EliminateHRN Posted June 2, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 2, 2008 Guys updated the first post with a Banner that was made by Simplicity Ninja and here a Preview of Episode 3 [spoiler=Preview of Episode 3]Riley was standing infront of that "thing". It looked like a big snake and it had large fangs. It charged at Riley. Riley was to slow for that big snake, as it bit Riley in the ankle. A arrow came out of no where and hit the big snake, and that made it disappear in the bushes and trees. That was the preview you will find out who shot that arrow and what that "big snake" was Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliminateHRN Posted June 2, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 2, 2008 Guys updated the first post with a Banner that was made by Simplicity Ninja and here a Preview of Episode 3 [spoiler=Preview of Episode 3]Riley was standing infront of that "thing". It looked like a big snake and it had large fangs. It charged at Riley. Riley was to slow for that big snake, as it bit Riley in the ankle. A arrow came out of no where and hit the big snake, and that made it disappear in the bushes and trees. That was the preview you will find out who shot that arrow and what that "big snake" was Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted June 2, 2008 Report Share Posted June 2, 2008 Interesting. You fan fics have never dissapointed me. This is personally my favourate. Just give me a shout when the next chapter is out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted June 2, 2008 Report Share Posted June 2, 2008 Interesting. You fan fics have never dissapointed me. This is personally my favourate. Just give me a shout when the next chapter is out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliminateHRN Posted June 2, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 2, 2008 Wow thanks glad you like them and I sure it should be posted either tomorrow, Thursday, or Friday (most likely tomorrow or Thursday) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliminateHRN Posted June 2, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 2, 2008 Wow thanks glad you like them and I sure it should be posted either tomorrow, Thursday, or Friday (most likely tomorrow or Thursday) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliminateHRN Posted June 3, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 3, 2008 Okay here is episode 3 I know I said it would be out tomorrow or Thursday but I finished it early XD also there is no duel in this episode but the first MAJOR duel will be in the next Episode 03 - Breaker Reveals It was a sunny day as Riley, Arron, Maddie, and Spirit was getting read to go follow the cloaked man. They made sure they had everything. Riley: Ready? Maddie: Yep. Riley: Then come on. They went outside. It was sunny and bright, but the wind made it feel warm out. Maddie and Arron went to go tell their parents that they will be gone. They met Riley and Spirit on the edge of town. Maddie: They said it was fine. Riley: Okay. They left town and started their journey. Riley: This is the first time I actually left town. Maddie: Really? Riley: Yep and it feels great. Arron: You don't get out much, do you? They laughed at that. With every step the town got smaller and smaller until it finally disappeared.********************************A helicopter landed in some sort of prairie. Four men got off of it. ???: So this is it? ???: Yep, guess it is okay. ???: Michael, shut up. Michael: Zack, you shut up. They started fighting each other. ???: Will you two stop it? Zack: Fine, Rason, we will stop. Rason: Where is Tim? Michael: There he is. Tim was standing looking at something in the distance. Rason: What are you looking at? Tim: That. He pointed at dark figures coming from an distance. The army, as there where on a mission and there were at the base with the others men who are on the mission, got out their weapons. Tim: Put your hands up. The cloaked, dark figures came closer and closer. Just before the men was about to shoot, the leading dark figure, who was holding something, did something with his hands. A "thing" came out of the the sky, it was well over 10 feet. It started attacking the camp. The men shot at that and the dark figures. Then the men started retreating. The thing stomped on men and shot some men. Rason and the others couldn't get a good look at it. Then Tim was throwed up in the air by some sort of snake like thing. He was caught by the thing that was attaking the camp. He couldn't really get a good look at it becuase he was, again, threw in the air and the thing shot him. Rason and the others couldn't help him as they retreated.