Experiment_001 Posted May 30, 2008 Report Share Posted May 30, 2008 [spoiler=Characters][spoiler=Little Spirit]Gender: MaleAppearance: He has short Navy hair, golden and pointy earrings. A band type of necklace of his neck is also worn. A golden band is also worn on his right arm. His top is a jacket without zippers; the jacket is sleeveless like a singlet. He then has long black pants.Bio: A 17 years old boy, he serves as the Main Protagonist in the story. He has many friends, but the main ones are Link and Jinsi; who seems to be his Girlfriend. Little Spirit’s true name is Lykzer. [spoiler=Link]Gender: MaleAppearance: He has short hair like Little Spirit, but this time with the colour Teal. He wears a White Buttoned Singlet with Long black Pants.Bio: A 21 years old boy, he serves as one of the protagonists in the story. He has Jinsi and Little Spirit as his only friends, though he has a crush on Kinly. [spoiler=Jinsi]Gender: FemaleAppearance: #1: She has Purple Medium length hair with a singlet like Link’s except it exposes her stomach and then she has short (Very short) whitey-purpley pants. #2: Long (long!) purple hair with a black, long sleeved jacket, covering her pants. #3: Long (Not that long) purple hair with a purple and white T-shirt and purple and white pants.Bio: She is 16 and serves as one of the Protagonists in the story. She knows very much about Little Spirit. She likes going in a “messing around” club. [spoiler=Kinly]Gender: FemaleAppearance: Medium Length black hair with a black singlet and short black pants.Bio: She is a 27 years old woman and serves as a minor character in the story. She has a crush on Link and loves dueling. Oh! I forgot to mention she likes to wink a lot as well *wink* San&Sin coming soon! [spoiler=Volume one][spoiler=Chapter One]L.S.: Oh my god! Will this tunnel EVER end?? *Stands up for a stretch* BUMP! L.S.: OUCH! ?: Who's so noisy? L.S.: Finally, a Saviour! UMM! OLD MAN! PLEASE HELP ME! I'm STUCK UNDER THIS TUNNEL! ?: Sure, but only if you call me, Super Young, Cool Boss. L.S: Super Young, Cool Boss, please help me. ?: Sure! *Opens a hole in the tunnel* Little Spirit: What's your name? Little Spirit: Oh...Wait... you're no stranger! Link: OK, so it really was you, Little Spirit? Little Spirit: How did you know it was me? Link: The others already came up, you slowpoke. Little Spirit: TT___TT Link: Hah ha! Little Spirit: *Looks in a little hut and sees a fortune teller* Wow! A Fortune teller! I better check it out! Link: You baby! Fine, go by yourself. Little Spirit: That's completely fine with me. *Runs to the hut* Fortune Teller: Hello Lykzer. Little Spirit: Well hello. WAIT! How did you know my real name? Fortune Teller: I know everything about you... Little Spirit: But there's only one person who knows it... Fortune Teller: Like your girlfriend? Little Spirit: You know too much! Fortune Teller: Yes, I know everything... Little Spirit: Just who are you???? Fortune Teller: I'll tell you my nickname, Yait. Duel me, if you win, you get to know my true identity. Little Spirit & Yait: DUEL! Little Spirit: I shall start the duel off! DRAW! (6 cards) Now, I will put Comet Dragon in ATK mode! (5 cards) (ATK=1800). Yait: Oh, yes... the Comet Dragon, the card with a high ATK power, and can wipe out all Insect type monsters on the field when Summoned, too bad I don't have any on the field. Little Spirit: I will now put 2 cards face down! (3 cards). Now, Turn end! Yait: My turn. I will draw! (6 cards). I will now put these cards down...(4 cards) Little Spirit: No monsters? Yait: turn, end. Little Spirit: My turn! I draw! (4 cards). Now, I will attack with my Comet Dragon! Yait: I activate trap! The recycling bin! I can now, absorb the attack, and fire it back, at your life points! Then I can set it on the field again! Little Spirit: %$&%&*%^????? (LP=6200) Turn end! Yait: I will now activate my spell card! The Defense Fortress' builders! By just not drawing this turn and not having any monsters on the field last turn, I can Special Summon one Defense Fortress from my deck to the field! (DEF=2000) Now, I will use this card! (3 cards) to select any Spell Card from my deck to my hand! (4 cards) Now, I will use it! (3 cards) to double one of my monster's ATK and DEF points! (ATK=0 DEF=4000) Little Spirit: I will now draw! (5 cards). I will now put two cards face down, and I activate one! I can decrease one of your monster's DEF by the