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I'm new to the whole Fan-Fic thing. This fan-fic will be using most of my Written Cards. (Including the Wi-Fi revolution and Shadow of the Roses). This Fan-Fic will include many of the highly regarded YCM members (Like Tkill and Wolfberserker).

 

[spoiler=Protagonists]

[spoiler=Joshua Hazelwood - Introduced in Chapter 2]

Storyline Information

Joshua Hazelwood is the main character of Yugioh AX. The storyline is pretty much centered around him except for a few parts which will be under the identity of "Sub-Chapters". Duels involving someone other than him will still be part of the main chapters, but there will be parts that focus about one of his friend's life and past expiriences. There is somewhat of a mysterious energy about him. Maybe that will explained later on.......

 

Personality

He is a very hyperactive person. He tends to act on impulse. Meaning that he doesn't think before he acts. He just gets a feeling in his heart that he needs to do something. Good things tend to happen due to this behavior, however. Maybe it's because of his lucky necklace.

 

Deck Construction

Josh's deck mainly consists of LIGHT monsters. He chose them because LIGHT monsters tend to be valiant and helpful. His signature move is when he completes the summoning of "Archlord Zerato" in one turn and typically early in the duel. (As seen in Chapter 2) His signature cards are "Archlord Zerato", "Laser Satelite", and "Rensaiga, the Purity Overlord".

 

[spoiler=Rachel Oppelt - Introduced in Chapter 2]

Storyline Information

Rachel is Joshua's Girlfriend. While she may seem useless as of now, her role in the story becomes more and more important as time progresses. We shall see what happens later on.......

 

Personality

Rachel is a very cheerful, vibrant, and supportive person. She has great beauty and intellect. But she doesn't gloat about it. Most people tend to love her as soon as they meet her. She has a deep love for Joshua and would stop at nothing to see him happy. Although, she does have somewhat of a patience problem. Especially if it means she would be late for something. Her dueling skills rely solely on strategic planning. Basically a polar opposite of Joshua's tactics.

 

Deck Construction

Her deck contains WIND monsters. Ever since she was a child, the soothing feeling of a spring breeze facinated her. She loves Wind. Her Signature Cards include "Twister Falcon", "Hurracaune Sorceress", and "Whirlwind Prodigy".

 

[spoiler=Christopher Hazelwood - Introduced in Chapter 2]

Storyline Information

Chris is Joshua's Oldest Brother. He keeps a good eye on Josh while their parents are away. Yet, he seems to be one of Josh's followers in Dueling. Much like Rachel, his role in the story at this point seems minimal......but as time goes on, that will change.

 

Personality

Chris spent a year in Boot Camp training for the U.S. Marines. He is a very strict and upstanding person......when he wants to be. But while around Joshua and Rachel, he seems carefree. He has a humorous side to him as well. A good person to make friends with if you see him.

 

Deck Construction

Chris uses EARTH monsters. All of the time training in Mud and Dirt has rubbed off on him. His Signature Card include "Megarock Dragon", "Dummy Golem", and "Colossus, Titan of the Mountains". His Dueling Technique is similar to Josh's in a way. He is a very agressive duelist. His moves don't involve much thinking. Which, for cards like "Megarock Dragon", tend to put him in a bad spot.

 

 

[spoiler=Antagonists]

[spoiler=Geigas - Introduced in Chapter 1]

Storyline Info

Geigas is an important villan in Yugioh AX. Little more is known than that.

 

Personality

He's evil. Little more is known.

 

Deck Construction

He seems to have a great interest in the 3 Lotus'. So his deck is mainly plants. His signature card seems to be Necro Plant as of now.

 

 

Character Bios will be updated when I have more time.

 

Season 1: The Rebirth Of Nature

Chapter 1: The Legend Introduced

 

 

Prelude:

Long ago, back when the Eygptian Gods ran the world, there was a guardian of Nature. Known as the "Immortal Lotus". He gave Nature it's shape, beauty, and it's abilities to assist mankind. There came a day when the Immortal Lotus began to lose his power. He called upon Ra, Obelisk, and Slifer for assistance. So they agreed. The result was the Immortal Lotus being split into 3 seperate entities. Those 3 entities were also Lotus-type beings. Each one represented a portion of his Soul and abilities.

The "Lotus of Necra" represented the Immortal Lotus' Dark side.

The "Lotus of Gaia" represented his inteligence and abilities with all things plant.

The "Lotus of Purity" represented his Good and Gentle Side.

