Phantasm12778 Posted February 14, 2024 Report Share Posted February 14, 2024 I would appreciate some constructive criticism please If this card is activated; Add 1 "Eye of Timaeus", "Fang of Critias" OR 1 "Claw of Hermos" from your Deck or GY to your hand. Once per turn: You can activate 1 of these effects: -Reveal 1 monster that lists "Dark Magician" or "Eye of Timaeus" in its Text; Send Materials listed on that card from your hand or Deck to the GY, and if you do, Special Summon that monster.(This is treated as a Special Summon with "Eye of Timaeus") -Reveal 1 monster that lists "The Fang of Critias" in its text; Send a Trap that is listed on that card from your hand or Deck to the GY, and if you do, Special Summon that monster(This is treated as a Special Summon with "Fang of Critias") -Reveal 1 monster that lists "Claw of Hermos" in its Text; Send 1 "Claw of Hermos" from your hand or Deck to the GY, and if you do, Special Summon that monster(This is treated as a Special Summon with "Claw of Hermos") You can only activate 1 "Timeless War" per turn. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ahmad Alzubi Posted February 14, 2024 Report Share Posted February 14, 2024 I like it, good work! Still, I wish if you could foind a way to massively reduce the text Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jordan Ashwood Posted February 14, 2024 Report Share Posted February 14, 2024 Very cool card; I think a lot of people would trip over themselves to get it if it were real! As for constructive criticism: Most cards say where you reveal the card from, in this case, reveal from extra deck. Also! Since the text is obviously too much... what would you think about omitting the first effect? Since this nets you a high-powered summon every turn, burning through your resources in the process, the search may not be necessary! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantasm12778 Posted February 16, 2024 Author Report Share Posted February 16, 2024 On 2/14/2024 at 4:27 PM, Jordan Ashwood said: Very cool card; I think a lot of people would trip over themselves to get it if it were real! As for constructive criticism: Most cards say where you reveal the card from, in this case, reveal from extra deck. Also! Since the text is obviously too much... what would you think about omitting the first effect? Since this nets you a high-powered summon every turn, burning through your resources in the process, the search may not be necessary! That's an awesome constructive criticism! Thanks for actually being nice about it. I'll make sure to fix it for you 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jordan Ashwood Posted February 16, 2024 Report Share Posted February 16, 2024 You're very welcome ^^ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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