Loleo Posted August 8 Report Share Posted August 8 (edited) Hey everyone! I haven't been back here in months, life has really kicked me around. I love this community and I wanted to check in how everyone was doing. To commemorate everyone that comes and goes, I made this... Return Contest! Theme (10 points): Make a card that has an effect focuses around its return from a zone. (like GY to Hand, or ED to deck, etc.) Balance (8 points): Something that would be reasonably released in current sets, does not need to be competitive. PSCT/Yu-Gi-Oh Grammar (8 points): A well worded card that works functionally. Art (5 points): Bonus if you have art. Preferably something that fits the name. Lore (2 points): Bonus if you can add flavor. Additional bonuses may apply for art you made, making additional cards that work with yours, or other interesting additions. Prizes! 1st: 3 card addition to an archetype of your choice. 2nd: 1 card addition to an archetype of your choice. 3rd: feedback on a thread of your choice. Deadline: August 15th 11:59PM EST Edited August 9 by Loleo Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Great Flower Mill Posted August 9 Report Share Posted August 9 (edited) Naga of the Abyss Level 8/Sea Serpent/WATER/Effect/ATK 3000/DEF 2000 Apart of the "Abyss Rising" set You can special summon this card (From your hand) by tributing 1 WATER monster you control. (Quick effect) You can shuffle this card from your face-up field into the deck face-up then add 2 level 4 monsters from your deck to your hand. If you draw this card face-up card that was shuffled into the deck by this effect: draw 1. You can only use each effect of "Naga of the Abyss" once per turn. Lore: This creature is to be said to come from an endless void where it would swim infinitely through the deep dark. During the battle between the "Mekk-Knights" and "Iblee" the clash between them was so great it caused a rift to open within the void and allowed this creature to slip through and wind up in an abyss similar to its own except there was solid matter that couldn't be passed through. As it doesn't like to be seen it used the water in its newfound home to hide as it was like swimming through the void. Unexpectedly there was another creature that dwelled within the depths of the abyss, a dragon that lived the abyss for thousands of years. Said to be sent by God itself it lives to protect its fallen home. These two creatures fight for dominance within the abyss and have done so for thousands of years even after the war between the "Mekk-knights" and the "Krawlers" Edited August 9 by Donavin dudley 1 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ObexKing Posted August 9 Report Share Posted August 9 Quantum Ferret-Fido LIGHT---Beast---Tuner---Effect---ATK 1000---DEF 1600 When this card is normal summoned you can add 1 "Quantum Memory Space" from your deck to your hand. Once per turn you can target this card and one other monster you control then return both of them to the hand and if you do Synchro summon 1 "Quantum" Synchro monster from your extra deck or graveyard with the combined level of the returned monsters. Quantum Bat-Ramon LIGHT---Beast---Effect---ATK 1800---DEF 1200 If you control no monsters or only control "Quantum" monsters you can special summon this card (From your hand). If this card would be used as a material for the synchro summon of a "Quantum" monster, you can add 1 trap card from your deck to your hand. You can only use each effect of "Quantum Bat-Ramon" once per turn. Quantum Memory Space Field spell While you control a "Quantum" monster you take no battle damage. Once per turn (Quick effect) you can target 1 "Quantum" Synchro monster and return it to the extra deck and if you do special summon the monsters used for its summon. (Whether it be from the hand, deck or graveyard) Quantum Mother-Wrinkle LIGHT---Spellcaster---Synchro---Effect---ATK 2600---DEF 2000 1 "Quantum" tuner monster + 1 non-tuner "Quantum" monster When this card is synchro summoned you can add 1 spell card from your graveyard or banishment to your hand. If a "Quantum" monster was returned to the hand from the field this turn, you can target 1 card in your graveyard then shuffle it into the deck. You can only use each effect of "Quantum Mother-Wrinkle" once per turn. 1 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yᵤₘₐ ₖₐᵢbₐ Posted August 10 Report Share Posted August 10 On 8/8/2024 at 11:55 PM, Loleo said: Hey everyone! Kenmori Ryunosuke [DARK] LV 4/Zombie/Tuner/Effect ATK/1450 DEF/0 If this card on the field is sent to the GY or banishment, you can target up to 3 cards from your GY that mentions Zombie monster, except "Kenmori Ryunosuke"; add those cards to your hand. (Quick Effect): You can Tribute 1 DARK monster; return this card from your GY or banishment and 1 card your opponent control into the Deck, and if you do, Special Summon 1 Level 3 or lower Zombie monster from GY to your side. You can only used each effect of "Kenmori Ryunosuke" once per turn. [Lore]: "Kenmori Ryunosuke" is a blind wanderer. Although he is blind, his swordsmanship is very great. Having fast and agile movements, coupled with his legendary cursed sword 忘れられない (Wasurerarenai) he is known to be a mysterious and legendary figure in the underworld. 