Wyhe Posted August 20, 2008 Report Share Posted August 20, 2008 I must say' date=' in all my 13 (14 in Dec.) years or existing in this world, I have only found one Fan-Fic writer to surpass you. He was Sarumon20 on Deadfrontier.com's forums. He wrote two stories about 13 chapters each and they were written above professional. When he finished his stories, (They were posted on separate posts like yours) he posted them all as one, maybe when you finish with V. 1 you should put it all together with fixed spelling etc. I'd most likely print it out and give it to my friends. Also, I loved the backstory of Kal's parents you gave in chapter 12. I love getting the full story. Also, the name Shylish Mastero sound [i']very[/i] familier. wow, only one writer surpasses me? and i havnt taken any formal training... imagine what i can be when i do take English this year. XD thank you for reading, i really appreciate that. and Shylish was a character submitted in my character contest from before chapter 1. i cant remember who submitted it, though i can look it up. ;) i hope to have chapter 13 up real soon... oh, and i have fixed the spelling mistakes, though where do you want me to post it? i dont think that they would allow me another thread... XDIf you really did took English, you could even easily own the fanfic writing circle...I bet this could make money if it were published Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silver Posted August 20, 2008 Report Share Posted August 20, 2008 Wicked so far, Kale!I hope Kal doesnt get caught (anxious)Anyway, this is great! Keep it up=]] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted August 22, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 22, 2008 Wicked so far' date=' Kale!I hope Kal doesnt get caught (anxious)Anyway, this is great! Keep it up=']] thank you a lot. ^_^ i am trying, but unfortunately school this year takes up more time than i imagined. i havnt been able to log on in days... sorry for the wait.. it is driving me crazy to not have any free time anymore... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mutant Monster RAEG-HAPYP Posted August 22, 2008 Report Share Posted August 22, 2008 Wicked so far' date=' Kale!I hope Kal doesnt get caught (anxious)Anyway, this is great! Keep it up=']] thank you a lot. ^_^ i am trying, but unfortunately school this year takes up more time than i imagined. i havnt been able to log on in days... sorry for the wait.. it is driving me crazy to not have any free time anymore... Kale while you were gone a spammer spammed in your shop. ON TOPIC: Don't excpect me to move near you anytime soon:lol: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted August 22, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 22, 2008 Wicked so far' date=' Kale!I hope Kal doesnt get caught (anxious)Anyway, this is great! Keep it up=']] thank you a lot. ^_^ i am trying, but unfortunately school this year takes up more time than i imagined. i havnt been able to log on in days... sorry for the wait.. it is driving me crazy to not have any free time anymore... Kale while you were gone a spammer spammed in your shop. ON TOPIC: Don't excpect me to move near you anytime soon:lol: yes, i saw the spam. read what i posted, it might deserve a sig... XD why wont you want to move near me...? and how is that on topic exactly? XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mutant Monster RAEG-HAPYP Posted August 22, 2008 Report Share Posted August 22, 2008 Wicked so far' date=' Kale!I hope Kal doesnt get caught (anxious)Anyway, this is great! Keep it up=']] thank you a lot. ^_^ i am trying, but unfortunately school this year takes up more time than i imagined. i havnt been able to log on in days... sorry for the wait.. it is driving me crazy to not have any free time anymore... Kale while you were gone a spammer spammed in your shop. ON TOPIC: Don't excpect me to move near you anytime soon:lol: yes, i saw the spam. read what i posted, it might deserve a sig... XD why wont you want to move near me...? and how is that on topic exactly? XD I see your busy with school work and If i move near you, I'll have to go to the same school and the work you get will KILL ME:shock: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted August 22, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 22, 2008 Wicked so far' date=' Kale!I hope Kal doesnt get caught (anxious)Anyway, this is great! Keep it up=']] thank you a lot. ^_^ i am trying, but unfortunately school this year takes up more time than i imagined. i havnt been able to log on in days... sorry for the wait.. it is driving me crazy to not have any free time anymore... Kale while you were gone a spammer spammed in your shop. ON TOPIC: Don't excpect me to move near you anytime soon:lol: yes, i saw the spam. read what i posted, it might deserve a sig... XD why wont you want to move near me...? and how is that on topic exactly? XD I see your busy with school work and If i move near you, I'll have to go to the same school and the work you get will KILL ME:shock: ah, now that makes sense. though it is only because of my advanced classes, like AP World History and the accelerated program... sometimes i dont like being as smart as i am. :( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mutant Monster RAEG-HAPYP Posted August 22, 2008 Report Share Posted August 22, 2008 Wicked so far' date=' Kale!I hope Kal doesnt get caught (anxious)Anyway, this is great! Keep it up=']] thank you a lot. ^_^ i am trying, but unfortunately school this year takes up more time than i imagined. i havnt been able to log on in days... sorry for the wait.. it is driving me crazy to not have any free time anymore... Kale while you were gone a spammer spammed in your shop. ON TOPIC: Don't excpect me to move near you anytime soon:lol: yes, i saw the spam. read what i posted, it might deserve a sig... XD why wont you want to move near me...? and how is that on topic exactly? XD I see your busy with school work and If i move near you, I'll have to go to the same school and the work you get will KILL ME:shock: ah, now that makes sense. though it is only because of my advanced classes, like AP World History and the accelerated program... sometimes i dont like being as smart as i am. :( Get drunk... You might get easier classes when drunk :lol:ON TOPIC: Is Ch 13 almost done or do I have to use my gun to kill... use my invisible gun to send you to the stars Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
