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^^ Thank you for your comment! I adjusted the text on "Ryu-Kishin Metal" and fixed the punctuation of "Demetalization"; only Deck and Graveyard needed to be capitalized - hand remains uncapitalized.

 

I'd help you out, but I do not have enough points to Rep anyone yet T-T

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^^ Thank you for your comment! I adjusted the text on "Ryu-Kishin Metal" and fixed the punctuation of "Demetalization"; only Deck and Graveyard needed to be capitalized - hand remains uncapitalized.

 

I'd help you out' date=' but I do not have enough points to Rep anyone yet T-T[/quote'] thank you Aeon, for your willingness to help me in my neg rep quest... as for Ryu-Kishin, OCG is now perfect and you switch with lalolalo again... sorry lalolalo, you're now 4th.

 

Ratings are now back to where they were.

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=D Alright! I'm holding on to third! ^^ Could I ask you a favor? Could you give my KH Heartless cards a look? You can find a link to them in my sig - I'm just trying to get them publicity.

 

=O If you would prefer I not do that on this contest thread, I will happily delete this post.

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alright... here goes. to:

 

lalolalo -- Metal Cards gain attack' date=' not lose it. Fix your Harpie Lady please. "Factory" is a very good card, it's balanced and its very relevant. the OCG is perfect.

 

[u']lord wyhe[/u] -- nice, though your picked another 2-tribute, I liked the fact that e-heroes might be actually be used for something good, like a metal set. Droid march's picture is pretty funny (who in their right mind would dress up like that?) and its effect is balanced and fair.

 

IAmTheAeonClock -- You added an extra effect for your "Metal" monster. Be sure that Ryu-Kishin Metal's effect is only Metal Script, nothing else. Your spell is very useful and works quite well. You are missing some capitals (I believe "Hand" and "Graveyard" are capitalized; correct me if I'm wrong.) but, other than that the OCG is well done.

 

God Hunter -- Your card looks kinda funny, but nice holo effect. However, the effect should be strictly metal script and I need a support card too. Oh, and I'm looking for "Metal" cards made just from normal monsters, Tri-Horned is an effect... maybe you should read the rules ^^

 

jakey252 -- Your metal monster has "Cyber-Morph" instead of Metalmorph, please correct your metal script. Your spell is pretty off: it's says it is an equip, but its continuous, and its effect is a little overpowered. please fix these things.

 

Dark Edo Phoenix -- very nice. I like your monster (reinforced titanium... lol) and you're magnetic pyramid spell is very good (though the "welding torch" spell isn't very useless... I think a stronger version of Cyber Summon Blaster") However, OCG on the spell is also off by a little.

 

Dhpo -- alright, pic is good but used before. Like I said to god hunter and co. the effect of the monster should be just metal script, and nothing else, and the ATK and DEF need to increase, not decrease (if you're using Luster Dragon #2, his ATK si 2400, so the metal should be around 2700-2800) And your "Metal DNA" is too strong, please make it balanced.

 

currently...

1st) lord wyhe (2 reps)

2nd) Dark Edo Phoenix (1 rep 10 pts)

3rd) IAmTheAeonClock (20 pts)

4th) lalolalo (10 pts)

5th) jakey252 (5 pts)

 

ATTENTION!! NEG REPS ALERT!!

Please note that there is another threat to this website's integrity! Watch out, I have been neg repped three times by a complete newbie to the site, named sidebyside. I'm not sure why, but I think I critisized some of his cards and he didn't like it. If you could please assist me in neg repping him some times, and maybe giving me reps (plz! :cry: you can delete them if he removes his!) until he stops and repents for his actions, that would be very helpful! Thank you!

 

I have some stuff to say..

 

1. You can PM a Super Moderator, to delete your Neg Reps.

 

2. Asking for Reps is against the rules.

 

3. I read the rules fine. Learn your cards please. Tri-Horned Dragon, is a regular Vanilla monster.

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4. Though, I did not see a support card, mentioned in your rules, I will post it later.

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I read the rules fine. Learn your cards please. Tri-Horned Dragon' date=' is a regular Vanilla monster.[/quote'] Oh, my bad. I was thinking "White-Horned Dragon"... stupid McDonalds.. and that rep part was a joke (jeez, where's your sense of humor! :))
Ouch... u.u...

 

I can't post more cards right? u.u...

go ahead and repost and modify your cards' date=' that's alright with me.

 

Can I enter
of course, but rememeber OCG...

 

FIXED!! CHECK FIRST POST!!
duly noted, and the edited winnig list will be updated shortly
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I read the rules fine. Learn your cards please. Tri-Horned Dragon' date=' is a regular Vanilla monster.[/quote'] Oh, my bad. I was thinking "White-Horned Dragon"... stupid McDonalds.. and that rep part was a joke (jeez, where's your sense of humor! :))

 

 

Next time, write (this is a joke) or (JK)..

 

I will edit my card.. As, it is quite dull..

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Lol' date=' superbull.

 

PROBLEMS

 

1 - Not original Metal Script

2 - That wouldn't count as a metal monster

3 - Spell card only supports your card

 

Magicbunny would of said the same thing but more.[/quote'] He basically sums it up. superbull, please read the rules or your cards will not be considered for the contest at all, thank you.

