Wyhe Posted June 8, 2008 Report Share Posted June 8, 2008 Wait' date=' I like short chapters, well I don't know if yours are short or long, but there is one thing I know, yours are perfect, I don't get bored reading it, or is it because the fan fic is si great? XD[/quote']That's where you're wrong.The longer a fanfic is,the more detailed it is.Details are important for a truly good fanfic.That way,readers can literally feel that they are in the story itself. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted June 8, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 8, 2008 Wait' date=' I like short chapters, well I don't know if yours are short or long, but there is one thing I know, yours are perfect, I don't get bored reading it, or is it because the fan fic is si great? XD[/quote']That's where you're wrong.The longer a fanfic is,the more detailed it is.Details are important for a truly good fanfic.That way,readers can literally feel that they are in the story itself. yeah, that is completely true. ^_^ That's why I try to put as many details as possible into the fan fic! :lol: I'm sorry for the wait for chapter four, but I havnt had the time to sit down and write just yet. I will be up this week for sure, but it shouldn't be long... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Purple Dinosaur Posted June 8, 2008 Report Share Posted June 8, 2008 I love it! You really have a gift (much like me) for Fan-Fiction! Great Job! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted June 8, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 8, 2008 thank you very much man! I didnt think that many others would read this fan fic until I write the next chapter... I appreciate your comment! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mutant Monster RAEG-HAPYP Posted June 8, 2008 Report Share Posted June 8, 2008 Hey Dark Kale. I'll have another character soon. Do you take characters that are rlated to the ones on the anime? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted June 8, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 8, 2008 umm... You made me think on that one.... ^_^ If this makes sense.... Have them loosly related to the characters. ^_^ Like it could be joey wheeler's second cousin from Florida... Or something like that. ^_^ Remember, I may not accept all the characters, so try if you want to. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mutant Monster RAEG-HAPYP Posted June 8, 2008 Report Share Posted June 8, 2008 Ok I'll have a few up later Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Death7ofsb Posted June 8, 2008 Report Share Posted June 8, 2008 Best Fan-Fict I have ever read, It keeps me on the edge of excitement. so when is chapter 4 commin? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted June 8, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 8, 2008 soon my friend. ^_^ I just have a ton of stuff to do, but I will soon have time enough to sit and write. ^_^ It will be soon, but I havnt been able to do several things, like get some images from cards for hunter, give the last rep from my contest, make another duel disk for my shop, and write chapter four.... But I will get it done guys, I promise. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mutant Monster RAEG-HAPYP Posted June 8, 2008 Report Share Posted June 8, 2008 Oh no...I have no more character ideas*turns into a vampire* :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:I'll have one today or tommrow Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted June 9, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 9, 2008 UPDATE: YOU GUYS ASKED FOR IT, SO HERE'S CHAPTER 4!!!! i wrote it today, and i added a character from the card contest i made. i hope you guys like it, feedback, and reps, are appreciated. ^_^ start reading..... now! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mutant Monster RAEG-HAPYP Posted June 9, 2008 Report Share Posted June 9, 2008 YAY!! You used one of my characters. Awesome and I'm glad you like the character(s) I submitted. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted June 9, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 9, 2008 your welcome. ^_^ Did you read chapter 4? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mutant Monster RAEG-HAPYP Posted June 9, 2008 Report Share Posted June 9, 2008 your welcome. ^_^ Did you read chapter 4? yep and it's great Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted June 9, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 9, 2008 thanks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mutant Monster RAEG-HAPYP Posted June 9, 2008 Report Share Posted June 9, 2008 thanks! No problem and do you like the other characters I submitted? Here's another one Carol SatonAge: 23Gender: FemaleBio: A undercover cop(All I got)Deck: Counter Faries3 Voltains3 Bountfil Artemis(However you spell it) You can come up with the rest of her deck or I'll post it tommrow Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted June 9, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 9, 2008 alright, so is anyone going to read chapter 4? i know i'm impatient..... so dont tell me. ^_^ i just want you guys to comment! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
schyshter Posted June 10, 2008 Report Share Posted June 10, 2008 *blinks* OMG! amazing! top 4! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted June 10, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 10, 2008 *blinks* OMG! amazing! top 4! top 4? what are the other three i wonder......? ^_^ so you like it? i hoped you guys would like it..... :lol: do you like the twist i put at the end? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
schyshter Posted June 10, 2008 Report Share Posted June 10, 2008 top 4? what are the other three i wonder......? ^_^ Chronicles of the Ascension by IxigoKain's Travels by Slayer SupremeLegacy of the Tormentor by Umbra so you like it? i hoped you guys would like it..... :lol: hell yeah' date=' i liked it! your best chapter thus far... do you like the twist i put at the end? yeah. spooky. is Kal getting super powers...? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted June 10, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 10, 2008 so you like it? i hoped you guys would like it..... :lol: hell yeah' date=' i liked it! your best chapter thus far...[/quote'] thank you very much! do you like the twist i put at the end? yeah. spooky. is Kal getting super powers...? i cant answer that.... it would be giving the plot away... but i can ask you this question: does he have to develop the powers now to find them now? ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
schyshter Posted June 10, 2008 Report Share Posted June 10, 2008 does he have to develop the powers now to find them now? ^_^ that's up to you, innit? imo, "what is his power(s) going to be used for" is a more important question than "what is his power(s) going to be". therefore, i think you should ask yourself the former and whether the answer to that question would be a good idea to include into the story at this moment; or if said powers should be included at all... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted June 10, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 10, 2008 does he have to develop the powers now to find them now? ^_^ that's up to you' date=' innit? imo, "what is his power(s) going to be used for" is a more important question than "what is his power(s) going to be". therefore, [b']i think you should ask yourself the former[/b] and whether the answer to that question would be a good idea to include into the story at this moment; or if said powers should be included at all... dont worry, i already have. ^_^ just you wait for chapters 5 and beyond.... and even into volume 2. ^_^ i cant wait for you guys to see, itll be great! (i hope) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tankiller Posted June 10, 2008 Report Share Posted June 10, 2008 nice job keep up the great work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted June 10, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 10, 2008 Thanks tankiller! Now if only ixigo would read my last four chapters.... He read the prologue and has seemed to not have enough time for my fan fic... Oh well... I hope more people see It and enjoy it. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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