Yotoden

[GenzoTheHarpist]

I'm kind of a nut over the anime Yotoden. I made some cards featuring the antagonists. They are all of the special type "Oboro" and are made so that if you kill them, it makes the effects of the others more potent (the current batch aren't a good example of this.) I am open to suggestions. More on the way.

 

[bury the year]

Don't make up your own types, and no Normals, please.

[Pikachu]

hey woah woah, normals are ok and made up types are....not really ok but it's allowed

some good cards a few images r tiny bit blurry, nice balanced effects (maybe discarding is better than removing from play)

it's good 8/10

[GenzoTheHarpist]

Thanks for the feedback. You think I could fix this by changing their types, adding Oboro to their names and making it so that the effects target monsters with "Oboro" in their names?

 

The images were blurry since a complete lack of images forced me to use screenshots I got off of youtube videos.

[Pikachu]

yep, you got the idea mate!

but um....you could always use: www.deviantart.com for some pics

good luck!

[GenzoTheHarpist]

Well I couldn't use Deviantart since the characters are from a specific anime series, and no one draws them.

[Pikachu]

hmm well, do another anime series (the most popular ones are now pokemon and naruto, for some reason)

but, good luck with ur next post

[GenzoTheHarpist]

Here are three more: Two of the Oboro Ninja, who have support effects, and a basic demon sort. Hopefully the images were better, though i'm still not too proud of how Genzo turned out.

 

[Pikachu]

wow, yet again awesome cards the genzo card isn't that blurry (thats u lol)

anyways, good ocg (better than any1s actually) and grammar 9/10

for genzo, just 1 monster removed from play is enough

[GenzoTheHarpist]

Thanks for the compliments. I'll work on some more soon, probably a new demon and the rest of the Oboro Ninja, maybe some magic/traps.

[GenzoTheHarpist]

Here are some more, Some demons and one Oboro Ninja:

 

[Pikachu]

slime oboro....i think it's better if you just say lose 300 life points

acid ones ok

the oboro ninja....what if it's equiped to a dark magician? lol, that'll be uber, fix that

but it's good 7/10

p.s just edit your first post. do this by clicking the edit button on the bottom of your post.

[~ P O L A R I S ~]

How about for Oboro Ninja Masago you make it a Level 5 with 2000 ATK, and you make it gain half the ATK of the opponent's monster. That would be more balanced.

[Pikachu]

hmmm i agree. but what if the eqiped monster is dark magician....2000+1250=3250 i think that's still overpowered lol

[GenzoTheHarpist]

Well it's effect is weaker then Relinquished's... you do have to remove Oboros from play. I will alter some of the other effects though.

[Pikachu]

um keep the attack and just half the attack being taken. and i told u 1 oboro is enough (2 and you may have hardly any monsters)

but, its cool

[GenzoTheHarpist]

I have already changed that. Just need to edit my posts. Many things have been changed. Be done in a minute.

[Pikachu]

alright then....i can wait lol

p.s you really like yotoden do you?

[GenzoTheHarpist]

Everything has been changed to reflect suggestions. And Yeah, I love Yotoden.

[Pikachu]

wow, they've all changed that was fast!

well, good luck and mkae more cards (im always here)

[GenzoTheHarpist]

I'm getting to work. Three more Oboro Ninjas and a couple monsters to go.

[GenzoTheHarpist]

Here are the last of the Oboro ninjas. After this comes the real heavy-weight monsters, Demon God and Three-Headed Demon. As soon as I can get good images of them, that is.