 

DesWombat4Ever: Good cards, but I see your have "1st Edition" in the corner of your card. As I recall, 1st edition cards were cards with gold stickers in their corners. Either you can photoshop those stickers in, your remove the "1st Edition" notation, please. I will still rate your card, but the thing irks me. You have a great monster picture, and OCG is perfect as far as I can tell. Your equip card's tactical use in a duel is limited, as with most equip cards, but its effect is very good. You're most likely going to get bumped up to recieve a prize, as soon as I start my eval. of the cards.

 

ps. 200th POST!!!

 

EDIT: the edited cards have been looked at an considered...

Oh, I got soft and changed the prize rankings (now there's 6), and here's the rankings.

 

1st) lord wyhe (2 reps + 10 pts)

2nd) Dark Edo Phoenix (2 reps)

3rd) IAmTheAeonClock (1 rep + 10 pts)

4th) Deswombat4ever (1 rep)

5th) IAmTheAeonClock (10 pts)

6th) Dhpo (5 pts) (good trap card, sort of. It's a little overpowered, and the OCG is incredibly off. Fix that and you'll get bumped a place or 2)

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Lol' date=' superbull.

 

PROBLEMS

 

1 - Not original Metal Script

2 - That wouldn't count as a metal monster

3 - Spell card only supports your card

 

Magicbunny would of said the same thing but more.[/quote'] He basically sums it up. superbull, please read the rules or your cards will not be considered for the contest at all, thank you.

 

DesWombat4Ever: Good cards, but I see your have "1st Edition" in the corner of your card. As I recall, 1st edition cards were cards with gold stickers in their corners. Either you can photoshop those stickers in, your remove the "1st Edition" notation, please. I will still rate your card, but the thing irks me. You have a great monster picture, and OCG is perfect as far as I can tell. Your equip card's tactical use in a duel is limited, as with most equip cards, but its effect is very good. You're most likely going to get bumped up to recieve a prize, as soon as I start my eval. of the cards.

 

ps. 200th POST!!!

 

EDIT: the edited cards have been looked at an considered...

Oh, I got soft and changed the prize rankings (now there's 6), and here's the rankings.

 

1st) lord wyhe (2 reps + 10 pts)

2nd) Dark Edo Phoenix (2 reps)

3rd) IAmTheAeonClock (1 rep + 10 pts)

4th) Deswombat4ever (1 rep)

5th) IAmTheAeonClock (10 pts)

6th) Dhpo (5 pts) (good trap card, sort of. It's a little overpowered, and the OCG is incredibly off. Fix that and you'll get bumped a place or 2)

 

Yikes, I did the first edition thing too. But crap, I wrote out first o.o wow, what was I thinking? It's all caps and is like "FIRST EDITION!!!!!" xD My blunder. I suppose I'll leave it though, since it amuses me.

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Lol' date=' superbull.

 

PROBLEMS

 

1 - Not original Metal Script

2 - That wouldn't count as a metal monster

3 - Spell card only supports your card

 

Magicbunny would of said the same thing but more.[/quote'] He basically sums it up. superbull, please read the rules or your cards will not be considered for the contest at all, thank you.

 

DesWombat4Ever: Good cards, but I see your have "1st Edition" in the corner of your card. As I recall, 1st edition cards were cards with gold stickers in their corners. Either you can photoshop those stickers in, your remove the "1st Edition" notation, please. I will still rate your card, but the thing irks me. You have a great monster picture, and OCG is perfect as far as I can tell. Your equip card's tactical use in a duel is limited, as with most equip cards, but its effect is very good. You're most likely going to get bumped up to recieve a prize, as soon as I start my eval. of the cards.

 

ps. 200th POST!!!

 

EDIT: the edited cards have been looked at an considered...

Oh, I got soft and changed the prize rankings (now there's 6), and here's the rankings.

 

1st) lord wyhe (2 reps + 10 pts)

2nd) Dark Edo Phoenix (2 reps)

3rd) IAmTheAeonClock (1 rep + 10 pts)

4th) Deswombat4ever (1 rep)

5th) IAmTheAeonClock (10 pts)

6th) Dhpo (5 pts) (good trap card, sort of. It's a little overpowered, and the OCG is incredibly off. Fix that and you'll get bumped a place or 2)

 

I fixed it. I hope the OCG is better this time.

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1st) lord wyhe (2 reps + 10 pts)

2nd) Dark Edo Phoenix (2 reps)

3rd) IAmTheAeonClock (1 rep + 10 pts)

4th) Dhpo (1 rep)

5th) Deswombat4ever (10 pts)

6th) IAmTheAeonClock (5 pts)

sorry, aeon... you're gonna need to pull yourself out of this one (editing cards is allowed, and so are secondary entries... I'm going to have to go against tertruary entries, though)

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yep, its over. I'm probably not going to host another contest for a while (giving out 6 reps is quite a bit...), but look forward to my next contest when it happens.

uzu4, if you have a good metal card idea, pm me or post it in the realistic cards thread.

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