loganwilliams1997 Posted May 22, 2008 Report Share Posted May 22, 2008 [/img][/img][/img][/img] [/img] [/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♫Griffinsusername♫ Posted May 22, 2008 Report Share Posted May 22, 2008 horible horrible horrible! 2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dante Dimercurio Posted May 22, 2008 Report Share Posted May 22, 2008 Ok first I will tell you. The first card MAY: The type has to be realistic like Warrior or something like that not Pokemon trainer. Second of all the spelling is horrible, "Hass meny Pokemon" is all wrong it should be "Has many Pokemon." The Cutenis of mew: I can tell that this card is messed up because it's name is all messed up! "The Cutenis Of Mew" should be "The Cuteness Of Mew" Second there is one spelling mistake on the card. Third the opponent losing 4000 life points? No way. Way to overpowered, make it like 400 life point's or something like that. Then finally the wording is bad. Dark Cat: WAY TO OVERPOWERED the highest level you can go with a non-effect monster is 3000 so change it to that and make the star's lower as well. Make the type a warrior or something like that not a type: Cat that is just wrong. Cat Atack: Again spelling error's. "Cat atack" "Cat attack". You spelled destroy wrong and I think that was a bit of a better one. MewTwo:WAY TO OVERPOWERED the highest level you can go with a non-effect monster is 3000 so change it to that and make the star's lower as well. Change the type of the monster. Dark Mantis: Opponent loses 1000 life points? Make it 500 life point something like that not to overpowered. You spelled Opponent wrong Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
loganwilliams1997 Posted May 22, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 22, 2008 please replie good things Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hanimir Posted May 22, 2008 Report Share Posted May 22, 2008 please replie good things I'm afraid that's simply not possible.You should overdo your whole work.Improve OCG, make the effects more interesting,get better pics, change the overpowered cards.How can you become better if noone spots yourmistakes? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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