amount of my life points! (DEF=0). ATTACK! Yait: Good enough, but remember, my Recycling bin is still here, if you try to attack directly, you will lose more lifepoints! Little Spirit: This is never going to be bad! I use the Spell Card, Trap remover! Yait: Tsu! Yait: It's my turn, I will draw and I will summon Vampire Knight! (DEF=200). Turn end. Little Spirit: Draw. I will now activate one of my cards, card exchange, giving one of my cards to you. Now, I summon Celtic guardian! Attack! *Detroys Vampire Knight*. My Comet Dragon! Attack! Yait: I activate the trap you gave me! Soul Blocker! (LP=4000) Little Spirit: Stupid move. Yait: My turn! I draw! (5 cards). I will now use this card! If I have less than 5000 life points, I can Special one monster in ATK position. I summon the Blue-Eyes White Dragon! (ATK=3000) But It can't attack that turn. Little Spirit: I draw, then I will finish you off by placing this card, I can select one monster on your side of the field, then destroy it, then you lose it's ATK points doubled! Meaning you lose 6000 Life Points! Yait: NO! (LP=0) Little Spirit: Just who are you? Jinsi: ME! Little Spirit: You little brat... [spoiler=Chapter Two]L.S.: You little brat! Jinsi: Can't I just play with you? L.S.: NO! Jinsi: Come on... L.S.: No wonder you know so much! Jinsi: Well you told me all that. Little Spirit: Well...Yea... Jinsi: Then it's all YOUR fault you got tricked by me! Little Spirit: just get back to the others, man. Jinsi: I'm not a MAN! Little Spirit: Whatever... Jinsi: You don't say that to your girlfriend! Little Spirit: Just hurry up would you? Jinsi: I'm just going to sulk until you say sorry. Little Spirit: fine... Sorry. Jinsi: YAY! Jinsi: Link, Link, it worked! I tricked him! Link: Congrats to Jinsi! *Claps* At night... Jinsi: Yes... who are you? WHAT AR- Link: What happened??!! Kinly: *Opens tent* What is this? Link: Did I ever say you could come in? Kinly: Just what happened? Link: I heard Jinsi scream. Kinly: Need help? She might me kidnapped. Little Spirit: %$^$^$ NO WAY! *Runs away out of tent* Kinly: Hey! Watch it! Link: I'd appreciate your help. Kinly: Ok. *Wink* Scene Change Jinsi: What do you want?? Stranger: You got some money? Jinsi: No...! Stranger: Then forgive me for this! Kinly: *Appears jumping, higher than a tree, and throwing a card on stranger's back* Not so fast! Jinsi: Kinly! Stranger: You're pretty pretty. Kinly: Oh really? Then come here. Stranger: Really? Oh yes! Kinly: You idiot. *Activates trap hole* Stranger: AHH!!! *Pulls Kinly down with him* You don't let me die without dying with you! Kinly: You let go! Stranger: No way, honey! Kinly: I'm not honey! I'm human! Stranger: Down we go!!!! *Falls on ground* Jinsi: I'm cold... Little Spirit: Jinsi! Jinsi: L! Little Spirit: Are you okay? *carries Jinsi on his back* Jinsi: A bit...*Falls alseep* Scene Change Kinly: Where am I? Stranger: With me, honey! Kinly: You mean in my own traphole? Stranger: I'm called Sea. I know this place. You win a duel with me, I let you out, I win? You get some money and pay up! Kinly & Sea: DUEL! Kinly: I'll start off! I draw! (6 cards) Now, I put Insect piper, in ATK mode!(ATK=1200) I will now use it's Special Effect! To summon thousands and thousands of spiders! Sea: As expected, I put Amazon Archer in ATK mode! (ATK=1400) ATTACK! Kinly: As expected*Winks*, I will now use the spiders to protect me! Sea: What??? Kinly: I don't think you know how to play the game, you need to draw first. Sea: Oh! *Draws* Kinly:*Draws* I use Blood Red Dragon! (ATK=1500). Now by paying any multiple of 500, I can double, triple, quadraple..etc it's ATK points! I pay 7500! (ATK=19500) Attack! Sea: OMG! (LP=0) Kinly: Loser! Sea: You're not getting away with this! Kinly: Hey, I won... Sea: *Jumps and tackles Kinly to the ground* GOT YA! Kinly: You're beserk! *Kicks sea in the head* Sea: GRUA! Kinly: You don't know the exit at all! I know it, but. *Walks away* Sea: Die! *Pulls out knife* Kinly: AH! Sea: Take this! *Stabs Kinly* Kinly: Ahhh...! Link: You down there? Kinly: Yes...and I'm stabbed. Link: *%$@!`?