pupil Posted May 25, 2008 Report Share Posted May 25, 2008 Characters:Name: Red AmeerAge:11Pokemon: CharmanderLV.2Moves: Tackle,Ember,Quick AtackName: Blue LifeAge:11Pokemon: SquirtleLV.1Moves: TackleName: Green AmeerAge:10Pokemon: Bulbasuar*LV.3Moves: Tackle,Bullet Seed,Quick AttackName: Professor OakAge:40Pokemon: RattataLV.1Item:Focus BandMoves: Endeavor,Quick Attack Pokemon: GengarLV.100Moves: Frensy Plant,Blast Burn,Hydro Cannon,CurseName: Gold RocketAge:11Name: Silver RocketAge:11Name: Crystal RocketAge:12Name: Brendan EmeraldAge:10Name: May RubyAge:11Name: Lukas DiamondAge:10Name: Pearl RockyAge:9Name: Dawn PlatinumAge:11Story:1 A new jounrneyPart:1 Pokemon LifeRed and Blue meet with Oak and they get their first pokemon.Red:CharmanderBlue:SquirtleGreen comes with her Shiny Bulbasuar.Part:2 BattleBlue takes on Red in a pokemon battle.Charmander uses tackle,Squirtle is knocked out,Charmander levels up 1 level and learns ember and quick attack.Part:3 SetingOffRed,Blue and Green setoff on their quest to be the best. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pupil Posted May 27, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 27, 2008 Bump!Please View. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pupil Posted May 28, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 28, 2008 Bump please reply and view.Please. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atomix Posted May 28, 2008 Report Share Posted May 28, 2008 You do know that this is susposed to be a story >. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Umbra Posted May 28, 2008 Report Share Posted May 28, 2008 Clearly not a serious attempt. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pupil Posted May 29, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 29, 2008 Just the begging. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Impact™ Posted June 1, 2008 Report Share Posted June 1, 2008 can't see half the pictures Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted June 1, 2008 Report Share Posted June 1, 2008 Very bad. And if you wanna write a pokemon fan fic, do the same as you would with a yugioh fanfic. MAKE AN ORIGANAL STORY. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Supreme Gamesmaster Posted June 1, 2008 Report Share Posted June 1, 2008 Horrible. Just plain horrible. THERE'S NO STORY. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarkForce™ Posted June 1, 2008 Report Share Posted June 1, 2008 DUDE THIS IS THE DUMMEST THING EVEAH!!!! YOU WANT A REAL STORY LOOK AT MINE IN MY SIG!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted June 1, 2008 Report Share Posted June 1, 2008 I wrote better stories when I was 5. I think this should be locked as it isn't even a true fanfic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pupil Posted June 3, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 3, 2008 Be more kind please. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Supreme Gamesmaster Posted June 3, 2008 Report Share Posted June 3, 2008 Please, be more kind? Your idea of a chapter is one sentence. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pupil Posted June 5, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 5, 2008 No Just Starting It. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Umbra Posted June 5, 2008 Report Share Posted June 5, 2008 This thread will be unlocked once the fanfic is submitted. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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