Custom Archetype Building

[孤高姫ちゃん]

Make Archetypes, feel free to make suggestions and assist others in making their custom Archetypes. Be balanced! 

[孤高姫ちゃん]

Card 1 of the "Vorex" Archetype.

When this card is special summoned; you can set 1 "Vorex" Spell Card from your Deck or GY, it cannot be activated this turn. While this card is banished, your opponent draws 4 cards during the passing of their main phase 2. You can discard 1 "Vorex" Spell Card; draw a card, and if you do, you can banish 1 "Vorex" Spell Card from your Deck. You can only resolve each effect of "Shinobū, The Temptation", once per turn.

 

UPDATE: Add (This card is always treated as a "Vorex" card) clause as the first text before summon effect. Already made correction erratas, such as adding the name to heavy once per turn, making numbers be numbers, instead of words (one = 1).

[LazerSwordKirbo]

On 8/9/2024 at 7:26 AM, 孤高姫ちゃん said:

While this card is banished, your opponent draws 4 cards during the passing of their main phase 2.

This bit is a neat idea but it doesn’t line up with the established way of wording effects. I think a better way of wording it would be “Once per turn, while this card is banished; at the end of your opponent’s Main Phase 2, your opponent draws 4 cards. (This effect is not optional.)

[ObexKing]

6 hours ago, LazerSwordKirbo said:

This bit is a neat idea but it doesn’t line up with the established way of wording effects. I think a better way of wording it would be “Once per turn, while this card is banished; at the end of your opponent’s Main Phase 2, your opponent draws 4 cards. (This effect is not optional.)

Or it can just say "During the End Phase your opponent must draw 4 cards." 
My personal opinion: This card with a made archetype would make a good mill deck.

[Loleo]

7 hours ago, LazerSwordKirbo said:

This bit is a neat idea but it doesn’t line up with the established way of wording effects. I think a better way of wording it would be “Once per turn, while this card is banished; at the end of your opponent’s Main Phase 2, your opponent draws 4 cards. (This effect is not optional.)

I like this wording for PSCT. one change would be : vs ; as anything before the former is a condition and before the later is a cost.

[Megamanric]

Plan on making an archetype based off of my fave roblox game 'Block Tales' called the Block archetype focused on synchro summoning.