The Lotus of Necra had the ability to insert it'self into other plants and turn them into man-eating savages. The Lotus of Purity had the ability to cure sickness and toxins in the plants. As well as Water. The Lotus of Gaia is the central Lotus. Meaning the Lotus that is closest to the original Lotus in terms of ability. The Lotus of Gaia maintained Nature's Shape and Beauty. One day, once the Shadow Games began to spread across Dimensions of Worlds, the 3 Lotus' were sealed into Stone Tablets. Legend said that the 3 Lotus' would one day be released. And a legendary soul would access the power of Fusion to bond the 3 lotus' together again and give birth to the Immortal Lotus once again. Although....it's not clear whether that "Legendary Soul" is of a good nature...or a bad one.

 

"??? V.S. ???"

??? LP - 4000

??? LP - 4000

??? Hand - 6

??? Hand - 5

 

??? - Well, well......it seems to be my turn. How wonderful.

 

??? - Just get going! I want to beat you as quickly as possible! Your nothing but pure evil, Geigas!

 

Geigas - Well now....why so much hatred, Vidder? What have I ever done to harm you?

 

Vidder - I know why you challenged me! You just want the card I have....for reviving the Immortal Lotus! I'll never let someone like you use it for evil!

 

Geigas - Hehehe....it's only evil in your eyes...but I digress.....let's duel. First, I summon "Inferno Plant LV3" in Attack Position! Then I place 2 cards face-down. That ends my turn.

 

Current Stats:

Geigas: Inferno Plant LV3: ATK Mode, 2 Spell/Trap cards face-down, LP - 4000, Hand - 3.

Vidder: No change.

 

Vidder - Alright! My move! *Draws* I summon "Volcanic Slicer" in Attack Position! Now, Volcanic Slicer! Attack Inferno Plant LV3!

 

Geigas - Foolish....I activate my Trap Card! "Ensnare of the Demon Plant"! If you attack a Plant-Type monster on my side of the field, this Trap lets me send 1 Plant-Type monster from my Hand to my Graveyard and destroy the attacking monster. So i'll send my "Gigaplant" to the Graveyard. Say bye-bye to your Slicer!

 

Vidder - NO! *Slicer is destroyed*. Grrr......Then i'll just set 1 card face-down. That's it.

 

Current Stats:

Geigas: Inferno Plant LV3: ATK Mode, 1 Spell/Trap face-down, LP - 4000, Hand - 2.

Vidder: 1 Spell/Trap face-down, LP - 4000, Hand - 3.

 

Geigas - I draw. *Draws*.....hehehehe....BWAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAAHHA! This turn, it's over! HAHAHAHAHAHA!!!

 

Vidder - WHAT?!

 

Geigas - Since it's my Standby Phase, my Inferno Plant LV3 grows up! It now becomes "Inferno Plant LV5"! Now, I activate it's ability! By sending 1 Spell or Trap on my side of the field to the Graveyard, I can destroy any card on your side of the field! So your face-down card goes to the Graveyard!

 

Vidder - *Thinking to self* No.....That was Mirror Force.....I could've had the advantage...

 

Geigas - Now....I've got a little treat for you. Your the first person to ever see me play this next card! HAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!

 

Vidder - HUH?! What could it possibly be?!

 

Geigas - I play the Spell Card, "Polymerization"!!! Fusing the "Lotus of Necra" and "Blood Rose Dragon" in my Hand together!

 

Vidder - IT CAN'T BE! YOU HAVE A LOTUS CARD?!!!

 

Geigas - Hehehehe.....They fuse together to become the Legendary, "Chaos Plant"! It has 3100 ATK....so with Inferno Plant, it's more than enough to destroy you!

 

Vidder - *Frozen. Unable to speak*

 

Geigas - GO MY MONSTERS! DESTROY HIM!

 

*They attack. Vidder is defeated*

 

Vidder - You.....monster.....*Unconcious*

 

Geigas - Yes.....this is it. The card I need to revive the Immortal Lotus! I finally have "Nature's Miracle Fusion"! Now I just need to acquire the other 2 lotus cards....and the planet will be mine! BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHHAHAHA!!!!!