moneypony Posted August 24, 2008 Report Share Posted August 24, 2008 if people still run chain energies,Kale would be near dead,he can lose about 3000 LP in one-turn because he summons and activate card effects a lot.can you give a estamite of how much you are done with (unlucky)CHPT.13? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted August 24, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 24, 2008 if people still run chain energies' date='Kale would be near dead,he can lose about 3000 LP in one-turn because he summons and activate card effects a lot.can you give a estamite of how much you are done with (unlucky)CHPT.13?[/quote'] yeah, that would be interesting... i honestly dont know. it can be at any point, though i just have to find a point to write it. as you guys can probably see, i am busy... and i dont even have that much time in the weekend to do much either, unfortunately. so, i have started writing it, but i dont know when i can finish it. sorry guys... ~K Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mutant Monster RAEG-HAPYP Posted August 24, 2008 Report Share Posted August 24, 2008 weI forgive you Kale(drops his invisible gun and goes off and Kale is sent to the stars) oops XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted August 27, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 27, 2008 weI forgive you Kale(drops his invisible gun and goes off and Kale is sent to the stars) oops XD thank you. ^_^ hmm... it seems that my avi and sig have been broken... that sucks... -.- i must try to fix that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ultimate Ryan Posted August 27, 2008 Report Share Posted August 27, 2008 yes Kale as long as the next chapt is awesomness, it would be worth the wait, and yeah being smart isnt always a top, I have all GT (gifted and talented) classes and they are extremely hard and time consuming >.> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted August 27, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 27, 2008 yes Kale as long as the next chapt is awesomness' date=' it would be worth the wait, and yeah being smart isnt always a top, I have all GT (gifted and talented) classes and they are extremely hard and time consuming >.>[/quote'] well, i will work extra hard to make the final three chapters worth it. ... *brain spark* ... maybe i will release all three at once! next update will be the epic ending! prepare yourself for a three hour (unless you read fast) event! ^_^ gifted classes really are time consuming. my GATS (gifted and talented students) teacher made us read two books over the summer... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ultimate Ryan Posted August 27, 2008 Report Share Posted August 27, 2008 ohooh then vol 2 when my char comes in >=] and just for lulz like the top sentance + top banner in my sig? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted August 27, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 27, 2008 ohooh then vol 2 when my char comes in >=] and just for lulz like the top sentance + top banner in my sig? yes, hopefully. ^_^ yeah, the banner and sentence are nice... ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ultimate Ryan Posted August 27, 2008 Report Share Posted August 27, 2008 *Yayz* and yeah the banner and sentance is true (on the interweb anyhowz, I have real gf in real life...) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted August 27, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 27, 2008 *Yayz* and yeah the banner and sentance is true (on the interweb anyhowz' date=' I have real gf in real life...)[/quote'] ah, that makes more sense. ^_^ i better get started on the last chapters. it might take me a while longer though... sorry bout that. maybe i can try this weekend? or maybe the weekend after? hopefully i can end it then. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ultimate Ryan Posted August 27, 2008 Report Share Posted August 27, 2008 take your time and make it awesomez, but don't kill your social life doing it >.> kick back with your gf sometimes to ^-^ (i know I will!) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted August 27, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 27, 2008 take your time and make it awesomez' date=' but don't kill your social life doing it >.> kick back with your gf sometimes to ^-^ (i know I will!)[/quote'] unfortunately i dont have a gf.. -.- otherwise i would! XD i will make the ending so epic.... though not cliche. that would be stupid.. XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ultimate Ryan Posted August 27, 2008 Report Share Posted August 27, 2008 make it realistic, like my char coming in and killing everyone cept kale then he duels him and my character PWNs him and sends him to the shadow realm and then my char becomes the new main char ^-^ love it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted August 27, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 27, 2008 make it realistic' date=' like my char coming in and killing everyone cept kale then he duels him and my character PWNs him and sends him to the shadow realm and then my char becomes the new main char ^-^ love it![/quote'] hmm... i will think about it. XD though i might need a re-PM of his info. i believe i have lost it... -.- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ultimate Ryan Posted August 27, 2008 Report Share Posted August 27, 2008 so have i :( -_- I will re-do it soon =p Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted August 27, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 27, 2008 so have i :( -_- I will re-do it soon =p you could send it in my character contest. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ultimate Ryan Posted August 27, 2008 Report Share Posted August 27, 2008 this is true!!! (but mah volcanic hotty was gonna win that -_-) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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