**********************************The next few days for Riley and the gang was almost perfect, though couldn't find the dark figure or the Infinite Savior. they approached a place called the Shozare Prairie. It was the biggest priaire around these parts. Riley: Come on. They went in. The place was warm and they had alot of animals. The next two days were like the others, perfect but couldn't find him. It was around noon and they needed food. It was Riley's turn to find food. Riley: I'll be back, guys. Maddie: Okay. We will go find some wood. Riley started walking to find some food. As he walked he thought he saw something that looks tasty. He taste it as it saw him coming. Finally after about five minutes trying to get it, he saw what it was. Riley: What the helk? Riley was standing infront of the thing. It looked like a big snake and it had large fangs. It charged at Riley. Riley was to slow for that big snake, as it bit Riley in the ankle. A arrow came out of no where and hit the big snake, and that made it disappear in the bushes and trees. Riley fell down as pain shot through his ankle. He saw someone come up. ???: Riley? RILEY! Riley: What, Huh? He was laying on a log around where they sleeped last night. He knew he was in the camp. Riley: What happened. ???: You got bit by a animal called Scorpion Snake. There was a boy standing behind the fire. He came up to Riley and kneeled down beside him. ???: A Scorpion Snake is a very dangerous snake as it grows nearly 15 feet long and wieghs up to 2,000 pounds. It is poisonous but won't kill you just make you very weak. I got the poison out of your ankle so you don't have to worry. He wrapped a cloth around Riley's ankle. Riley: Thanks. What is your name? ???: My name is Ryan Speed, I have been a duelist for years and lived in this desert for years also. Riley sit up. Ryan: Here is something to drink. He gave Riley some water. Spirit: So you okay, Riley? Riley: Yeah I'm okay, Spirit. Ryan: So you are looking for something called the Infinite Savior? Riley: Yeah but we can't find any trace of it or the cloaked man. Maddie and Arron shook their head in disappointment. Ryan: Well I saw someone that was carrying something earlyier yesterday. Riley: Really? Ryan: Yep I could come with you as I know this prairie from up and down. Riley: Well since you know this place you can come with us. Maddie and Arron seemed happy. Arron: Well welcome to the gang, Ryan. They packed the things and started walking south with their new friend, Ryan. Ending Theme Well next episode there will be the first major duel so hope you like it :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted June 3, 2008 Report Share Posted June 3, 2008 Very cool chapter! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliminateHRN Posted June 3, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 3, 2008 Thanks I'll try to get the chapter (with the first Major Duel) in the next few days I just need to make the last few cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliminateHRN Posted June 4, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 4, 2008 Guys sorry for Double Post but the next episode should be up in 2-3 days :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliminateHRN Posted June 5, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 5, 2008 Guys sorry for Triple Post but here is a sneak preview of the next episode [spoiler=Preview of Epsiode 3]Riley was looking through his deck, when pain shot through his ankle. He grabbed it as it started burning. He knew it was from the Scorpion Snake. The others was off finding food so no one was around. He put his Deck up and fell down on the ground. After a few minutes he passed out. I know what your thinking......... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted June 5, 2008 Report Share Posted June 5, 2008 Oh no,they better find a cure for that bite or else this story will be 1 character short. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliminateHRN Posted June 5, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 5, 2008 Hehe yeah I know you will find out later XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted June 6, 2008 Report Share Posted June 6, 2008 Wait!It's obvious that the cure will be found otherwise there's no show going on. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliminateHRN Posted June 6, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 6, 2008 LOL caught me anyway I was going to finish the peisode tonight but it got delayed for a little thunder storm so I'll have epsidoe 4 up later today Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliminateHRN Posted June 7, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 7, 2008 Okay here is epsiode 4 I'll have another episode or two tonight :D so stay tuned also I'm not quite sure about the rulings for the Gladiators Beast but if I messsed up on something please tell me and I'll change it. And some of these cards are made up but I haven't made it into a card yet. And like I said anything I messed up with in the duel please tell me and finally the more major duels will come up later (this is a major duel but the more major duels will come later :D) [center][url=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vzz_2ISJpKY]Opening Theme[/center][url=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vzz_2ISJpKY][/url] [center][b][u]Episode 04 - Infinite Hole[/center][b][u][/b][/u] It was a few days after Riley and the gang met Ryan Speed. Riley still had pain in his ankle from that bit that Scorpion Snake a few days ago. Maddie: Riley, we going to find some food. Riley: Okay. As they left Riley took out his Deck. Riley was looking through his deck, when pain shot through his ankle. He grabbed it as it started burning. He knew it was from the Scorpion Snake. The others was off finding food so no one was around. He put his Deck up and fell down on the ground. After a few minutes he passed out. He don't now how long he was passed out but after about a few minutes he heard faint noises until he fainted completely. Then he woke up as Ryan through a bucket of water on him. Riley: Ryan?! Ryan: You scared us there for a second. Ryan looked at Riley's ankle. Then he looked at the others. Ryan: It won't heal like this. Arron: Then how will it heal? Ryan: There is a antidote but we need the stuff to make it. Spirit shifted as he looked at Ryan. Arron: Well what do we need? Ryan: Meerkat Fur, Leaf from a Erase Plant, Bark from a Aszx Tree, and.................*voice trails off* All: And what? Ryan: Blood from a Scorpion Snake. [center]************************************[/center] The cloaked man was holding the Infinite Savior in his left hand. He looked behind him. There were several other cloaked man behind him. ???: Zanyx, I think it is your job. Zanyx: Yes, sir. [center]************************************[/center] Riley, Ryan, and the others were silently creeping up on a Meerkat. Ryan: Then get your weapon ready. He got a arrow ready to shoot. Ryan: Then........ He shot the arrow. It landed right on the meerkat. Riley: Won't it kill him? Ryan: No. It is a sleeping arrow. Riley: But cutting it will right? Ryan: No, you will see. Ryan went up to the meerkat. He slowly cut off some of the fur. He then put it in a plastic bag Maddie was holding. Ryan took the arrow out and gave the meerkat a pill. It woke up and took off. Ryan: There. They heard something behind them. They turned around. It was a cloaked man with a duel disk and a deck in his hand. Riley: Who are you? Arron: And why are you wearing that cloak? Spirit: And where do you come from? Spirit hid behind Ryan. Zanyx: I'm Zanyx and I want to duel him. He pointed at Riley. Riley: Fine I accept. Spirit: But Riley he seems evil. Ryan: Because he is. Maddie: What do you mean. Ryan looked down South. Ryan: He was with that guy with the Infinite Savior, or atleast whering that same robe that everyone else was wearing. As Riley went up to him, he clinched his ankle. He fell down. Ryan: Here Riley I'll do this guy. You sit down and rest. Riley obeyed and sat down on the side line. Maddie sat down on the right of him and Arron on the left. Spirit sat in his lap. Zanyx: Well I wanted to duel him but I can deal with you. Maddie: This going to be the first time we see his deck. Arron: I know wonder what it is. Both: Duel! Zanyx: I'll go first. I draw then put 2 cards face-down. Now I summon [url=http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Venom_Serpent]Venom Serpent[/url] in ATK Mode to end my turn. (4000 Life Points) Ryan: I draw. Now I summon [url=http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Gladiator_Beast_Andal]Gladiator Beast Andal[/url] in DEF Mode. Now I place 1 card face-down to end my turn. (4000 