 

*Laughter Fades into the darkness*

 

*End of Chapter 1*

 

Cards Of Interest:

"Inferno Plant LV3" (Shadow of the Rose)

"Inferno Plant LV5" (shadow of the Rose)

"Blood Rose Dragon" (Shadow of the Rose)

"Chaos Plant" (Shadow of the Rose)

"Gigaplant" (Real Card. Check the Yugioh Wiki)

"Polymerization" (Real Card. Check the Yugioh Wiki)

"Volcanic Slicer" (Real Card. Check the Yugioh Wiki)

"Ensnare of the Demon Plant" (Shadow of the Rose)

"Mirror Force" (Real Card. Check the Yugioh Wiki)

"Lotus of Necra" (Shadow of the Rose)

"Nature's Miracle Fusion" (Shadow of the Rose)

 

You all may notice that i've used cards that haven't been added to the Written card topics yet. (Mainly Shadow of the Rose). I will add those when I can.

 

So....Tell me what you think so far.

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hmmm...

a mysterious legend that can potentially either save or destroy the world.

I'm willing to see it first before judging it.

 

BTW' date='are you in need of characters?I can help you with it.

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hmmm.....at this very second, it's all good. But i'll keep in touch.

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I like it.

But I don't like the first part as its like :

The main character is called this and he has a sister who can duel and a brother in the army.

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Maybe try profiles ?

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It seems pretty cool.

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But I'll wait for the next episode to give it a proper rating.

 

What do you mean by Profiles?

 

And, Lord Wyhe, tell me what I need to improve on.

 

This is just the first chapter, and I said i'm new at this. The next chapters will be better.

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Like Character profiles instead of a paragraph.

Like something describing Omegawave. His deck. His personality.

Instead of 1 paragraph but other than that it's good.

 

Ah.....I guess the second chapter could do that. That 1 paragraph was just a summary. It isn't in detail. BTW, those people actually exist. Rachel is my real GF and my bro Chris is in the marines, etc.

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"??? V.S. ???"

??? LP - 4000

??? LP - 4000

??? Hand - 6

??? Hand - 5

How are we suppose to know who is who?

Describe your characters to make it look better.

Put more emotions into it. (I know it's difficult,but still...)

Hope these tips helped.

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"??? V.S. ???"

??? LP - 4000

??? LP - 4000

??? Hand - 6

??? Hand - 5

How are we suppose to know who is who?

Describe your characters to make it look better.

Put more emotions into it. (I know it's difficult' date='but still...)

Hope these tips helped.

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Well, it's a Story Thing. you can figure out who is who by reading the rest of the story. Who went first? That's the one with 6 cards in his hand. The characters will be better described in Chapter 2. Or....I could put something together, like a Fan-Fic guide with every character in it with an In-Depth Biography. Including their Key Cards and stuff. As for emotions.....Give me a break. I put this chapter together in 20 minutes at 7:00 in the morning. I wasn't fully awake XD

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Chapter 2: The Hyper Dragon Fiasco (Part 1)

 

1 week later.....in the city of Duelopolis, Street Duels have become a popular thing. You would never go outside and not see a duel in place. One duelist in particular has a great dueling ability. His name is Joshua Hazelwood. While he isn't the best, he sure does leave people crying. He just thinks that dueling is just a game....he is soon about to find out that he has been wrong.

 

??? - Josh! Hurry up! We'll be late!

 

Joshua - Alright Rachel! Hang on! It's just a public tournament anyway, what would being 5 minutes late do?

 

Rachel - It's not just a public tournament, block head! It's being held by Gabe. You know how people look up to him.

 

Joshua - Agh....Gabe. I still don't see why people love him so much. He's a rich guy. Doesn't mean he is a good duelist.

 

Rachel - Just hurry up or i'm leaving without you!

 

Joshua - C'MON! Where is it?!!!

 

Rachel - Where is what?

 

Joshua - My lucky charm.

 

Rachel - Geez.....I don't think that thing is lucky at all. It's just a metal flower tied to a piece of string.

 

Joshua - My Grandfather gave that to me. I never leave without it....AH! Found it!

 

Rachel - Then let's go! Chris is waiting for us!

 

Joshua - Right!

 

Later on at the tournament meeting site......

 

Chris - It's about time you two showed up! I was about to send out a search party!

 

Rachel - Sorry. Josh had to find his Flower.

 

Chris - The one Granddad gave ya?

 

Joshua - Yeah.

 

Chris - Ah well....atleast you found it. Good thing too. The tournament is about to start.

 

*Music begins to play*

 

Gabe - Welcome everyone! Welcome to the 1st Annual Hyper Dragon Duel Tournament! It's not often that I create a public tournament. So to comemorate this event, i've got a great prize for the winner. A one-of-a-kind card that only I have. The "Lotus of Purity"!

 

Joshua - Lotus of Purity? Doesn't sound all that cool.

