Kale Posted July 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 16, 2008 well, actually he lost 1000, but got 1000 back. ^_^ and that just shows the power of the Allies. 'nuff said. XD i will be sure to read your fic. coupon coming your way soon... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aelsthla-Mental Posted July 16, 2008 Report Share Posted July 16, 2008 Well, that duel was quick and relatively painful, he wiped out those powerful monsters with barely a sweat! I don't know about that Joel Karne, you didn't say whether he was a major or minor character, suuuuspicious. I hope Kal actually has a challenge in round 3. Wouldn't be that good if he beat them all THAT easily :(. Anyway, good chapter. You know SOMETHING is going on. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted July 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 16, 2008 oh yeah. ^_^ and you arent supposed to know about Joel Karne yet. -.- Anywho, thank you for your comments. And there will be a challenge next round. ^_^ 3 acolyte points are coming your way, and a coupon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TR_Headshot Posted July 16, 2008 Report Share Posted July 16, 2008 I enjoy mysteries so finding out about the "non-existance" of Allies, and the other Ally user.... Kal's Dad??? Keep it up! I really cannot wait, this is almost perfect. I barely realize the speeling errors at all anymore. Thought the last duel did seem rushed, I guess it's to show the unrivled might of the Allies! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TotalObelisk Posted July 16, 2008 Report Share Posted July 16, 2008 Oh telepathy too now, is Kal some sort of psychic duelist or something? :p...Anyway excellent chapter, nice plot twist too I can't wait to read more... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted July 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 16, 2008 I enjoy mysteries so finding out about the "non-existance" of Allies' date=' and the other Ally user.... Kal's Dad??? Keep it up! I really cannot wait, this is almost perfect. I barely realize the [b']speeling[/b] errors at all anymore. Thought the last duel did seem rushed, I guess it's to show the unrivled might of the Allies! I can't tell you dont notice them. ^_^ Thank you for your comments, I appreciate them. @totalobelisk: well, he isnt psychic like in raviel priest WYHEs fic, hejust has special powers... ^_^Thank you for the compliment. ^_^ I appreciate it. Coupons and acolyte points are coming! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TotalObelisk Posted July 16, 2008 Report Share Posted July 16, 2008 Lol, there are too many "psychic" duelists in yugioh anyway :p Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aelsthla-Mental Posted July 16, 2008 Report Share Posted July 16, 2008 Stop quoting the abridged series! Sure it's funny, hilarious, one of the best internet shows ever invented, has numerous fans... What was i talking about again? Oh yeah, Allies don't exist. Well, they do seem strange. I blame Kaiba Corp! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted July 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 16, 2008 actually, the only part I had though of Kaiba being in the fic was in the explanation that Roland gave.... So, nope. It isnt Kaiba or his Corp. ^_^ I didnt understand the meaning of your first two sentences. I am major tired, so that might be part of it... ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TotalObelisk Posted July 16, 2008 Report Share Posted July 16, 2008 I wasn't quoting, it's a fact, psychic duelists are chliche...Pegasus, Mai, Ishizu, Espa Roba, I could go on but I've lost my cast list... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sironthemage Posted July 16, 2008 Report Share Posted July 16, 2008 Chapter 8 and 9 are awesome! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted July 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 16, 2008 I wasn't quoting' date=' it's a fact, psychic duelists are chliche...Pegasus, Mai, Ishizu, Espa Roba, I could go on but I've lost my cast list...[/quote'] well, it is less of a chiche and more of a general theme though the original series of YuGiOh. Atem had powers, Pegasus had powers, Marik had powers, a lot of people had special abilities. that is why i added them, because it adds a bit more realism toward the actual storyline that was the one i grew up with. and it is the best in my opinion... gx just went no where, and 5ds goes toward the technology side of the world, and a tiny bit of magic... but that is why i added magic. to bring it alive again. ^_^ @sironthemage: thank you. i appreciate it. but you dont get a coupon from that sentence... ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sironthemage Posted July 16, 2008 Report Share Posted July 16, 2008 O.K. Well my favorite thing about this story is the ally monsters. The way they stack on each other and get special abilities from doing so. This is truly brilliant! And this Kal guy. The way you showed how he could have almost lost in Chapter 8 shows that he's not like Jaden Yuki (no offense. I love the elemental heroes) It shows that even he can lose a duel with a bad hand. Overall I give it an 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted July 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 16, 2008 thanks man! but what did you like about chapter nine? that would get you a coupon... but thank you for your rating. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliminateHRN Posted July 16, 2008 Report Share Posted July 16, 2008 Wow great chapter, Kale. It was the best one IMO. But, still awesome job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Καsτοr Posted July 16, 2008 Report Share Posted July 16, 2008 That chapter was great man! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted July 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 16, 2008 Wow great chapter' date=' Kale. It was the best one IMO. But, still awesome job.[/quote'] thanks! but what does IMO mean? XD i have no clue... thank you for your compliment, but i cannot give a coupon on that sentence alone. thank you for reading! That chapter was great man! thanks! i am glad you think so. but i cannot give a coupon on that sentence alone. ^_^ thank you for reading! OOC: 500th reply to my fan fic! yayy! and over 1600 posts by me! yayy! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Καsτοr Posted July 16, 2008 Report Share Posted July 16, 2008 Well yea, I was going to write more bu I couldn't think of it till now... Well, Zandra's crazy. That woman talking into Kals head sounds like Mai Valentine frm the original series. And also, it was funny how Zandra scolded him. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted July 16, 2008 Report Share Posted July 16, 2008 Sorry that I haven't commented in a while. I read ch 8 and 9. They were really good as ussual. I like the way you ended ch 9. Really good job, Kale. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted July 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 16, 2008 Well yea' date=' I was going to write more bu I couldn't think of it till now... Well, Zandra's crazy. That woman talking into Kals head sounds like Mai Valentine frm the original series. And also, it was funny how Zandra scolded him.[/quote'] thanks, but how did she sound like Mai? i dont have voices, only text... but i was sort of thinking of her when i was scolpting Bloodrun's Character. And yes, this character is not mine. Talia is his character submitted in my last contest. but he didnt put what she looked like.. ^_^ oh well. thanks for commenting. coupon on the way... Sorry that I haven't commented in a while. I read ch 8 and 9. They were really good as ussual. I like the way you ended ch 9. Really good job' date=' Kale.[/quote'] thanks! and that is okay, at least you read it now. ^_^ i am trying to end the chapters now with an ominous ending that makes you think, and i will do that from now on. i cant give you a coupon from that sentence though. ^_^ thanks you guys for reading! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted July 16, 2008 Report Share Posted July 16, 2008 Well yea' date=' I was going to write more bu I couldn't think of it till now... Well, Zandra's crazy. That woman talking into Kals head sounds like Mai Valentine frm the original series. And also, it was funny how Zandra scolded him.[/quote'] thanks, but how did she sound like Mai? i dont have voices, only text... but i was sort of thinking of her when i was scolpting Bloodrun's Character. And yes, this character is not mine. Talia is his character submitted in my last contest. but he didnt put what she looked like.. ^_^ oh well. thanks for commenting. coupon on the way... Sorry that I haven't commented in a while. I read ch 8 and 9. They were really good as ussual. I like the way you ended ch 9. Really good job' date=' Kale.[/quote'] thanks! and that is okay, at least you read it now. ^_^ i am trying to end the chapters now with an ominous ending that makes you think, and i will do that from now on. i cant give you a coupon from that sentence though. ^_^ thanks you guys for reading! Oh, I didn't comment for a coupon. But I can give a more detailed comment if you want? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted July 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 16, 2008 nah, if you didnt want one then you dont have to try. ^_^ i am just glad you liked it. and i am even happier that you didnt do it from the incentive. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted July 16, 2008 Report Share Posted July 16, 2008 nah' date=' if you didnt want one then you dont have to try. ^_^ i am just glad you liked it. and i am even happier that you didnt do it from the incentive. ^_^[/quote'] Yes, I understand. After looking back at some comments its easy to tell people just want a coupon. I don't though. Even paying you full price isn't enough. I don't mind. Anyway, i'll give more detailed and good comments next time. I'm sorry for not. And you don't need to give me a coupon for doing so. I can't wait to see what happens is ch 10. Good luck on it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted July 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 16, 2008 i will give you a coupon anyway. ^_^ it is also a thankyou, not just an incentive. but i hope you guys like chapter 10. geez, it feels weird to say 'Chapter 10.' it was only a while ago that i was on the prologue... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Καsτοr Posted July 16, 2008 Report Share Posted July 16, 2008 Thats true. But anyways I can't wait! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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