KITT12345 Posted May 28, 2008 Report Share Posted May 28, 2008 hi can i have an opinion on my cards thx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mutant Monster RAEG-HAPYP Posted May 28, 2008 Report Share Posted May 28, 2008 Well you have some OCG errors and a few are overpowered but these are good for a new member 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShadowKyogre Posted May 28, 2008 Report Share Posted May 28, 2008 OCG and Grammar errors. You could just change "Great Dragon" to a Dragon-Type. And also make some support cards. Otherwise, good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KITT12345 Posted May 28, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 28, 2008 thx hunter994x everybody i will add more cards as i make some so plz look at them thx every1 here r some more i made. by the way i find all my images on google lol. i'll state if the image is made by me. so heres my cards. the crosshair lock-on image i found on google i just put a suckish stick man on it lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mutant Monster RAEG-HAPYP Posted May 28, 2008 Report Share Posted May 28, 2008 This is the correct OCG for CrossHair Lock onActivate only when your opponent's monster declares an attack. Destroy the attacking monster. Other than that, It's good to see new members put a little effort in card making Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShadowKyogre Posted May 28, 2008 Report Share Posted May 28, 2008 (KITT12345 and Hunter994x ) Is it okay if you review this set? http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/showthread.php?tid=44704 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KITT12345 Posted May 28, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 28, 2008 here is some cards for my that can help my great dragon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KITT12345 Posted May 28, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 28, 2008 i think the rocket laucher is a bit weird for a dragon if u know wot i mean Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KITT12345 Posted May 28, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 28, 2008 humanoids is ment to be warriors by the way me went wrong Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShadowKyogre Posted May 29, 2008 Report Share Posted May 29, 2008 Here's the effect w/correct OCG for Great Dragon Summoning Circle (I would change it to a Continuous Spell): When this card is activated, you can Special Summon 1 "Great Dragon" from (where you want it to be). As long as this card remains face-up on the field, your opponent cannot select "Great Dragon" as an attack target. Here's the effect w/correct OCG for the other one (change it to a normal spell): You can only activate this card by selecting 1 face-up "Great Dragon" you control. Destroy any monsters your opponent controls that are Warrior-Types. That selected "Great Dragon" cannot attack this turn (inspired by "Burst Stream of Destruction). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KITT12345 Posted May 29, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 29, 2008 the rocket laucher is definetly insantly destroyedoh i making an evil army set btw. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShadowKyogre Posted May 29, 2008 Report Share Posted May 29, 2008 What's the story behind the set? I'll go ahead and tell you the one behind the current set I'm working on. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KITT12345 Posted May 29, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 29, 2008 this is my evil set :D there only bout 5 cards in it so rate it out of 10 plz. i'm going to call it a night now so c ya tomoz guys Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KITT12345 Posted May 29, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 29, 2008 wot inspired me for this set is there were some evil kickass pictures on google so i used them Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mutant Monster RAEG-HAPYP Posted May 29, 2008 Report Share Posted May 29, 2008 Those last 5 are really good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShadowKyogre Posted May 29, 2008 Report Share Posted May 29, 2008 Okays. Story behind the EOD set: Sapphira used to be an innocent human who was persecuted by everyone around her. When she turned into a demon, she killed every single god that the ancient world knew, adding their powers to hers by devouring them alive. The other "Death" cards are packets of her powers. Evil Entity OCG (6/10, remembering what happened to Snatch Steal): Only activate when a DARK monster on your side of the field is destroyed as aresult of battle. Take control of the monster that destroyed the monster. If this is destroyed, the selected monster is destroyed.If the selected monster is destroyed, this is destroyed. Evil Captain OCG (8/10, needs maintenence cost or higher level): Increase the ATK of this monster by 300 for every "Evil" monster on the field. Evil Reinforcements OCG (10/10): Discard a card to search your deck for two "Evil" monsters. Add those cards to your hand and shuffle your deck. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KITT12345 Posted May 29, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 29, 2008 Guys i made some fusion cards for my dragons right now i don't have many:D g2g c ya.Ghost dragon is mean't to be a dark-.type Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KITT12345 Posted May 30, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 30, 2008 look at my new topic it called My made cards in any other cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mutant Monster RAEG-HAPYP Posted May 30, 2008 Report Share Posted May 30, 2008 The Shark and me like your new cards. 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted May 30, 2008 Report Share Posted May 30, 2008 A bit overpowered. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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