/!!!! *Jumps down and knocks Sea unconscious* You okay? Kinly: What do you think? I know the way out follow... Link: Nah, I'll carry you on ma back, you tell the directions. Kinly: Oh...Thank you. Link: We're friends aren't we? Kinly: Yes... Kinly: Left... You see that hole? Go inside it. Next Day Little Spirit: I'm glad you two are OK! Kinly: What do you think? I can't die like that. Jinsi: Yes, indeed. Little Spirit: I'm also glad that Jinsi is being more serious now! Jinsi: Haven't I always been serious? Little Spirit: Until you fell in love with me. Sea: You guys are gonna die in my hands! Little Spirit: Really? This is the hospital. Sea: SO? Little Spirit: You can't harm all these people. Sea: I can! Little Spirit: Umm... Also, this is a police station. Sea: What?! Police: You're under arrest! [spoiler=Chapter Three]Link: and all the demons crushed him. Jinsi: that was a terrible story. Link: DEATH #2 now! Jinsi: Just stop with the silly stories! Link: It’s not silly, it’s bedtime stories! Jinsi: Who the heck would like to hear those stories before bed? They won’t be able to sleep! Just read in your head and lose the next duel. Link: Yes ma’am Jinsi: Good boy!*Wink* (Link) Stop reminding me of Kinly! Jinsi: Now let’s sleep. Link: Right. Next Day The wind blew over our heroes, as the tent flew away… Little Spirit: What happened to our shelter? Link: The wind stole our tent that’s al-. Little Spirit: Look!! The third best duelist! Joey! Link: Jounochi is here? The both ran over to Joey’s Barbeque place. Link: Sizzled sausage? Little Spirit: Smells delicious! Joey: You want some? Link: That’s a big YES! Joey: Then…Wind blew over the three. Joey: Duel me for it! Link: You mean you want me to lose my tent and then starve? After that I need to duel someone and make me more tired and then eat? Joey: Nice excuse for not dueling…but I’ll give you more than this sausage sizzle. Link: It’s a deal! Link & Joey: Let’s duel! (Link)For BBQ! Joey: I will start off the duel! Draw! I will now set one monster! I now end my turn. Hand cards: 5Life Points: 8000 Link: My turn! Draw! I will now Summon Spear Dragon! Turn end! Hand cards: 5Life Points: 8000 Joey: Hah ha! Draw! I now summon Time Wizard! Reveal Set card! Baby Dragon!I will now fuse them together! Tick tock…BZZZZZZZZZZ!!!!!Thousand Dragon!I end my turn! Hand Cards: 5Life Points: 8000 Link: My turn! Draw! Link: (Yes! The card to victory!) Link: I summon, the double taker! (ATK=0) When this card is successfully summoned, I can summon another monster in the way he was summoned! Meaning, Normal Summoning! I now Summon, the key to victory, GoldenCrust Dragon! (ATK-2200) Now I will switch my Spear Dragon to defense. Hand Cards: 4Life Points: 8000 Joey: Draw! Thousand dragon, attack spear dragon! I end my turn. Hand cards: 6Life points: 8000 Link: My turn. Draw! I switch my dragon to Defense position. (DEF=1700 Then I will Activate it’s effect, giving him 600 DEF and 300 ATK. (DEF=2300) Joey: That’s still not enough! Link: Until I use dragon treasure! (DEF=2600) Turn end. Hand Cards: 4Life Points: 8000 Joey: Hmmm…*Draws*. I’ll pass. By setting this card. Hand Cards: 6Life Points: 8000 Link: I draw! My dragon gains another 600 DEF and 300 ATK! (DEF=3200) I will now discontinue the effect by switching him back in ATK position. (ATK=3200) ATTACK! Joey: I activate trap card! Kunai with chain! I’ll switch your puny monster to defense. Link: You should have given this to your monster, giving him extra ATK, which means you lose less life points. Joey: But this one turns your monster to defense, which is better! Link: No, you tried to affect my monster, which is immune to traps! Joey: Oh no! Link: DESTROY! Joey: Oh no! Hand Cards: 5Life Points: 8000 Joey: You…I draw! Oh no… (Joey) All cards in my hand are Spell cards, which can’t help me now… Joey: I discard one card and end my turn. Hand Cards: 6Life Points: 7200 Link: DRAW! ATTACK! Hand cards: 6Life Points: 8000 Joey: Oh dear! Little Spirit: Hurry up you guys, I want to eat! Link:END! Joey: Draw! I use the magic card, the summoning! I now summon Summoned skull and red-eyes black dragon! Polymerization! Black skull dragon! Attack his life points! Hand Cards: 5Life points: 4000 Link: urgh…Link: DRAW! YES! I use ojama trio! Then I use mega Just Deserts! Dealing 1000 damage to your life points for each monster on your side of the field, but the downside is that it also affects me. But I have no monsters. Little Spirit: Yay food! Link: let’s eat! Joey: Don’t let me out! Little Spirit: Let’s be friends. Joey: Yea! Little Spirit: Agree, Link? But when they turned their heads, link was gone. [spoiler=Chapter Four] Little Spirit: Where are you link? Joey: Don't play hide and seek with us! The two looked everywhere around that area but