YEO Posted August 18, 2023 Report Share Posted August 18, 2023 I would greatly appreciate any criticism as these are not just my first cards, but my first archetype as well. Lorcan of Gluttony, Larkspur -Level 8 - Dark Attribute - Beast-Warrior/Effect ATK 2800 DEF 1000 You can Tribute Summon this card by Tributing 1 monster on your side of the field and banishing 1 card from your hand or GY. You can only use each of the following effects of "Lorcan of Gluttony Larkspur" once per turn. If this card is Tribute Summoned: Banish cards from the top of your opponent's Deck or randomly from their Extra Deck face-down equal to the number of banished cards. If this card is in your hand: You can shuffle any number of level 5 or higher monsters from your hand into your Deck, then draw cards equal to number the cards shuffled into your Deck. If this card is banished: You can banish all cards on the field face-down Until the End Phase of the next turn. Lorcan of Hunt, Lycoris - Level 6 - Wind Attribute - Winged-Beast/Effect ATK 2300 DEF 1500 You can Tribute Summon this card by banishing 1 card from your hand or GY. If this card is Tribute Summoned: You can draw 1 card. If this card is in your hand: You can shuffle any number of level 5 or higher monsters from your hand into your Deck, then draw cards equal to number the cards shuffled into your Deck. You can only use each of the previous two effects of "Lorcan of Hunt Lycoris" once per turn. Tribute Summoned monsters you control gain piercing battle damage while this card is banished. Lorcan of Ambition, Hollyhock - Level 4 Dark - Dark Attribute - Beast-Warrior/Effect ATK 1500 DEF 1200 If this is Normal or Special Summoned: You can banish 1 card from your Deck or GY; Add 1 card from your Deck to your hand that mentions "Tribute Summon", and if you do, you can Normal Summon 1 monster in addition to your Normal Summon/Set. (You can only gain this effect once per turn.) If this card is banished: You can excavate the top cards of your Deck equal to the number of banished cards; Place them in any order. If this card is sent to the GY or banished to Tribute Summon a monster on your side of the field, it gains this effect. ● Once per turn, when your opponent activates a card or effect (Quick Effect): You can banish 1 card from your hand or GY; Negate the activation, and if you do, banish it. You can only use each effect of "Lorcan of Ambition Hollyhock" once per turn. Lorcan of Void, Daffodil - Level 2 - Earth Attribute - Beast/Effect ATK 800 DEF 1000 You can Special Summon this card from your hand if you control no monsters and/or a card(s) is banished. You can only use each of the following effects of "Lorcan of Void Daffodil" once per turn. If this card is sent to the GY: You can send 1 card from your Deck to the GY; Return this card to your hand. If this card is banished: You can banish 1 card from your deck or GY; Return this card to your hand. If this card is sent to the GY or banished to Tribute Summon a monster on your side of the field, it gains this effect. ● Once per turn (Quick Effect): You can banish 1 card from your hand or GY, then target 1 card on the field; banish it. Lorcan of Diligence, Protea - Level 2 - Earth Attribute - Beast-Warrior/Effect ATK 1000 DEF 1000 If this card is Normal or Special Summoned: You can immediately, after this effect resolves, Tribute Summon 1 monster from your hand or that is banished (in your possession). If this card is banished: You can add 1 of your banished cards to your hand except "Lorcan of Diligence Protea". If this card is sent to the GY or banished to Tribute Summon a monster on your side of the field, it gains this effect. ● Once per turn (Quick Effect): You can target 1 banished card; return it to the bottom of the owner's Deck. You can only use each effectsof "Lorcan of Diligence Protea" once per turn. Lorcan? Peony - Level 4 - Dark Attribute - Spellcaster/Effect ATK 1400 DEF 1200 During the Main Phase (Quick Effect): You can send this from your hand or field to the GY: Apply one of the following effects. ● Tribute Summon 1 level 5 or higher monster that is banished (in your possession) or from your hand by Tributing a monster(s) on either side of the field and/or banishing a card from your hand or GY except "Lorcan? Peony". ● Add 1 of your banished cards to your hand. If this card is banished: You can Special Summon this card, but banish it during the End Phase. You can only use each effect of "Lorcan? Peony" once per turn. Lorcan Encounter - Normal Spell Banish 1 card from your hand: Special Summon 1 level 4 or lower monster from your hand or Deck that mentions "Tribute Summon", also for the rest of the turn, also, for the rest of the turn after this card resolves, you cannot Special Monsters from the Extra Deck. Your opponent cannot target Spells/Traps you control that mentions "Tribute Summon" by card effect while this card is banished. You can only activate 1 "Lorcan Encounter" per turn. Farewell to the Lorcan - Normal Spell Banish 1 card that mentions "Tribute Summon" from your hand or shuffle 1 of your banished cards into your Deck; Draw 2 cards. If a Spell/Trap card(s) that mentions "Tribute Summon" and/or a Tribute Summoned monster(s) you control would be destroyed or banished, you can banish this card from your GY instead. Lorcan Welcome - Continuous Spell You can Tribute Summon 1 monster in addition to your Normal Summon/Set. (You can only gain this effect once per turn.) This card gains these effects depending on the number of your banished cards. ● 1+: All monsters can count as 2 Tributes for the Tribute Summon of a monster that requires more than 1 Tribute. ● 2+: All Tribute Summoned monsters on the field gain 100 ATK and DEF for every banished card. ● 3+: Once per turn, if you would Tribute Summon, you can banish 1 card from your opponent's GY as a Tribute instead. You can only control 1 "Lorcan Welcome". Lorcan Vow - Continuous Trap Your opponent cannot target Tribute Summoned monsters you control by card effect. You can only use each of the following effects of "Lorcan Vow" once per turn. During either player's turn: You can target up to three of your banished cards; You can shuffle them into your Deck, and if you do, draw 1 card. If this card is banished: You can target 1 card in either player's GY; banish it. Lorcan Hunt - Normal Trap When your opponent Normal or Special Summons a monster(s) while you control a face-up Tribute Summoned monster: Reduce their ATK by 100 times the number of banished cards, then, if their ATK became 0, take control of them until the End Phase of the next turn. If this card is banished: You can set face-down all cards your opponent controls. You can only activate each effect of "Lorcan Hunt" once per turn. EDIT: Changed the effect of Lorcan? Peony so that it is not as easy to get on the field after it is used. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YEO Posted August 19, 2023 Author Report Share Posted August 19, 2023 I just realized that you can get peony back on the field with its own effects every single turn with the way it is currently written. I will edit this out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yugioh-Stickman Posted August 21, 2023 Report Share Posted August 21, 2023 I like the effects. They are quite varied. I cannot unfortunately provide much criticism though. Do you have much in the way of art work for these fan cards? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YEO Posted August 22, 2023 Author Report Share Posted August 22, 2023 22 hours ago, Yugioh-Stickman said: I like the effects. They are quite varied. I cannot unfortunately provide much criticism though. Do you have much in the way of art work for these fan cards? Yeah, I did not find art for the cards that I liked so I just wrote them instead. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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