Aesirson Posted May 30, 2008 Report Share Posted May 30, 2008 I decided to make a new fan-fic (AGAIN!!!! What's wrong with me :P). This is not the same as my RP with the same name, because there won't be any Soul monsters here. Also, the X-Dras from my first fan-fic will appear, however the X-Draman and some of the X-Dras does NOT have the same effect as the first time. Oh, and G4 is for Generation 4. [spoiler=Chapters][spoiler=Chapter 1: Enter the X-Dras!]Max was ready to duel. He had allready done the writing part of the test, so now only the dueling was left. He entered the arena, it was a big place and on the side of it was a lot of Duel Academy students watching. "So? Who am I going to face?" Max asked. A man in blue clothes entered the arena. "I'm the one you're going to face!" He said. Max activated his Duel Disk. "Okay! Let's duel!" Max: 4000Man: 4000 "I'll start!" Max said and drew a card. "I start by summoning X-Dra Dinoshield in Defense mode! (500/2100) I will also throw down two face-downs! Your turn!""With pleasure!" The man said and drew a card. "I start by summoning Chainsaw Insect in Attack mode! (2400/0) Attack his dragon!" The insect attacked Max's dragon but three women appeared in front of it and Chainsaw Insect stopped the attack. "Hah! You activated my trap! Waboku! It makes both me and my monsters invincible, so neither I nor you take any damage. But thanks to Chainsaw's effect, I can draw a card! But wait, my Dinoshields effect is also activated! When it is attacked in defense mode, the attacking monster is also shifted to defense mode!" The insect shifted to defense mode. The man looked irritated. "Hmph, your turn." Max drew a card. "Hm... I'll do like this: First! I summon X-Dra Skyclaw! (1400/200) When this guy is face-up on the field, his effect actiavtes. When he's face-up on the field, I can draw 1 extra card if you have more life points than me, or if they are equal!" Max drew 1 extra card. "Now! I'll activate Pot of Greed! This card let's me draw 2 cards!" He drew 2 cards and started to smile."Now! I'll activate the Spell card Call of the Dragondude! When this card is activated, by discarding 2 cards from my hand, I can Special Summon X-Dramon from my Deck! (1900/1500)" A man manlike creature appeared inf ront of Max. It was blue and had yellow and red markings on the body. "Now! Actiavte Polymerization! Now I fuse my X-Draman with X-Dra Skyclaw to create.... X-Draman Aeropilot! (2000/1500)" The manlike creature and the red dragon united and became another manlike creature, but this one was red and had two, big wings and big claws on it's hands. "His effect is pretty cool! For each card in my ahnd, his ATK is increased by 200! (2000+5x200=3000) I also activates this! X - Force One! This card can only be activated when I have a X-Dra monster on my side of the field. Now, all cards on your side of the field is removed from play untill the end of this turn! But my Aeropilot's attack is decreased (3000-200=2800). Aeropilot, attack!" The red, winged creature attacked the man, but he didn't fall or anything, he just laughed. Max: 4000Man: 1200 "Hey? What are you laughing at?" Max asked. The man stopped laughing, but he still smiled meanishly. "Because of this, when I take Battle Damage, I can Special Summon this! Gorz the Emissary of Darkness! (2700/2500)" A warrior in black armor appeared in front of the man. The warrior wore a red mantle. "And when he's Special Summoned by this effect, I can also Special Summon Kaien the Emissary of Darkness! (2800/2800)" Another warrior appeared. However, this one was dressed in white armor with a yellow mantle. Max starred at the two warriors. He was scared. "Ugh, I play one face-down card. Your turn..." Aeropilots ATK decreased again (2800-200=2600). The man started to laugh again. "Hehehehe! I guess it's my turn!" He drew a card. "I will start this turn by playing Stop Defense!" He activated a Spell card and X-Dra Dinoshield shifted to Attack position. (500/2100). "Now! Gorz! Attack Dinoshield!" The balck warrior destroyed the little dragon and decreased Max's Life Points to 2000. "Hehe... Kaien! Attack Aeropilot!" The white warrior was about to attack the red dragonman but Max activated his Trap. "Stop! I activate X-Force Two! This card can only be activated when you attack one of my monsters! It let's me draw 1 card for each multiple of 1000 of the attacking monsters ATK!" He drew 2 cards. "That means my Aeropilots ATK is now 3000!" The white warrior crashed into the red dargonman and was destroyed. "Argh! Then there's no idea attacking with Chainsaw! Your turn!" Max drew a card. "First, I'll activate X-Force Three. This let's me draw 1 card for each X-Dra monster on my side of the field. He drew a card and X-Dramans ATK was increased to 3400. "Now! X-Draman attack Chainsaw!" The red dragonman crushed the insect and the mans Life Points decreased to 0. The man fell on his knees as the balck warrior dissapeared. "Okay boy, you're an Obeli...""NO HE'S NOT!" A woman voice was heard over the whole arena. Max looked at who had said that. It was a woman, 20 years old. She was wearing red clothes. "My brother belongs in Slifer Red! It's best to start from the beginning!" Max looked scared. "Uhm... Ok, sis..." The woman smiled. "Here, take this!" She gave hima Slifer Red Jacket and a Slifer Red Duel Disk. Max smiled. "I'm in the Duel Academy!"End of Chapter 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted May 30, 2008 Report Share Posted May 30, 2008 hmmm...be more clear & vivid with descriptions here Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atomix Posted May 30, 2008 Report Share Posted May 30, 2008 It could be longer and more descriptive Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aesirson Posted May 30, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 30, 2008 I know it could, but I had about 10 secs to write the end of it. Next Chapter will be much more descriptive and longer too. If anybody is interested I accept characters for this fan-fic so feel free to send me a private messege if you're interested.[/font] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted May 30, 2008 Report Share Posted May 30, 2008 ok then,I'll be expecting a better one by then Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Impact™ Posted May 30, 2008 Report Share Posted May 30, 2008 hope to see a better one Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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