OmegaWave Posted May 28, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 28, 2008 Your bios are well-explained & detailed' date='this shows the effort you put in your work.[/quote'] I appriciate that. I'll be working hard on Chapter 3 today. I may add some more Bios too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Impact™ Posted May 28, 2008 Report Share Posted May 28, 2008 very good character description and very in dept episodesmy rating 89% Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OmegaWave Posted May 28, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 28, 2008 very good character description and very in dept episodesmy rating 89% Gives ya $5. Think you can bump that up a point? lol. 90% is an A. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atomix Posted May 28, 2008 Report Share Posted May 28, 2008 Well it look as things are more orginised than ever before lol' date=' good luck with chapter three[/quote'] Do you really like my story? Because you type "lol" or "XD" after almost everything. JP: Uh....Spammer much?Trip: Honesty?? Course I like like it lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OmegaWave Posted May 28, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 28, 2008 Yugioh AX Season 1: The Rebirth of NatureChapter 3: The Hyper Dragon Fiasco (Part 2) Continuing from Chapter 2 - The Hyper Dragon Fiasco (Part 1) Current Status:Joshua - 2 Face-downs, 2900 LP, 1 card in Hand.Black Claw Scout - Cyberdark Dragon+Tyrant Dragon, 4000 LP, 1 Card in hand. Rachel - Oh no....Not good. If Josh doesn't have anything good face-down, that Dragon is gonna murder him! Joshua - Oh man......I hope I draw something that will help me. Black Claw Scout - Ha! Good luck! This duel is over and Master will be pleased with me! Joshua - Master-who? Black Claw Scout - I'll tell you once this is all over. Joshua - ........ *The Metal Flower Necklace Began to Glow* Joshua - What the?! AH! AAAAAAAAAAH!!!! **Flashback - 5 Years Ago** Grandpa Gordon - Hoho.....Joshua! Come here. I have something to give to you. Joshua - Grandpa? What is it? Grandpa Gordon - This is something that I made when I was a youngster. It's a flower. Joshua - Made out of Silver? Grandpa Gordon - Yes. It's very special to me. I want you to have it. I see alot of me in you. This flower has always brought me luck. In fact, I think the necklace helped me find my true love, your Grandma. Maybe, it could help you too. Joshua - Wow! Grandpa, thanks! I love you! **Present Day** Joshua - .....It's time to put this necklace to work! *Draws* Rachel - What just happened?! Chris - That was really weird! Could it have just been the sun's light reflecting on the Flower? Black Claw Scout - *Thinking to self* No....That necklace is magical.....I have a bad feeling about this. Joshua - NOW! Time to destroy your Dragon! First, I summon "Laser Satelite" in Attack Position! To activate it's effect, it requires 2 counters. Luckily, I've got this. I activate the Trap Card "Satelite Re-fitting"! Which adds 2 counters on my Satelite! Black Claw Scout - Eh? What does that satelite do? Joshua - Your about to find out! I activate "Laser Satelite"'s effect! NOW! Take a look at your Dragon! Black Claw Scout - Huh.......HUH?! *Laser Satelite flys high into the air. It begins to Charge it's laser* Chris - Whoa.....never saw that card before. Black Claw Scout - *Gulp* *Laser is fired. Cyber Dark Dragon is completely destroyed.* Black Claw Scout - NOOOOOO!!!!!! Joshua - TIME TO END THIS! Now, I activate "Limiter Removal" from my Hand! Which increases my Satelite's ATK to 2000! Now, I attack you directly!!!! Black Claw Scout - Ha! Not enough! I'll still win! Joshua - Oh really? Don't count your chickens before they hatch! I activate my last face-down! "Legendary Magic - Supreme Damage Multiplier X2"! By reducing my Life Points to 100, the damage you take is doubled! Black Claw Scout - NOOOO!!!!! IT CAN'T BE! I NEVER LOSE! *Laser is fired, Black Claw Scout is defeated* Joshua- Ah......That made my heart race. Black Claw Scout - Grrrrr....... Joshua - Alright! Tell me what you know. Black Claw Scout - Fine....I'm part of a gang that is led by a man named Geigas. You know that "Lotus of Purity" that is the prize for this tournament? Joshua - Yes....what about it? Black Claw Scout - It's part of a 3 card series. You see....Duel Monsters is just more than a card game. Joshua - Yes...I know. The cards are sealed with the spirits of monsters. I've been told that by Yugi. Black Claw Scout - Oh....so you know that who ever has the 3 lotus cards has the power to control nature? Joshua - What?! Black Claw Scout - Geigas already has 1.....the Lotus of Purity is here....the other one....is missing. Joshua - Hey....you okay? Black Claw scout - Agh.....Gwah......AAAAAAAAAHHHHHHH!!!!!!!! *He is engulfed in an aura of flames and disappears into thin air.