couldn't find a clue where link could have gone. Little Spirit: We should meet back with Jinsi. Joey: Who's Jinsi? Little Spirit: My friend. Joey: Oh, OK. Scene Change Link: Jinsi! Jinsi: What now? Link: Remember when you said I wouldn't win the next duel? Jinsi: Yes, so? Link: I won a duel against Jounochi! Jinsi: Oh, ok. ?: I found you! Link: Wait, what? ?: I am here to kill you! Link: ... Link: ! Link: What is your surname!? ?: Los Jinsi: Link, do you know him? Link: Yes...I remember so well, that scar on your face... You are Lorin! You are here for revenge! Lorin: YES AND I'M HERE TO AVENGE MY FATHER! Link: It's his fault! Lorin: No! It's your fault for winning the duel! Jinsi: Tell me the story. Link: Well it's like this... When I was about 14, I met an old man, he duels people in the streets and beat them up when they lose. I wanted to duel him and I... Flash BackLink: I will now attack with my GoldenCrust Dragon!Saint Jiyg: NO! Link: Then he died of a heart attack... Lorin: That's why I'm going to kill you! Jinsi: You two stop! Lorin: Rahhh! Link picked up a stick and turned it around a bit, then it somehow turned into a sword. Lorin then took out a knife, they charged at each other trying to kill the opposite. Jinsi: You two stop it! Jinsi charged at Lorin and tried to knock him down, but in return, Lorin held her neck tight aand held her up to the air. Lorin: I was going to do this to Link...But...*Smashes Jinsi on a wall* Lorin then ripped Jinsi's sleeves off. Link: Stop it! Lets settle this without this violence! Lorin: Well actually, you can let me kill you! If you don't, this girl will die! To be continued... Chapter four= Short chapter. [spoiler=Chapter Five]Lorin: So do you want to save this girl? Link: I'll settle this with a duel! Lorin: How about a Shooting Duel? Policeman: Lorin Los! You are under arrest! Lorin: Grr... How did they catch up with me? Link: Well, let say goodbye... Lorin: Hahaha... Without you dying?! Lorin then threw his knife at Link, and then revealing his gun and shot him. Link: Ergh... 1 hour late, when Link is in the hospital Little Spirit: Link, what happened to you!? Jinsi: He got stabbed and shot! Link: the doctor said I'll be alright in about 6 weeks. 6 Weeks Later Jinsi is on the couch...waiting. Knock, Knock Jinsi: Link? Link: What's up? Jinsi: Good, come over here. Jinsi led Link in her bedroom and sat on her bed. Link followed her actions. Link: ...and...? Jinsi: You're going to be my teddy bear tonight. Link: Wha!? Jinsi Wrapped her arms around Link, and pulled him down. She then put a big fur blanket on him. 1 day later... Little Spirit: Shooting duels? Behind him were Link and Jinsi, holding hands, chatting happily. Little Spirit: Link? He was ignored, the two kept on talking to each other. Little Spirit: LINK! Silence filled the area... Little Spirit: What is a Shooting Duel!!!??? ?: You want to know? Little Spirit: Yes... San: My name is San, duel me, shoot duel me! He reveals a rifle and tosses it to Little Spirit. San: Put that on your wrist, like a duel disk. Little Spirit: OK! Done! So I think I put my deck here... San: You learn fast, I'll take the first turn. Draw! Now I pass. Remember this: This is a very dangerous gameLP:1000 Little Spirit: Draw! Wait... how come you have 1000 Life Points and not 8000? San: Well same goes to you. I don't want to die yet. (Little Spirit) Weird guy... Little Spirit: I summon, "Scarecrow Puppet" (ATK=0)!By Paying 500 Life Points- WAIT! It didn't increase and my life points are the same! San: Try pressing the red button. BANG! Little Spirit: I got shot...but it's just a mere injury. I can increase it's ATK by 1500 until End Phase! Attack and win the duel! ... San: Looks like nothing happened... Little Spirit: You might think I wouldn't know if you didn't tell me... I shoot you! San: Congratulations, I think you know why I start off with 1000 Life Points now. Good luck on your other Shooting Duels. Sin: San!To be continued... ____________________________________________________________________ [spoiler=Volume two][spoiler=Chapter 6]Sin: San! San: Sin? Sin: He said..."Stop bothering me" San: That guy!!!! Oh! About you winning me in a duel, I'll treat you for lunch? Little Spirit: Oh yes! 20 Minutes Later Little Spirit: So what food do we eat? Sin: Be quite! Jinsi: I'm glad you invited us as well. The five then saw a campfire place.Sin use her arm to block the three from walking while