beiige, Vanguard of Dark World so I Special Summon him from the Graveyard in ATK Mode. To end. (4000 Life Points) Riley looked at him as dust flew by. Maddie: His he stalling too? Arron: I don't think so. Riley: I draw. Now I place 1 card face-down, now I Summon Volcano Minion Dragon in ATK Mode. Now Minion Dragon attack his Beiige. Volcano Minion Dragon slashed at Beiige. He destroyed Beiige and inflicted 100 damage to Alxe's Life Points. Riley: Now I end. (4000 Life Points) Alxe: Draw! Now I Summon Broww, Huntsman of Dark World in DEF Mode. End. (3900 Life Points) Riley: I draw. Now I Summon Unclosed Black Dragon in ATK Mode. Now I use his effect so I destroy your 2 face-down cards. Now attack his Broww. Unclosed Black Dragon attacked, and destroyed, Broww. Riley: Now Volcano Minion Dragon attack his Zure. Volcano Minion Dragon attacked Zure and destroyed it. Riley: Now I end. (4000 Life Points)[spoiler=Cards]Name: Unclosed Black DragonLevel: 4Attribute: DARKType: Dragon / EffectLore: When this card is Summoned, destroy up to 2 face-down cards on your opponent's side of the field.ATK / DEF: 1600 / 1300  Alxe: Draw! I Summon my other Zure, Knight of Dark World in ATK Mode. Now Zure attack his Volcano Minion Dragon. Zure attacked Volcano Minion Dragon and destroyed it. Alxe: Now I end. (3900 Life Points) Riley: Draw! I play Monster Reborn to Special Summon Undersea Dragon in ATK Mode from my Graveyard. Now with Undersea Dragon's effect all Dragon-Type monsters to gain 500 ATK Points except him. So Unclosed Black Dragon ATK goes up to 2100. Now Unclosed Black Dragon attack his Zure. Unclosed Black Dragon slashed at Zure and destroyed him.  Riley: End. (3900 Life Points) Alxe: I draw. Then I play Graceful Charity to draw 3 cards then discard 2 cards. The 2 cards are Golld, Wu-Lord of Dark World and Sillva, Warlord of Dark World so I Special Summon both of them in ATK Mode. End. (3600 Life Points) Riley: Draw! Now I remove from play Volcano Minion Dragon from the Graveyard to Special Summon Blazing Volcano Dragon in ATK Mode and with Undersea Dragon's effect his ATK goes up to 3200. Now Blazing attack his Goldd. Blazing Volcano Dragon attacked and destroyed Goldd. Riley: End. (3900 Life Points) Alxe: Draw! I Summon Scarr, Scout of Dark World in ATK Mode. End. (2700 Life Points) Riley: I draw. Now Undersea Dragon attack his Scarr. Undersea Dragon attacked and destroyed Scarr. Alxe: I'll use Scarr's effect so now I'll add 1 Renge, Gatekeeper of Dark World to my hand from the Deck. Riley: Okay now Blazing attack his Sillva. Blazing Volcano Dragon attacked his Sillva and destroyed it.  Riley: End. (3900 Life Points) Alxe: I draw. Now I Summon Renge in DEF Mode. End. (1000 Life Points. Riley: Draw. Now Blazing Volcano Dragon attack his Renge then Undersea Dragon attack his Life Points for the win. As they attacked him, Alxe's LP went to 0. Reily: Good game. Alxe looked up with blood like eyes. Riley: What is wrong with him?! Alxe charged forward and a sword appeared in his hand. He slashed at Riley, but Riley jumped away. Ryan and Arron both tackled Alxe. Alxe fought back on the ground. Ryan got up and Riley took his place. Ryan: Move your hand Riley. Riley moved his hand. Ryan took out his bow and arrow. Ryan: On three let go, guys. One........................two....................three. Riley and Arron let go and Alxe jumped up just in time to get hit by a arrow from Ryan. He fell backwards and clinched the arrow. He then looked up at them. Alxe: It ain't over. Ryan: For now it is. Ending Theme[spoiler=Bloopers]Blooper 1:Riley: Draw. Now Blazing Volcano Dragon attack his Renge then Undersea Dragon attack his Life Points for the win. As they attacked him, Alxe's LP went to 0. Riley: Erm....................what is my line? Ryan and Arron fell backwards. Arron: Don't even know what your line is.~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Bloopers 2:Riley moved his hand. Ryan took out his bow and arrow. Ryan then tripped on a rock. Ryan: ****! Riley: You can't curse in a YCM Fan-Fic, mate.  Hope you like this I tryed my best the next episode should be up tonight (yes tonight) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted June 16, 2008 Report Share Posted June 16, 2008 good duel,though dun underrstand why that guy had to go killing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliminateHRN Posted June 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 16, 2008 You will see why later Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliminateHRN Posted June 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 16, 2008 Here is epsiode 6 and this episode is the ending of the prairie part and they find a new character and you will see if they get the scorpion snake blood Episode 07 - Charge! Maddie was making breakfeast for the others. It was around 9:00 when finally the others woke up. Maddie: Finally you guys are up. Riley fell down on the ground. Maddie: What's wrong sleppy head? Riley: Bite me. They ate breakfeast and got their stuff together. They were expecting to get the blood and get out of the prairie today. Five hours past. Ryan stopped and looked at the others. Ryan: Hush. Ryan saw two Scorpion Snakes on the ground. He pulled out his bow and arrow. He shot the arrow and barely missed the first one and got a piece of the second one. The Scorpion Snake defended themselves. Ryan: I'm going to have to kill one because two is dangerous. He shot at the front one and the arrow split through the snakes chest. It fell down to the ground. Ryan pulled out his last arrow hoping to get a positive hit on it. He shot his last arrow and hit the last snake on the neck. It died and they went over to it. Arron: Good hit, Ryan. Ryan: Thanks. Help me get the blood. They got the blood and put it in a container. Riley then put the container in the plastic bag. Spirit: So when do we make it? Ryan: Later tonight. Everybody shook their head. It ws about 10:00 when they put up camp. Riley: Ryan, I have a question. They were sitting beside a camp fire. Ryan: What is it? Riley: Well why did you kill Alxe? Just wanted to know. Ryan: Well for two reasons. Because he was trying to kill you and he was one of the bad guys. Riley shook his head. They started making the potion. Ryan put the fur and bark in their first and stirred it. Ten minutes later he put the res in there. It turned a orangish color.  