.Requiem Posted May 22, 2008 Report Share Posted May 22, 2008 Heres is my third try give any suggestions to make it better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest KAJN Posted May 22, 2008 Report Share Posted May 22, 2008 Thats much better, it would be good if you add some electrical c4d. Anyway thats better so 8/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted May 22, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 22, 2008 Wat is C4d? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seth Posted May 22, 2008 Report Share Posted May 22, 2008 C4D's are abstarct renders. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted May 22, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 22, 2008 Wat is better this new one or the one in my sig. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seth Posted May 22, 2008 Report Share Posted May 22, 2008 If you worked on the new one a bit more it would be better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest KAJN Posted May 22, 2008 Report Share Posted May 22, 2008 OK this is an example of a c4d. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frlf Posted May 22, 2008 Report Share Posted May 22, 2008 The Bg.. is plain :/ just blue? add C4D's ^_^! -Frlf Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Slash Posted May 22, 2008 Report Share Posted May 22, 2008 It's not badBut whats with the bg, it's plain6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brushfire Posted May 22, 2008 Report Share Posted May 22, 2008 Plain, but OK. Add a C4D. 6/10. Keep trying! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kizzi Posted May 22, 2008 Report Share Posted May 22, 2008 It looks like you have a navy background, some electric brushes and a render. o.0Read some tuts. PM me / Altair for a couple of sites. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber Altair Posted May 22, 2008 Report Share Posted May 22, 2008 that was a fractal Simplicity. please read more tuts as this really needs lot of work. i can see that you only pasted a render on a plain BG when you should have done much more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted May 22, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 22, 2008 I added some C4Ds: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Slash Posted May 22, 2008 Report Share Posted May 22, 2008 It looks somewhat better now =/ BTW: 4800 posts Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted May 22, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 22, 2008 Wat would you rate it. Also do you go on every day? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Slash Posted May 22, 2008 Report Share Posted May 22, 2008 like a 6.8/10 now and yes I go on Everyday :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted May 22, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 22, 2008 How about this effect?: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted May 23, 2008 Report Share Posted May 23, 2008 Yeah, the background is slightly plain, but the render is alot better! Keep up the good work! -Glasstin Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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