* Joshua - No.....This has to stop. Geigas is pure evil. Rachel, Chris, we need to get those 3 lotus cards! Rachel - Right!! But....We need to win this tournament first. Joshua - Right. Let's go! *End of Chapter 3* Cards of Interest:Laser Satelite (Purity and Corruption)Satelite Re-fitting (Purity and Corruption)Limiter Removal (Real Card. Check the Yugioh Wiki)Legendary Magic - Supreme Damage Multiplier X2 (Purity and Corruption) Okay, that duel is over. Any comments? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted May 29, 2008 Report Share Posted May 29, 2008 I have a gut feeling that the real plot is about to start boiling up.Good job there! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OmegaWave Posted May 29, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 29, 2008 I have a gut feeling that the real plot is about to start boiling up.Good job there! Yeah. Thanks alot for being a devoted reader! There will be 3 new characters introduced in Chapter 4. Along with a new card set. Hope You keep reading. BTW, could ya....kinda advertise this topic? I'd like some new readers. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atomix Posted May 29, 2008 Report Share Posted May 29, 2008 Hurray, more characters means a better story!!! XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted May 29, 2008 Report Share Posted May 29, 2008 Hurray' date=' more characters means a better story!!![/quote']You know what,he's right.If you ever need help in that department,I can always lend a helping hand. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Diviner Posted May 29, 2008 Report Share Posted May 29, 2008 New ep rocks.I hope the new characters work out for you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Umbra Posted May 29, 2008 Report Share Posted May 29, 2008 You haven't perchance read the Ragnarok manhwa, have you? (Considering that you use "zenny" as money (But what do I know, that's probably referring to something else instead)). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OmegaWave Posted May 29, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 29, 2008 You haven't perchance read the Ragnarok manhwa' date=' have you? (Considering that you use "zenny" as money (But what do I know, that's probably referring to something else instead)).[/quote'] Zenny is used as money in ALOT of stuff. (Video Games, Fan-Fics, etc.) I added the "Antagonist" Bio section. Geigas is in there....but since he's only appeared in one chapter, there isn't much known about him. He's one of those *I'll keep my personality a secret until it's okay* villans. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted May 30, 2008 Report Share Posted May 30, 2008 The Big Bad's bio is forged out in such a mysterious yet brief manner that I don't even question any more about him. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OmegaWave Posted May 31, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 31, 2008 BUMP Update:- I'm working on making the character designs via TekTek. So hopefully, tommorow, you'll be able to see what the characters look like.- Chapter 4 is being hard worked on. Expect it in a few days.- As you can see in my siggy, the 3rd AX Expansion is on it's way. I plan to post the 3rd expansion totally completed. Unlike the first 2.- I am working on my Website to have a Yugioh AX section and downloadable Text Documents of the Fan-Fic and other things. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OmegaWave Posted June 3, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 3, 2008 BUMP I apologise for the long wait. But you all will have to wait longer. I have my Video Game now and awhole bunch of other stuff that needs my attention. So chapter 4 will be awhile off. Sorry. Go check out the Legend Fighters topic in General for updates on the game. A demo will be releasing soon. So look forward to it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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