Ryan: Once I put it on it should fill much better. Ryan then put the potion on his hand and Riley's ankle. It kinda burned but it felt good. They went to sleep.***********************************Cloaked Man: Well another man of ours has been defeated. But now this time I'm sdending two to go duel.***********************************Riley and the gang was already out of the prairie for about four days already. They were now just traveling through some sort of old town. ???: What are you guys looking for? They stopped dead in their tracks and looked behind them. There was a girl standing there. Riley: Well we are looking for a cloaked man with a stone in his hand. ???: Haven't saw someone like that but I could come along and help. Riley: Sure. Anyone is welcome to come along. I'm Riley, this is Ryan, Maddie, Spirit, and Arron. ???: I'm Raven Ride. Arron: Cool. They then set off and started talking with Raven. Another seven days past. Raven: So what is the stone called? Spirit: Infinite Savior. Raven: Hm. Sounds powerful. Riley: It is as it said whoever controls it gains infinite power. Raven: Then it is powerful. ???: Hahahahahahaha. Riley: What the -? ???: I'm Zaxe and this is Yui. Arron: What do you want? Zaxe: We want to have a tag team duel. Ending Theme Hope you like the episode I worked hard on it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted June 16, 2008 Report Share Posted June 16, 2008 a tag team duel,yay!Now,things are moving up the level. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted June 16, 2008 Report Share Posted June 16, 2008 a tag team duel,yay!Now,things are moving up the level. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted June 16, 2008 Report Share Posted June 16, 2008 a tag team duel,yay!Now,things are moving up the level. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliminateHRN Posted June 17, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 17, 2008 Thanks the next episode should be up Friday as this is my first tag team duel so I want to take it slowly. Also why they isn't no bloopers they didn't make any mistakes LOL Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliminateHRN Posted June 17, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 17, 2008 Thanks the next episode should be up Friday as this is my first tag team duel so I want to take it slowly. Also why they isn't no bloopers they didn't make any mistakes LOL Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliminateHRN Posted June 17, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 17, 2008 Thanks the next episode should be up Friday as this is my first tag team duel so I want to take it slowly. Also why they isn't no bloopers they didn't make any mistakes LOL Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted June 17, 2008 Report Share Posted June 17, 2008 Thanks the next episode should be up Friday as this is my first tag team duel so I want to take it slowly. Also why they isn't no bloopers they didn't make any mistakes LOLOh.Your bloopers are what makes this fanfic unique, just the unique-ness of Jackie Chan movies. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted June 17, 2008 Report Share Posted June 17, 2008 Thanks the next episode should be up Friday as this is my first tag team duel so I want to take it slowly. Also why they isn't no bloopers they didn't make any mistakes LOLOh.Your bloopers are what makes this fanfic unique, just the unique-ness of Jackie Chan movies. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted June 17, 2008 Report Share Posted June 17, 2008 Thanks the next episode should be up Friday as this is my first tag team duel so I want to take it slowly. Also why they isn't no bloopers they didn't make any mistakes LOLOh.Your bloopers are what makes this fanfic unique, just the unique-ness of Jackie Chan movies. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliminateHRN Posted June 17, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 17, 2008 Don't worry the bloopers will be in the next few episodes :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliminateHRN Posted June 17, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 17, 2008 Don't worry the bloopers will be in the next few episodes :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted June 17, 2008 Report Share Posted June 17, 2008 Really good epsiode!! Like the blooper things. Nice new name dosen't go with your avi though. Anyway back on topic, keep up the good work and can't wait for the next epsiode. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted June 17, 2008 Report Share Posted June 17, 2008 Really good epsiode!! Like the blooper things. Nice new name dosen't go with your avi though. Anyway back on topic, keep up the good work and can't wait for the next epsiode. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliminateHRN Posted June 18, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 18, 2008 Thanks and I'm going to request a new Avi but still thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliminateHRN Posted June 19, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 19, 2008 Guys changed the name to Yu-Gi-Oh: Legion's Breath! . And next season will be called Yu-Gi-Oh: Legion's Breath! Revelation (it will still be the Season 2 though it will have Revelation in it's name). And I pick that name as Revelation means Uncovering or Revelaing and you will see some pretty secret stuff that will be "uncovered" next season :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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