Life Points) Riely looked at Arron. He seemed like he was enjoying this duel. Zanyx: Draw! I play Venom Snatch to send one Venom Monster in my Deck to the Graveyard to inflict 800 damage to your Life Points. Zanyx took a card from the his Deck and sent it to the Graveyard. Ryan took 800 damage. Zanyx: Now I Tribute Venom Serpent to summon [url=http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Venom_Boa]Venom Boa[/url] in DEF Mode. I end. (4000 Life Points) Ryan: I draw. Now I play [url=http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Gladiator_Beast%27s_Respite]Gladiator Beast's Respite[/url] to return [url=http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Gladiator_Beast_Torax]Gladiator Beast Torax[/url] and [url=http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Gladiator_Beast_Hoplomus]Gladiator Beast Hoplomus[/url] to the Deck to draw 3 cards. Now I summon [url=http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Test_Ape]Test Ape[/url] in DEF Mode to end my turn. (3200 Life Points) Zanyx: Draw. Now I play [url=http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Venom_Swamp]Venom Swamp[/url]. Now I use Venom Boa's effect, so I'll place 1 Venom Counter on each of your monsters. Andal's ATK goes to 1400 and Test Ape's ATK goes to 200. Zanyx: Now I summon [url=http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Venom_Snake]Venom Snake[/url] in DEF Mode. End. (4000 Life Points) Ryan: I draw. Now I place 1 card face-down, now I play Gladiator Beast's Sacrifice. So now I Tribute 1 "Gladiator Beast" monster in my hand to let 1 face-up "Gladiator Beast" monster attack you directly. Now attack him Andal. Andal attacked and inflicted 1400 damage. Ryan: Now I end. (3200 Life Points) Zanyx: Draw. Now I Tribute Venoim Snake to summon another Venom Boa in ATK Mode. Venom Boa attack his Test Ape. Boa attacked and sent Test Ape to the Graveyard. Ryan: I use his effect so now I Special Summon [url=http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Gladiator_Beast_Bestiari]Gladiator Beast Bestiari[/url] in ATK Mode. Zanyx: Okay and now Venom Boa attack his Andal. The other Boa attacked and destroyed Andal, inflicting 200 damage to Ryan's Life Points. Zanyx: End. (2600 Life Points) Ryan: I draw. Now I Tribute Bestiari to summon [url=http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Gladiator_Beast_Spartacus]Gladiator Beast Spartacus[/url] in ATK Mode. Now Spartacus attack his Boa. Spartacus attacked Zanyx's Boa. He destroyed it and inflicted 800 damage. Ryan: Now I place 1 card face-down to end. (3000 Life Points) Zanyx: Draw! Now I place 1 card face-down to end my turn. (1800 Life Points) Maddie leaned in on Riley. Maddie: What is Zanyx trying to do? Riley: Not sure. Arron: If he is a enemy, possibly just stalling. Ryan: I draw. Now I summon [url=http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Gladiator_Beast_Murmillo]Gladiator Beast Murmillo[/url] in ATK Mode to end my turn. (3000 Life Points) Zanyx: I draw. Now summon Venom Snake in ATK Mode. Sadly I end. Ryan: Draw. Now I summon [url=http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Gladiator_Beast_Laquari]Gladiator Beast Laquari[/url] in ATK Mode. Now Spartacus attack his Venom Snake. As Spartacus attacked and destroyed Venom Snake, inflicting 1000 damage to Zanyx's Life Points. Ryan: Now Laquari attack his Boa. As Laquari attacked Zanyx's last Boa, he inflicted 200. Ryan: Now, Murmillo attack and finish this. Murmillo attack and finished this duel. Ryan: You need to step up your game man. Zanyx: I'm the lowest rank of all of them, I wasn't trying to win. Maddie, Arron, Riley, and Spirit got up and walked over to him. Ryan: Then what was you doing? Zanyx: I was stalling and I think I gave....................them..................enough....................ti..........me. He finally disappeared as he finished the sentence in a dark cloud. Arron: If he [i]was[/i] stalling we can't stop. Riley: Right. [center][url=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MJ4f9lo927g]Ending Theme[/center][url=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MJ4f9lo927g][/url] Well like Zanyx said h was just stalling, hope you like it and episode 5 up later tonight, hopefully. