Written Cards for an archetype I'm uncertain about: The Rhythm Archetype

[Phantasm12778]

Apprentice of Rhythm Jackus

Level 3 LIGHT Warrior Tuner Effect 400/400

If you activated a "Rhythm" Continuous Spell this turn, You can Special Summon this card from your hand, and if you control a "School of Rhythm" Field Spell; Activate 1 "Rhythm" Continuous Spell from your Deck. You can only Special Summon "Apprentice of Rhythm Jackus" once per turn this way. If this card is used for the Synchro Summon of a Monster "of Rhythm"; Special Summon this card from your GY, but banish it when it leaves the field. You can only activate each effect of "Apprentice of Rhythm Jackus" per turn.

Master of Rhythm Jazz Jacky

Level 8 LIGHT Warrior Effect 4000/4000

1 Tuner Monster "of Rhythm" + 1 or more Monsters "of Rhythm"

If this card is Synchro Summoned; Activate 1 "Rhythm" Continuous Spell from your Deck. Gains 500 ATK for each "Rhythm" Spell you control. Twice per turn, when an opponent would activate a card or effect that would make a "Rhythm" Spell you control leave the field(Quick Effect): You can banish that "Rhythm" Spell from your field; Negate that effect, and if you do, return that card to the hand. During the End Phase of the turn this effect was activated, Target as many "Rhythm" Spells that are banished; Set them to your Field, and if you do, they can be activated the turn they were Set. If this card Leaves the field, target 1 "Apprentice of Rhythm Jackus" in your GY or that is banished; Special Summon it, and if you do, add 1 Monster "of Rhythm" to your hand. You can only use this effect of "Master of Rhythm Jazz Jacky" once per turn

The Rhythm of Smooth Jazz

Continuous Spell

If this card is activated; Add 1 "School of Rhythm" Spell from your Deck or GY to your hand. Monsters "of Rhythm" whose ATK equals their DEF you control gain 500 ATK and DEF for each "Rhythm" Continuous Spell you control, except "The Rhythm of Smooth Jazz". Once per turn, you can target 1 Monster "of Rhythm" you control and 1 Monster your opponent controls; those monsters ATK and DEF become equal to the highest ATK monster of the two targets, and if you target a Synchro Monster "of Rhythm" with this effect, draw 1 card. You can only activate 1 "The Rhythm of Smooth Jazz" per turn.

School of Rhythm Jazzy Nightclub

Field Spell

If this card is activated via a card effect; apply one of these effects, based on the type of card effect used to activate this card:

Monster "of Rhythm" effect: This card cannot be destroyed by card effects 

"Rhythm" Spell effect: This card cannot be banished by card effects

All Synchro Monsters "of Rhythm" whose ATK equals their DEF gain 500 ATK for every "Rhythm" Spell you control, except this card. Once per turn, if a Synchro Monster "of Rhythm" whose ATK Equals their DEF Battles, Apply this effect: Negate the destruction of both monsters and apply no Battle Damage, and if you do, negate the battling monsters, then add both monsters to the hand, and if you do, your opponent takes damage equal to that ATK of your opponents monster returned by this effect. Your opponent cannot activate cards or effects in response to this effect. If this card leaves the field due to a card effect; Add 1 "School of Rhythm" Field Spell, except "School of Rhythm Jazzy Nightclub". You can only activate 1 "School of Rhythm Jazzy Nightclub" per turn.

I'm done for now...but I welcome constructive criticisms and ways to improve! Have a good day!

[Lone mouse]

I see this isn't finished yet as "Apprentice of Rhythm Jackus" names a card not yet made and no non tuners but they seen really good for what we have so far

[Phantasm12778]

1 minute ago, Lone mouse said:

I see this isn't finished yet as "Apprentice of Rhythm Jackus" names a card not yet made and no non tuners but they seen really good for what we have so far

I apologize for the typing error. Its supposed to be School of Rhythm Field Spell, Specifically this quotion is supposed to represent Jazz

[Lone mouse]

2 minutes ago, Phantasm12778 said:

I apologize for the typing error. Its supposed to be School of Rhythm Field Spell, Specifically this quotion is supposed to represent Jazz

Your good I looked at it and its a simple change just instead of "School of Rhythm" you would say "School of Rhythm" card

[Phantasm12778]

Fixed it!