San advances. Little Spirit: What? San then jumped down the cliff in front of them. Link: Are you saying you don't want to treat us anymore and rather suicide than having shame? Jinsi: You idiot! He's fishing. How do you know? You may ask. Well that's because he wears no top and if you can't see, that is the sea! After 32.008 seconds San came back up Link: If that water is red, then what I said is true. San: Well, how about we have a duel? Don't worry, it's not a shooting duel. The one who loses will have to cook. Sin: It's going to be my brother and I versus you three. All: DUEL! Sin: I would take the first move. Draw! I now summon, “Obnoxious Celtic Guardian” (ATK=1400 LV=4) isn’t it lucky that I drew my favorite card on my first turn? Turn is ended!Hand Cards: 5LP: 8000 San: I’ll take the next move! Draw! I now use this card-“The Giveaway”! It allows me to give any amount of cards in my hand to another player. I give 4 away! So I only have one card in my hand...Which means I can Normal Summon my “Swift Gaia The Fierce Knight” (ATK=2300 LV=7) without tributes! Turn is ended!Hand Cards: 5LP: 8000 Sin: Yes, and I will have to discard cards until I have six, meaning I can keep the “Mirror Force”! Little Spirit: Now it’s my turn! Draw! I now use “Card Destruction”! Now I set one monster. Turn end.Hand Cards: 4LP: 8000 Jinsi: My turn! Draw! I summon, “The Scarecrow Puppet” (ATK=0 LV=3) I now pay 500 Life Points to Increase my monster’s ATK to 1500 until End Phase! Attack “Obnoxious Celtic Guardian”! I end my turn.Hand cards: 5LP: 7500 Link: My turn! Draw! I summon “The Scarecrow Puppet” (ATK=0 LV=3) Attack Sin directly by paying 500 Life Points! San: “Swift Gaia The Fierce Knight”! Block! Link: You could do that!? But that means-...Turn End.Hand Cards: 5LP: 6700 Sin: Draw! I use Monster Reincarnation! By paying the amount of ATK and DEF points a monster has in my graveyard, I can Special Summon him back on the field! Turn is ended!Hand Cards: 5LP: 5200 San: My turn...Draw! I have heard you people have some good signature dragon cards...I use “The Wish" every player can summon one card from their deck to their hand! Turn is ended!Hand cards: 5LP: 8000 Little Spirit: Ha! Draw! I will summon “Scarecrow Puppet” (ATK=0). Turn end.Hand Cards: 4LP: 8000 Jinsi: Right! This is everyone’s graveyard! Little Spirit: EVERYONE?! To be continued... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted May 30, 2008 Report Share Posted May 30, 2008 This better not be a copy of 5d's & give us more substance here! (this fanfic is only worth 1/100000 of a skeleton) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Experiment_001 Posted May 30, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 30, 2008 Nope, nothing like 5D's! I just finished Chapter 1. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted May 30, 2008 Report Share Posted May 30, 2008 [goes into "eagle-eye" mode]ok,now I'm watching it & keeping a close watch at it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Impact™ Posted May 30, 2008 Report Share Posted May 30, 2008 sounds a bit like 5d's Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted May 30, 2008 Report Share Posted May 30, 2008 sounds a bit like 5d'sExperiment_001 (the author) did say he got the idea from 5d's Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Experiment_001 Posted May 30, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 30, 2008 Just KINDA. Nothing from 5D's except for some dragons. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RacecaR Posted May 30, 2008 Report Share Posted May 30, 2008 ok... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Experiment_001 Posted May 30, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 30, 2008 Just did chapter two! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted May 31, 2008 Report Share Posted May 31, 2008 Just KINDA. Nothing from 5D's except for some dragons.so I'm suppose to expect Stardust,Red Archfiend's & Black Rose. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Experiment_001 Posted May 31, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 31, 2008 No... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Experiment_001 Posted June 9, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 9, 2008 this is just a test fanfic. the real one is comming soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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