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted June 7, 2008 Report Share Posted June 7, 2008 good chapter,but I'm not impressed at the duel.The Venom monsters are not used in the way they are designated to in the 1st place,that duel is an insult to their kind & Venominaga as well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliminateHRN Posted June 7, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 7, 2008 I know it I'm not really use to Venom and Gladiator Beast Decks but the next duel will be better and the Venom monsters will appear agian Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted June 7, 2008 Report Share Posted June 7, 2008 Advice from the LORD:wHEN WORKING WITH DECKS IN FANFICS,KNOW WHAT THE DECK CAN & SUPPOSE TO DO FIRST,THEN WORK TO ACHIEVE THE RESULT. Apology of the lord:sorry for wrong capitalisation. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliminateHRN Posted June 8, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 8, 2008 Okay though I had some help with one of my friend that run a Venom Deck and episode 5 up later tonight :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliminateHRN Posted June 10, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 10, 2008 Well sorry I didn't get episode 5 up last night started watching Spider-Man 3 but I will TRY to get episode 5 up today Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yasu Posted June 10, 2008 Report Share Posted June 10, 2008 10/10Spirit = Ryukchicken wings = Apples Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliminateHRN Posted June 11, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 11, 2008 Erm......okay anyway I'll give out all the reps in a minute :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliminateHRN Posted June 11, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 11, 2008 Here is episode 5. I hope you like it. There aren't no duel though in the next one there will be :D Episode 05 - Invisible Force Ryan: There it is. It was three days after Ryan defeated Zanyx. There were trying to get the stuff to make the antidote for the bite on Riley's ankle. Ryan just saw the Erase Plant. Maddie: I'll get the leaf. Maddie pulled the leaf off the stem and gave it to Ryan, who put it in a plastic bag. Spirit: Now we need the bark and the blood. Arron: The bark will be easy to get though not sure about the blood. They started off. Ryan: The Aszx Tree is usally close to the Erase Plant. Riley: Cool. Ryan didn't answer. He stopped suddenly. Maddie: Wh - Ryan: Hush. He turned his head to the right. The saw something moving on the ground. Riley: Is that what I think it is? Ryan: Yes. Ryan slowly got out his bow and arrow. Then the Scorpion Snake saw them and raised it head and hissed. Ryan shot the arrow but the snake dodged it. Ryan started moving around, as he shot another arrow. It hit the snake on the back. It started to retreat. Ryan: Get it! They all started running towards it. Maddie: Want it bite us? Ryan: Not if you are careful. Ryan jumped towards it and grabbed it tail. Before it could turn it head to bit Ryan, Arron jumped on his head, closing his mouth. Riley, Maddie, and Spirit helped getting the blood out. Though when Arron let go to get the arrow out it turned around and bit Ryan on the hand. In suprise Ryan let go and the snake retreated. Maddie: You okay? Ryan: Yeah I saw it coming so I let go of it before it really got a hold of me. They looked at the bite. It was a little scrap on the side of his hand, nothing big though. Riley: Well happy you are okay. Spirit: Yeah glad your okay. They started to walking, trying to find the tree. After about five hours, they finally found the Aszx Tree. Riley ripped some of the bark off.*************************************The Cloaked man was walking with the rest of the group. Cloaked Man: Seemed Zanyx has failed. Everyone laughed. Cloaked Man: But I have another plan.*************************************Riley: Well we have the bark, we just need that damn blood. Then the skys turned a dark black color. Spirit: Whats going on? Riley: I'm not sure. Then another cloaked figure appeared. Arron: Who are you? Cloaked Man: I'm Alxe and I'm part of the group the guy you defeated a few days ago. Riley: Great. Up for a duel? Alxe: Always. Riley could see the man's eyes. It was like blood. Both: Duel. Ending Theme Sorry guys if it is short I did my best on it. Also the next will be longer has it will have the duel in it :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted June 11, 2008 Report Share Posted June 11, 2008 I wonder how the duel will be like & if the poison ever get cured. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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