blue-eyes My first card idea, please dont roast me too much

[Mr Deykar]

This is basically a "Blue-Eyes" support card. My goals were

1. I wanted to make Blue-Eyes decks more consistent (Brick less), without making it broken.

2.  Support the summon of "Neo Blue-Eyes Ultimate Dragon" because i think the card is underutilized. ( too hard and costly to summon for what its worth )

 

So the idea is that this card replaced the good old OG Blue-Eyes White Dragon completely. I dont see a consistent idea how to make the deck not brick with having normal monsters in it. 
I made it easy to summon and the cost of discarding 1 dragon type can have synergy with "White Stone of Ancients".

Then it would summon 2 other Blue-Eyes which it could use for a fusion summon using its own effect. Then after being used for fusion materials, it could be used for protecting the fusion itself from the graveyard.

Would love some feedback. Is it too good? Too weak? What would you change? 

[LazerSwordKirbo]

I like the idea and love blue eyes, but the card is a bit too strong due to it being a one-card neo ultimate. Also, the negate banishes it so you can't use it as the catalyst for the rest of the archetype. I would recommend making the summon a hard once per turn and nerf it to only one, and make the banish a shuffle into the deck as well as a hard once per turn. I would love to see your future creations.

[Mr Deykar]

5 hours ago, LazerSwordKirbo said:

I like the idea and love blue eyes, but the card is a bit too strong due to it being a one-card neo ultimate. Also, the negate banishes it so you can't use it as the catalyst for the rest of the archetype. I would recommend making the summon a hard once per turn and nerf it to only one, and make the banish a shuffle into the deck as well as a hard once per turn. I would love to see your future creations.

Thanks for the feedback. I gave it the same graveyard effect as Neo Blue-Eyes Ultimate Dragon, since its a "Neo" card.  So i wanted to keep some effect to naming consistency.

Also i think if you just banish one or two of them from your grave, you could still run Blue-Eyes Alternative for further Blue-Eyes fusions. I think strong effects such as negates should come at a big cost. Shuffling them back into the deck, would mean you could easily get them back to your hand or the field with the various support cards. 
Adding a hard once per turn for every effect might be something to consider, if 3 potential negates in the grave after the fusion would be too strong. 
I just thought there are so many meta cards which can negate effects from the grave anyways, so that wouldnt be an issue.

Also, there are plenty of card removal effects which dont target, so there are also ways to play around it.
 

Edited May 7, 2024 by Mr Deykar