pokeoh master Posted May 29, 2008 Report Share Posted May 29, 2008 Well im new to this fan fic thing but ill try my best It's just my crazy idea part 2 coming soon_ _ _______________________________________ Axle: zzzzzzzzzz Byron: Wake up dude (Axle falls out of bed) Axle: huh, man Byron: Dude its tournament day Axle: WHAT !? (Jack enters) Jack: I heard you guys talking about the tournament today. Axle: Yeah we were Byron: Why Jack: Just asking (Get to Tournament Room) Axle: Hey Jack, wanna duel Jack: What Axle: C'mon Duel Me Jack: Ok sure but dont complain when you lose .....To Be Continued Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skuldur Posted May 29, 2008 Report Share Posted May 29, 2008 this is way too short Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted May 30, 2008 Report Share Posted May 30, 2008 There's no substance whatsoever! (2/10) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pokeoh master Posted June 21, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 21, 2008 Do i look bovveredi make it how i wannagot dat Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SebastiaanZ Posted June 23, 2008 Report Share Posted June 23, 2008 Don't get rude on us. It is short. Read other fanfics and you'll see what real ones are. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Mike Posted June 23, 2008 Report Share Posted June 23, 2008 way too short 0.0/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted June 23, 2008 Report Share Posted June 23, 2008 Do i look bovveredi make it how i wannagot dat Too short! And I don't see any good qualities. (0.2/10) If you want a good fan fic. Read others to get an idea. Come up with something origanal. Something that will force members to read it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pokeoh master Posted June 28, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 28, 2008 ok someone lock it thenif its wrong Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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