 

Rachel - Who cares? It's unique. It is worth a ton of money i'd bet.

 

Gabe - In addition to that, the winner gets to have a duel with me! And if you win, you win 10,000 Zenny!

 

Chris - 10,000 ZENNY?!!! Good lord! That's alot of cash!

 

Gabe - So....with a open mind and an appetite for action, I'd like to say.....LET THE TOURNAMENT BEGIN!

 

*Applause is heard for miles*

 

Joshua - All right! Who's my first opponent?! I'm so excited!

 

??? - Hey! Your Joshua Hazelwood right?

 

Joshua - Yeah. Who are you?

 

Black Claw Scout - I'm a member of the Black Claw gang. There is a big reward for anyone who wipes the floor with you. You've made quite a name for yourself, hotshot.

 

Joshua - Wait! I've heard of you guys. You go around challenging people and defeating them and then you take their Rarest Cards and all of their Zenny! You guys are crooks!

 

Black Claw Scout - Heh....I suppose so. That won't stop me from dueling you though. If I win, I get your rarest card. If you win, i'll give you mine. Deal?

 

Joshua - Whatever! Let's start this already so I can put an end to your evil deeds.

 

Joshua LP - 4000

Black Claw Scout LP - 4000

Joshua Hand - 6

Black Claw Scout Hand - 5

 

Rachel & Chris - Go Josh! You can beat him!

 

Joshua - My move! I summon Warrior of Zera in Attack Position! Then I play the Field Spell known as "The Sanctuary in the Sky"! With that in play, by sending my Warrior to the Graveyard, I can Special Summon "Archlord Zerato" in Attack Position! Then I place 2 cards face-down. That's it.

 

Rachel - Excellent Start!

 

Chris - What a move! You've got him cornered already!

 

Black Claw Scout - *Grins*

 

Current Status:

Joshua - Archlord Zerato (Attack Mode), LP - 4000, Hand - 1, 2 face-downs, The Sanctuary in the Sky is Active.

Black Claw Scout - No Change

 

Black Claw Scout- My move! Prepare yourself! *Draws* I play the Spell Card "Trade-in"! By sending my "Tyrant Dragon" to the Graveyard, I can draw 2 cards from my Deck. Hehehe....I play the Spell Card "Polymerization"! Fusing together my "Cyberdark Horn", "Cyberdark Keel", and "Cyberdark Edge", to create "Cyberdark Dragon"!!

 

Joshua - 1000 ATK and DEF? Ooooh so scary.

 

Black Claw Scout - Hehehe....it is really. I activate it's effect! I can take my "Tyrant Dragon" from my Graveyard and equip it to Cyberdark Dragon! Raising it's ATK to 3900!

 

Joshua - *Gulp*

 

Black Claw Scout - Now, I activate "Mystical Space Typhoon"! Which destroys your Sanctuary in the Sky!

 

Joshua - NO!!

 

Black Claw Scout - NOW! Cyberdark Dragon! Attack Archlord Zerato!

 

*Zerato is blown to bits*

 

Current Status:

Joshua - 2 Face-downs, 2900 LP, 1 card in Hand.

Black Claw Scout - Cyberdark Dragon+Tyrant Dragon, 4000 LP, 1 Card in hand.

 

Joshua - This isn't good....How am I going to defeat that Dragon? I might actually lose this one!

 

*To Be Continued*

 

*End of Chapter 2*

 

Cards of Interest:

Archlord Zerato (Actual Card. Look in Yugioh Wiki)

The Sanctuary in the Sky (Actual Card. Look in Yugioh Wiki)

Polymerization (Actual Card. Look in Yugioh Wiki)

Tyrant Dragon (Actual Card. Look in Yugioh Wiki)

Cyberdark Horn (Actual Card. Look in Yugioh wiki)

Cyberdark Keel (Actual Card. Look in Yugioh Wiki)

Cyberdark Edge (Actual Card. Look in Yugioh Wiki)

Cyberdark Dragon (Actual Card. Look in Yugioh Wiki)

Mystical Space Typhoon (Actual Card. Look in Yugioh Wiki)

Lotus of Purity (Shadow of the Roses)

 

More comments are appriciated ^^

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He is a bit stupid to go and duel a crook' date=' right ?

The grammar isn't bad.

Something about this wants me to read more.

Why couldn't the money be Star Bucks ? xD

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It's called being a hero, my friend.

Thanks.

Awsome, Chapter 3 is in the works.

Umm.....why?

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