4 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ObexKing Posted August 10 Report Share Posted August 10 19 minutes ago, Yuma Kaiba said: Kenmori Ryunosuke [DARK] LV 4/Zombie/Tuner/Effect ATK/1450 DEF/0 If this card on the field is sent to the GY or banishment, you can target up to 3 cards from your GY that mentions Zombie monster, except "Kenmori Ryunosuke"; add those cards to your hand. (Quick Effect): You can Tribute 1 DARK monster; return this card from your GY or banishment and 1 card your opponent control into the Deck, and if you do, Special Summon 1 Level 3 or lower Zombie monster from GY to your side. You can only used each effect of "Kenmori Ryunosuke" once per turn. [Lore]: "Kenmori Ryunosuke" is a blind wanderer. Although he is blind, his swordsmanship is very great. Having fast and agile movements, coupled with his legendary cursed sword 忘れられない (Wasurerarenai) he is known to be a mysterious and legendary figure in the underworld. He looks like he’s about to become the next Elden lord with the rivers of blood 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gtrthytgh hytyty Posted August 11 Report Share Posted August 11 I also have a challenge to make a legendary card that matches this monster Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Loleo Posted August 11 Author Report Share Posted August 11 4 hours ago, gtrthytgh hytyty said: I also have a challenge to make a legendary card that matches this monster You can post your own contest separately if you wish, if you do so you should post a deadline and how people are graded and optionally some prizes. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gtrthytgh hytyty Posted August 12 Report Share Posted August 12 تحمسة فقط لدي زمن طويييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييل لم اتي تمحني Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yᵤₘₐ ₖₐᵢbₐ Posted August 13 Report Share Posted August 13 On 8/12/2024 at 1:29 AM, Loleo said: You can post Hera, Underworld Scientist [WIND] LV 4/Zombie/Tuner/Effect ATK/1450 DEF/0 Once per turn, you can send 3 cards from the Top of your Deck to the GY; Special Summon 1 Level 6 or lower Synchro Monster from your Extra Deck in face-up Attack or Defense Position (this is treated as Synchro Summon). That Synchro Monster cannot attack, and is returned to your Extra Deck at the end of the turn. [Lore]: Hera is a scientist whose ambition is to bring ancient creatures from the past to life. Hera was very interested in the civilization and technology of the ancient creatures in the past. Researching for so long in the underworld made his soul contaminated by the evil soul in the underworld. So she intends to use these ancient creatures as his army to rule the world. 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ObexKing Posted August 13 Report Share Posted August 13 8 hours ago, Yuma Kaiba said: Hera, Underworld Scientist [WIND] LV 4/Zombie/Tuner/Effect ATK/1450 DEF/0 Once per turn, you can send 3 cards from the Top of your Deck to the GY; Special Summon 1 Level 6 or lower Synchro Monster from your Extra Deck in face-up Attack or Defense Position (this is treated as Synchro Summon). That Synchro Monster cannot attack, and is returned to your Extra Deck at the end of the turn. [Lore]: Hera is a scientist whose ambition is to bring ancient creatures from the past to life. Hera was very interested in the civilization and technology of the ancient creatures in the past. Researching for so long in the underworld made his soul contaminated by the evil soul in the underworld. So she intends to use these ancient creatures as his army to rule the world. Hey, post this with your other post instead of posting them in different posts. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yᵤₘₐ ₖₐᵢbₐ Posted August 13 Report Share Posted August 13 I didn't see that rule. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ObexKing Posted August 13 Report Share Posted August 13 3 minutes ago, Yuma Kaiba said: I didn't see that rule. Yeah you're right my bad 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Loleo Posted August 14 Author Report Share Posted August 14 18 hours ago, ObexKing said: Hey, post this with your other post instead of posting them in different posts. 17 hours ago, Yuma Kaiba said: I didn't see that rule. 17 hours ago, ObexKing said: Yeah you're right my bad I don't know if it's explicitly a rule on this site, but it is common courtesy here to edit your original post with all parts of a submission. You don't have to worry about it this time around. @Yuma Kaiba 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Nyx Avatar Posted August 14 Report Share Posted August 14 On 8/12/2024 at 12:57 AM, gtrthytgh hytyty said: تحمسة فقط لدي زمن طويييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييل لم اتي تمحني I told you, speak English. This is your last warning Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ObexKing Posted August 14 Report Share Posted August 14 2 minutes ago, The Nyx Avatar said: I told you, speak English. This is your last warning Nyx he doesn't understand or speak English Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Nyx Avatar Posted August 14 Report Share Posted August 14 10 minutes ago, ObexKing said: Nyx he doesn't understand or speak English And most of the users here don't understand or speak Arabic Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ObexKing Posted August 14 Report Share Posted August 14 1 minute ago, The Nyx Avatar said: And most of the users here don't understand or speak Arabic I can translate On 8/12/2024 at 1:57 AM, gtrthytgh hytyty said: تحمسة فقط لدي زمن طويييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييييل لم اتي تمحني He said "I am only excited for a long time" Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Nyx Avatar Posted August 14 Report Share Posted August 14 1 hour ago, ObexKing said: I can translate He said "I am only excited for a long time" Okay, cool. But that's his job to do before posting. No one else's. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yᵤₘₐ ₖₐᵢbₐ Posted August 15 Report Share Posted August 15 Да, да, да, да, да Это чертов D-O-double-G (Снуп Догг!) 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ObexKing Posted August 15 Report Share Posted August 15 We have until tonight boys and girls!!! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LazerSwordKirbo Posted August 16 Report Share Posted August 16 Sorry for the late addition. Red-Eyes Re-Run Dragon: Level 7 DARK Dragon/Effect 2300 ATK / 1800 DEF Once per turn, you can send 1 Level 7 or higher DARK Dragon Monster from your hand or field to the GY; Special Summon 1 “Red-Eyes” Monster from your GY or 1 “Red-Eyes Black Dragon” from your Deck. You can reveal this card in your hand to activate the previous effect of this card if your opponent controls a Monster. During the End Phase; you can return this card and as many other “Red-Eyes” cards in your GY or Banishment as possible to where they were at the start of the Standby Phase (Field, GY, Banishment, hand, Deck, or Extra Deck) in the same position they were in at that time. (Battle Position for Monsters, Face-Up or Face-Down for Spell/Trap cards.) The lore is that Joey tried to use the time machine card that resulted in red eyes retro dragon on red eyes toon to revert the toonification. It didn't work but pegasus liked the idea and made it a card. Visually it will be based on old rolls of film. Art by Lindsey 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Loleo Posted August 16 Author Report Share Posted August 16 On 8/14/2024 at 8:30 AM, ObexKing said: Nyx he doesn't understand or speak English well actually On 8/11/2024 at 9:23 AM, gtrthytgh hytyty said: I also have a challenge to make a legendary card that matches this monster he does 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ObexKing Posted August 16 Report Share Posted August 16 9 hours ago, Loleo said: well actually he does Well let's set that aside. Who won? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Loleo Posted August 17 Author Report Share Posted August 17 (edited) On 8/16/2024 at 7:44 AM, ObexKing said: Well let's set that aside. Who won? sorry for the delay, here are the breakdowns! On 8/8/2024 at 7:43 PM, Donavin dudley said: Naga of the Abyss Theme (10/10 points): perfectly on point with theme! Balance (6/8 points): For the intended purpose it is quite powerful, there is also a huge hassle on shuffling a card into your deck face-up as it changes what a legal shuffle is. PSCT/Yu-Gi-Oh Grammar (5/8 points): Some capitalization errors, missing some semi colons. Art (5/5 points): It matches the card and looks great! Lore (2/2 points): Super Solid 28/33 On 8/9/2024 at 11:28 AM, ObexKing said: Quantum Ferret-Fido Theme (10/10 points): Perfectly on theme Balance (6/8 points): This is definitely a powerful engine that can grab ANY spells and traps, but is reliant on having the right cards together. It's very difficult to evaluate because it feels like it's made to FTK/OTK and even if it doesn't, have wonderful recursion. Some of the highest ceiling and lowest floor I've ever seen. PSCT/Yu-Gi-Oh Grammar (5/8 points): Some capitalization errors, missing some semi colons, and commas. As worded it's unknown whether Fido treats the monsters as material or even functions. Art (5/5 points): beautiful art Lore (0/2 points): none provided Bonus 1: The extra cards made this at least a little gradable. 27/33 On 8/10/2024 at 9:52 AM, Yuma Kaiba said: Kenmori Ryunosuke Theme (10/10 points): on point with the theme Balance (4/8 points): over the course of 2 turns this is a +5 in card advantage ignoring other interactions, also allowing you to grab specific cards and performing some of the best removal in the game for basically no cost. PSCT/Yu-Gi-Oh Grammar (8/8 points): No flaws at all! Art (5/5 points): Cool art! Lore (2/2 points): Feels really in line with Yugioh! Bonus 1: Hera is super cool too! Also insanely broken, but I definitely see the synergy 30/33 On 8/15/2024 at 9:47 PM, LazerSwordKirbo said: Red-Eyes Re-Run Dragon Theme (9/10 points): Rather then just having an effect "to return" I was also looking for an effect WHEN the card was returned. Something that either had that as a cost or condition. Balance (6/8 points): Technically balanced, but difficult to keep track of and pull off PSCT/Yu-Gi-Oh Grammar (4/8 points): monster should not be capitalized, referring to the previous is fine if a bit confusing, but is written out of order with missing commas and semi colons. Saying "During the End Phase" without (Quick Effect) makes it confusing on whether you want your end phase or also your opponent's turn. Art (5/5 points): Beautiful art Lore (1/2 points): A little simple, but I appreciate it Bonus 1: Credit to artist 26/33 1st: @Yuma Kaiba 2nd: @Donavin dudley 3rd: @ObexKing Pls DM me for your prizes Edited August 17 by Loleo 1 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yᵤₘₐ ₖₐᵢbₐ Posted August 18 Report Share Posted August 18 3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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