Kale Posted August 14, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 14, 2008 URGGH... no matter what I do' date=' I feel so in the dirt compared to the Fan-Fic![/quote'] dont feel that way... i have had no training, other than grade school and freshman year in english. i may be good at writing... and that just may be a gift. but you shouldnt feel bad about something that someone else has and you dont. i should know that, i feel that way all the time. and here i am trying to be a hypocrite.. :| i think your stories are good! just dont feel bad about yourself, mate. ;) ~K Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Purple Dinosaur Posted August 14, 2008 Report Share Posted August 14, 2008 URGGH... no matter what I do' date=' I feel so in the dirt compared to the Fan-Fic![/quote'] dont feel that way... i have had no training, other than grade school and freshman year in english. i may be good at writing... and that just may be a gift. but you shouldnt feel bad about something that someone else has and you dont. i should know that, i feel that way all the time. and here i am trying to be a hypocrite.. :| i think your stories are good! just dont feel bad about yourself, mate. ;) ~K lol. I'm only really good in the english Grammar. Not really in the actual language. Well, maybe... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted August 14, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 14, 2008 URGGH... no matter what I do' date=' I feel so in the dirt compared to the Fan-Fic![/quote'] dont feel that way... i have had no training, other than grade school and freshman year in english. i may be good at writing... and that just may be a gift. but you shouldnt feel bad about something that someone else has and you dont. i should know that, i feel that way all the time. and here i am trying to be a hypocrite.. :| i think your stories are good! just dont feel bad about yourself, mate. ;) ~K lol. I'm only really good in the english Grammar. Not really in the actual language. Well, maybe... which language are we talking about? lol.. XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
{Verifying...} Posted August 15, 2008 Report Share Posted August 15, 2008 I think Kale gonna find Yugi, and face him.. and lose. Oh and OMG YOU ARE A GOD OF WRITING. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted August 15, 2008 Report Share Posted August 15, 2008 if so, I wonder how Kal's real parents will impact on the plot itself (dead people tend to influence everything strangely) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted August 15, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 15, 2008 I think Kale gonna find Yugi' date=' and face him.. and lose. Oh and OMG YOU ARE A GOD OF WRITING.[/quote'] eh... that would be too much like GX... no.. XD thank you for the compliment. ;) if so' date=' I wonder how Kal's real parents will impact on the plot itself (dead people tend to influence everything strangely)[/quote'] you are correct, sir! but how will they influence the plot, you may wonder? well, they will.. *a man in a black suit comes up behind Kale and drags him away before he can say anything else.. * ~K Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TotalObelisk Posted August 15, 2008 Report Share Posted August 15, 2008 I think Kale gonna find Yugi' date=' and face him.. and lose. Oh and OMG YOU ARE A GOD OF WRITING.[/quote'] eh... that would be too much like GX... no.. XD thank you for the compliment. ;) if so' date=' I wonder how Kal's real parents will impact on the plot itself (dead people tend to influence everything strangely)[/quote'] you are correct, sir! but how will they influence the plot, you may wonder? well, they will.. *a man in a black suit comes up behind Kale and drags him away before he can say anything else.. * ~K *Use your Death Grip Mr. Spoc!* Lol, whatever it is I can't wait to see it... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted August 15, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 15, 2008 I think Kale gonna find Yugi' date=' and face him.. and lose. Oh and OMG YOU ARE A GOD OF WRITING.[/quote'] eh... that would be too much like GX... no.. XD thank you for the compliment. ;) if so' date=' I wonder how Kal's real parents will impact on the plot itself (dead people tend to influence everything strangely)[/quote'] you are correct, sir! but how will they influence the plot, you may wonder? well, they will.. *a man in a black suit comes up behind Kale and drags him away before he can say anything else.. * ~K *Use your Death Grip Mr. Spoc!* Lol, whatever it is I can't wait to see it... lol... XD i hope you guys like the ideas i am coming up with.. i already am starting to plan the storyline of Vol. 2. Vol. 1 is basically complete, except for the last few chapters. oh, this is going to be on Fan Fic .com, i will be under the pen name Dark Kale because Kal and Kale were already taken.. :| dont they know that name is reserved for me? XD ~K Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TotalObelisk Posted August 15, 2008 Report Share Posted August 15, 2008 Lol, I was already planning For Legacy's End and Cyberspace halfway through Third Legacy anyway, it helps to plan ahead :p... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted August 15, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 15, 2008 Lol' date=' I was already planning For Legacy's End and Cyberspace halfway through Third Legacy anyway, it helps to plan ahead :p...[/quote'] of course. ;) i have an idea for another story, unrelated to this one, to write, though i have no idea when i will find the time... XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Καsτοr Posted August 15, 2008 Report Share Posted August 15, 2008 Oh, yea. I can't wait for the last chapters! How dare they take your name!Lets find them, and take them away.. Hey, what're you doing here big man in a black suit.*Taking you away sir*Oh, well Waya!!!!Oh, wait I don't know Kung- fu.*Time to take you away* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted August 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 16, 2008 Oh' date=' yea. I can't wait for the last chapters! How dare they take your name!Lets find them, and take them away.. Hey, what're you doing here big man in a black suit.*Taking you away sir*Oh, well Waya!!!!Oh, wait I don't know Kung- fu.*Time to take you away*[/quote'] lol, nice addition to my struggle. ;) i dont know what the sudden fascination for Kale is, but it is a vegetable. ;) sort of like lettuce. though that isnt what i named myself after. i hope i can get the next chapter soon, though i must make new Deserter cards.. i will write it as soon as possible. ~K Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted August 16, 2008 Report Share Posted August 16, 2008 Its great that your fanfic will be shown as an elite fanfic in fanfic.net! You rocks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted August 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 16, 2008 Its great that your fanfic will be shown as an elite fanfic in fanfic.net! You rocks! i must not understand the significance of fanfic.net.... :| can you explain it to me? i just signed up yesterday, so i have another day to wait before i can add anything, per their rules. :( thanks for the compliment. ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mutant Monster RAEG-HAPYP Posted August 16, 2008 Report Share Posted August 16, 2008 Its great that your fanfic will be shown as an elite fanfic in fanfic.net! You rocks! i must not understand the significance of fanfic.net.... :| can you explain it to me? i just signed up yesterday' date=' so i have another day to wait before i can add anything, per their rules. :( thanks for the compliment. ;)[/quote'] It'll be famous over there but don't except me to comment there. I left:? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted August 16, 2008 Report Share Posted August 16, 2008 Its great that your fanfic will be shown as an elite fanfic in fanfic.net! You rocks! i must not understand the significance of fanfic.net.... :| can you explain it to me? i just signed up yesterday' date=' so i have another day to wait before i can add anything, per their rules. :( thanks for the compliment. ;)[/quote']yeah...I heard that you need to wait before putting up your stories there...anyway, fanfic.net has quite a number of good stories of nearly any catergory that are very good...do you want a link to the "good yugioh stories"? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted August 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 16, 2008 Its great that your fanfic will be shown as an elite fanfic in fanfic.net! You rocks! i must not understand the significance of fanfic.net.... :| can you explain it to me? i just signed up yesterday' date=' so i have another day to wait before i can add anything, per their rules. :( thanks for the compliment. ;)[/quote'] It'll be famous over there but don't except me to comment there. I left:? i am sorry to hear that.. Its great that your fanfic will be shown as an elite fanfic in fanfic.net! You rocks! i must not understand the significance of fanfic.net.... :| can you explain it to me? i just signed up yesterday' date=' so i have another day to wait before i can add anything, per their rules. :( thanks for the compliment. ;)[/quote']yeah...I heard that you need to wait before putting up your stories there...anyway, fanfic.net has quite a number of good stories of nearly any catergory that are very good...do you want a link to the "good yugioh stories"? nah, i can find them. ;) though, do the threads work there the same way they do on the forum, like you can bump them? because some are at #1... is that voting? i really dont understand it, though i have only been their once. XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sportsplayer627 Posted August 17, 2008 Report Share Posted August 17, 2008 Well i just read 10 chapters that was awesome very goodonly one that follows up is phantom roxas 1 but i dont think he does it anymore :(From what ive read u should try to sum up the turnament Keep up the good work cant wait to read chap 11,2,3 :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted August 18, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 18, 2008 Well i just read 10 chapters that was awesome very goodonly one that follows up is phantom roxas 1 but i dont think he does it anymore :(From what ive read u should try to sum up the turnament Keep up the good work cant wait to read chap 11' date='2,3 :)[/quote'] i hope you read those soon. though by now you probably already have... -.- i will be trying to write chapter 13 very soon. i already have it planned out. the tournament will be part of the ending, though it wont end the Volume. you wont ever guess what will. XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MILSS Posted August 18, 2008 Report Share Posted August 18, 2008 Great fan fic. Can't wait for Chapter 13. Hope Kal wins the tournament. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted August 18, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 18, 2008 Great fan fic. Can't wait for Chapter 13. Hope Kal wins the tournament. ^_^ wow, i thought that everyone forgot about this. XD thanks for reading! i hope Kal wins too... ~K Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Καsτοr Posted August 18, 2008 Report Share Posted August 18, 2008 Ya, and then in Volume 2 my character might fight Kal!I will defeat Kal if I get in! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted August 19, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 19, 2008 Ya' date=' and then in Volume 2 my character might fight Kal!I will defeat Kal if I get in![/quote'] we shall see what Vol. 2 will bring. ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TR_Headshot Posted August 19, 2008 Report Share Posted August 19, 2008 I must say, in all my 13 (14 in Dec.) years or existing in this world, I have only found one Fan-Fic writer to surpass you. He was Sarumon20 on Deadfrontier.com's forums. He wrote two stories about 13 chapters each and they were written above professional. When he finished his stories, (They were posted on separate posts like yours) he posted them all as one, maybe when you finish with V. 1 you should put it all together with fixed spelling etc. I'd most likely print it out and give it to my friends. Also, I loved the backstory of Kal's parents you gave in chapter 12. I love getting the full story. Also, the name Shylish Mastero sound very familier. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted August 19, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 19, 2008 I must say' date=' in all my 13 (14 in Dec.) years or existing in this world, I have only found one Fan-Fic writer to surpass you. He was Sarumon20 on Deadfrontier.com's forums. He wrote two stories about 13 chapters each and they were written above professional. When he finished his stories, (They were posted on separate posts like yours) he posted them all as one, maybe when you finish with V. 1 you should put it all together with fixed spelling etc. I'd most likely print it out and give it to my friends. Also, I loved the backstory of Kal's parents you gave in chapter 12. I love getting the full story. Also, the name Shylish Mastero sound [i']very[/i] familier. wow, only one writer surpasses me? and i havnt taken any formal training... imagine what i can be when i do take English this year. XD thank you for reading, i really appreciate that. and Shylish was a character submitted in my character contest from before chapter 1. i cant remember who submitted it, though i can look it up. ;) i hope to have chapter 13 up real soon... oh, and i have fixed the spelling mistakes, though where do you want me to post it? i dont think that they would allow me another thread... XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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