EliminateHRN Posted May 30, 2008 Report Share Posted May 30, 2008 Okay well this is the Prologue of my newest Fan-Fic, Legion's Breath. This is only the Prologue/Preview. Now it might be short but it is only a Prologue so what do you expect. ProloguePrologue It was around midnight and everything was quiet, except for the trees swaying in the breezy wind. There was a boy walking along the side of the forest. The wind blew the man's hair and cloaked. He stopped and turned his head. ???: What do you want? But it seemed no one was there. Then a dark voice answered. Voice: Well you do know what to do, right? ???: Yes. There was a long pause, until finally the voice answered. Voice: Fine but if you mess it up, I'm blaming you. ???: Fine, now GO! The voice seemed to disappear. So what was this man's mission, and was this man not even a man? Was this guy some kind of dark spirit? Ad what was that voice?***************************A young boy was walking along a street, late, late at night. The wind was pretty chilly, but he didn't care he always used to take walks this late at night. He looked at his watch, and the time said, 6:23 AM. He smiled and looked up as he saw the sun rising up from the horizon. He felt something also rising from the horizon, just like the sun, though this feeling wasn't good. End of PrologueEnd of Prologue Now there I know it is short but it is a Prologue. Also I will give you a Rep tomorrow in the afternoon as I won't be on until 3:00 or so Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted May 30, 2008 Report Share Posted May 30, 2008 rather mysterious,but where's the protagonist??? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted May 30, 2008 Report Share Posted May 30, 2008 almost reminds me of the beginning of "the sword of shannara" by terry brooks. ^_^ Seems interesting, I'd like to see where it goes. ^_^ As said above, who's the protagonist? The cloaked guy, or the kid in the city? Or someone else entirely? I guess I will just have to wait until you post the next part. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Davok Posted May 30, 2008 Report Share Posted May 30, 2008 Hmmmm... interesting. Has the beginnings of an interesting fan-fic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Impact™ Posted May 30, 2008 Report Share Posted May 30, 2008 could be smething big but i can't comment properly since it hasn't really got to the plot yet Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Parallel Gunshot Posted May 30, 2008 Report Share Posted May 30, 2008 interesting...cant wait to see where this leadsit has the beginnings (surprisingly (you know with being a prologue and all)) of a really good Fic ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliminateHRN Posted May 30, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 30, 2008 Well guys the kid is in the city is the protagonist he's name will be revealed in the first chapter and also guys this story won't have the plot right off the gun your will have to guess the plot (as the plot won't happen for quite another few chapters) also sent the Reps now the next 3 to comment gets 20 points Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atomix Posted May 30, 2008 Report Share Posted May 30, 2008 Is this going to be the new name of your new forum? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliminateHRN Posted May 30, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 30, 2008 Maybe but not sure Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliminateHRN Posted May 31, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 31, 2008 Sorry for double post but I'll have episode 1 up later tonight :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Experiment_001 Posted May 31, 2008 Report Share Posted May 31, 2008 Hurry up! Make the story! Oh, you're going to do it tonight? Good! I really liked it. Episode? Isn't it chapter? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliminateHRN Posted May 31, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 31, 2008 Well my fan-fic are like real shows so I like calling them Episodes tho it is chapter and I'm finishing it up now :D sending 20 points now also guys I have a fan-site/forum for this fan-fic but I won't post it as it would be againest the rules but PM me for it (it will have all the updates of Legion's Breath) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted May 31, 2008 Report Share Posted May 31, 2008 Why is this in a seperate thread? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Umbra Posted May 31, 2008 Report Share Posted May 31, 2008 Locked as requested. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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