KH911 Posted October 5, 2023 Report Share Posted October 5, 2023 I think we all agree that Yugioh cards are bloated with text to the point they're almost unreadable. So I decided to try fixing the problem: PART A: Formatting First, I numbered and listed all the effects on a card so it's easier to parse. I also put the associated number of uses at the end of each effect. There would also be a number displaying the level/rank of the card on the last star, so you don't have to count (but keeping the aesthetic of the stars). Colour coding is optional. The result looks like this: 6* * * * * * Materials: X + Y 1. Immunities 2. Continuous Effect 3. Condition: Cost; Effect. Uses: x per y (where x is a number and y is chain/turn/duel/etc.) PART B: Keywords Next, I made keywords based on widely used terminology for common effects. These will be in bold. Here's a list of what I have so far (we can add, remove, change, or combine at any time): 1. Search: Add from deck to hand 2. Mill x: Send x number of cards from top of deck to GY 3. Dump: Send from deck to GY 4. Immune (a, b, c...): Immune to a, b, c, and anything else inside the bracket. If there's no bracket, that means it's immune to everything 5. Revive/Reborn (not decided yet): Summon from GY 6. Recover: Add from GY to hand 7. Spin: Shuffle from field to deck 8. Bounce: Return from field to hand 9. Book: Flip face-down 10. Burn: Inflict damage 11. Heal: Increase LP PART C: Fluff Finally, I cut out the unnecessary words. For example, instead of "If this card is normal or special summoned" it would say "If summoned:". It's already implied that the card is talking about itself, so it doesn't need to specify "this card" every time, and there's no logic excluding Flip Summoning from the condition. PART D: Examples Now I'm gonna have a few examples using the above, I included only the textbox since there was no changes to the stats: Quote Old Red-Eyes Dark Dragoon * * * * * * * * "Dark Magician" + "Red-Eyes Black Dragon" or 1 Dragon Effect Monster Cannot be destroyed by card effects. Neither player can target this card with card effects. During your Main Phase: You can destroy 1 monster your opponent controls, and if you do, inflict damage to your opponent equal to that monster's original ATK. You can use this effect a number of times per turn up to the number of Normal Monsters used as Fusion Material for this card. Once per turn, when a card or effect is activated (Quick Effect): You can discard 1 card; negate the activation, and if you do, destroy that card, and if you do that, this card gains 1000 ATK. New Red-Eyes Dark Dragoon 8* * * * * * * * Materials: "Dark Magician" + "Red-Eyes Black Dragon" or 1 Dragon Effect Monster 1. Immune (targeting, effect destruction) 2. During your Main Phase: You can destroy 1 monster your opponent controls, and if you do, Burn your opponent for that monster's original ATK. Uses: [Number of normal monster fusion materials] per turn. 3. You can discard 1 card; negate the activation of a card or effect, and if you do, destroy it, and if you do, I gain 1000 ATK. Uses: 1 per turn Quote Old Tearlaments Kitkallos * * * * * 1 "Tearlaments" monster + 1 Aqua monster If this card is Special Summoned: You can take 1 "Tearlaments" card from your Deck, and either add it to your hand or send it to the GY. You can target 1 monster you control; Special Summon 1 "Tearlaments" monster from your hand or GY, and if you do, send the targeted monster to the GY. If this card is sent to the GY by card effect: You can send the top 5 cards of your Deck to the GY. You can only use each effect of "Tearlaments Kitkallos" once per turn. New Tearlaments Kitkallos 5* * * * * Materials: 1 "Tearlaments" monster + 1 Aqua monster 1. On Summon: You can Search or Dump 1 "Tearlaments" card. Uses: 1 per turn 2. Target 1 monster you control; Special Summon 1 "Tearlaments" monster from your hand or GY, and if you do, send the targeted monster to the GY. Uses: 1 per turn 3. If sent to the GY by card effect: Mill 5. Uses: 1 per turn Quote Old Kashtira Arise-Heart * * * * * * * 3 Level 7 monsters Once per turn, you can also Xyz Summon "Kashtira Arise-Heart" by using 1 "Kashtira" monster you control, if an effect of "Kashtira Shangri-Ira" was successfully activated this turn. (Transfer its materials to this card.) Any card sent to the GY is banished instead. Once per Chain, each time a card(s) is banished: Attach 1 banished card to this card as material. Once per turn (Quick Effect): You can detach 3 materials from this card, then target 1 card on the field; banish it face-down. New Kashtira Arise-Heart * * * * * * *7 Materials: 3 Level 7 monsters 1. Can also be Xyz summoned using 1 "Kashtira" monster you control, if an effect of "Kashtira Shangri-Ira" was resolved this turn. Uses: 1 per turn 2. Any card sent to the GY is banished instead. 3. Each time a card(s) is banished: Attach 1 banished card as material. Uses: 1 per chain. 4. (Quick Effect): Detach 3 materials from this card, then target 1 card on the field; banish it face-down. Uses: 1 per turn Quote Old Gashadokuro, the Skeletal Mayakashi * * * * * * * * * * * 1 Tuner + 1+ non-Tuner monsters You can only control 1 "Gashadokuro, the Skeletal Mayakashi". You can only use each of these effects of "Gashadokuro, the Skeletal Mayakashi" once per turn. ●If a Link Monster in your possession is destroyed by battle or an opponent's card effect while this card is in the GY: You can banish 1 other Zombie monster from your GY, and if you do, Special Summon this card. ●If this card is Special Summoned from the GY: You can activate this effect; this turn, this face-up card is unaffected by other cards' effects. New Gashadokuro, the Skeletal Mayakashi 11* * * * * * * * * * * Materials: 1 Tuner + 1+ non-Tuner monsters 1. You can only control 1 "Gashadokuro, the Skeletal Mayakashi" 2. If a Link Monster you control is destroyed by your opponent: You can banish 1 other Zombie from your GY, and if you do, Revive this card. Uses: 1 per turn. 3. On Revive: You can make this card Immune (effects) until the end of the turn. Uses: 1 per turn. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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