Aetherium Posted January 31, 2023 Report Share Posted January 31, 2023 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chu The Shooting star Posted January 31, 2023 Report Share Posted January 31, 2023 I belive the type term is zombie, and I very much like the cards effects. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kokoroshi Posted January 31, 2023 Report Share Posted January 31, 2023 4 hours ago, Aetherium said: Some of the wording is off. I’d probably write it as ”FLIP: If this card is flip summoned, you can special summon any 4 level 3 or lower monsters from either GY, and their name becomes this cards name. Once per turn, any card with this card’s name cannot be destroyed by battle.” And this should also be a Zombie or Fiend monster since Ghoul is not a monster type. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aetherium Posted January 31, 2023 Author Report Share Posted January 31, 2023 Just now, Kokoroshi said: Some of the wording is off. I’d probably write it as ”FLIP: If this card is flip summoned, you can special summon any 4 level 3 or lower monsters from either GY, and their name becomes this cards name. Once per turn, any card with this card’s name cannot be destroyed by battle.” And this should also be a Zombie or Fiend monster since Ghoul is not a monster type. alright thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rayfield Lumina Posted January 31, 2023 Report Share Posted January 31, 2023 Umm, yes, this card has some issues... As you check the text something that is a bit off jumps immediatelly: It's a Flip monster, that says in its text "If this card is Flip Summoned". In essence, that's redundant. Flip Monsters will activate their effects when Flipped. Having said that, Flip Summon and flipped face-up are different things, and I admit there are obscure monsters such as Worm Noble that are FLIP but only apply the effect if the actual flip is caused by an opponent's attack (which is flipped face-up and doesn't count as Flip Summoned). I'm saying this because it is arguable that Aetherium wants that the card only apply its effect by mechanically Flip Summoning it and no other ways. My problem with this, is that (I have checked) there is NOT a single FLIP monster in existence that does this (restricting its effect to only Flip Summon). In summary, my suggestion would be to either let the Flip become generic (as in, any type of flipping face-up will trigger the effect, like 99% of the FLIPs), or remove the FLIP quality of the monsters, because thre ARE Effect Monsters without the FLIP ability that activate effects at Flip Summon, such as Granadora, or Gandora the Dragon of Destruction. I'd go for the later, removing the FLIP and make it an effect that triggers at Flip Summon only, simply because the effect is somewhat too powerful. If this card is Flip Summoned: You can target 4 Level 3 or lower monsters in either player's GY; Special Summon those targets, also their name becomes "Slaughtered Child". The first time a card with the same name as this card would be destroyed by battle each turn, it is not destroyed. The balancing factor is that it must be exactly 4 monsters and of low level, so this card won't work well in some situations. However, sudden 4x Summon is strong enough to warrant this downside, and the fact that it needs Flip Summon, which means it has to survive an entire turn. Well, that's my friendly suggestion @Aetherium, remember that even if it's not all praise it's for the sake of helping n.n Another piece of advice: Next time you post a card of this nature, do so in the Casual Cards section, because this is Games section and doesn't belong here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aetherium Posted January 31, 2023 Author Report Share Posted January 31, 2023 2 minutes ago, Rayfield Lumina said: Umm, yes, this card has some issues... As you check the text something that is a bit off jumps immediatelly: It's a Flip monster, that says in its text "If this card is Flip Summoned". In essence, that's redundant. Flip Monsters will activate their effects when Flipped. Having said that, Flip Summon and flipped face-up are different things, and I admit there are obscure monsters such as Worm Noble that are FLIP but only apply the effect if the actual flip is caused by an opponent's attack (which is flipped face-up and doesn't count as Flip Summoned). I'm saying this because it is arguable that Aetherium wants that the card only apply its effect by mechanically Flip Summoning it and no other ways. My problem with this, is that (I have checked) there is NOT a single FLIP monster in existence that does this (restricting its effect to only Flip Summon). In summary, my suggestion would be to either let the Flip become generic (as in, any type of flipping face-up will trigger the effect, like 99% of the FLIPs), or remove the FLIP quality of the monsters, because thre ARE Effect Monsters without the FLIP ability that activate effects at Flip Summon, such as Granadora, or Gandora the Dragon of Destruction. I'd go for the later, removing the FLIP and make it an effect that triggers at Flip Summon only, simply because the effect is somewhat too powerful. If this card is Flip Summoned: You can target 4 Level 3 or lower monsters in either player's GY; Special Summon those targets, also their name becomes "Slaughtered Child". The first time a card with the same name as this card would be destroyed by battle each turn, it is not destroyed. The balancing factor is that it must be exactly 4 monsters and of low level, so this card won't work well in some situations. However, sudden 4x Summon is strong enough to warrant this downside, and the fact that it needs Flip Summon, which means it has to survive an entire turn. Well, that's my friendly suggestion @Aetherium, remember that even if it's not all praise it's for the sake of helping n.n Another piece of advice: Next time you post a card of this nature, do so in the Casual Cards section, because this is Games section and doesn't belong here. u-uhhhh ok remember i'm still kinda new to yu-gi-oh... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rayfield Lumina Posted January 31, 2023 Report Share Posted January 31, 2023 Just now, Aetherium said: u-uhhhh ok remember i'm still kinda new to yu-gi-oh... haha, sorry, I didn't know this, but that's perfectly fine, I'm just trying to help. In case you don't understand something feel free to call, though I'm not the super expert or anything xD. In my previous reply, what I wanted you to notice is that Flip Summon and flipped face-up are different things, and that FLIP monsters inherently activate their effects at flip, so you needn't specify that the effect is activated at Flip Summon lol. I'm bad at making summaries but there's that xD Keep up working on your cards :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aetherium Posted January 31, 2023 Author Report Share Posted January 31, 2023 7 minutes ago, Rayfield Lumina said: haha, sorry, I didn't know this, but that's perfectly fine, I'm just trying to help. In case you don't understand something feel free to call, though I'm not the super expert or anything xD. In my previous reply, what I wanted you to notice is that Flip Summon and flipped face-up are different things, and that FLIP monsters inherently activate their effects at flip, so you needn't specify that the effect is activated at Flip Summon lol. I'm bad at making summaries but there's that xD Keep up working on your cards :) yeah it's cool i doan mind the critisism it was just alot to take in just aslong as ya doan critisize me for bein a furry Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rayfield Lumina Posted January 31, 2023 Report Share Posted January 31, 2023 1 hour ago, Aetherium said: yeah it's cool i doan mind the critisism it was just alot to take in just aslong as ya doan critisize me for bein a furry why would I criticize you for being a furry? xD Nah, to each their own. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zamazenta the OS-Tan Fan Posted February 1, 2023 Report Share Posted February 1, 2023 11 hours ago, Aetherium said: Okay that is more balanced I'm not saying it can't be iumme to anything or have protection but when you make something full on iumme to spells/traps but we gotta keep in mind that some cards must be able to out a monster. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aetherium Posted February 1, 2023 Author Report Share Posted February 1, 2023 15 hours ago, Rayfield Lumina said: why would I criticize you for being a furry? xD Nah, to each their own. oki *hugs* 12 hours ago, Zamazenta the OS-Tan Fan said: Okay that is more balanced I'm not saying it can't be iumme to anything or have protection but when you make something full on iumme to spells/traps but we gotta keep in mind that some cards must be able to out a monster. aight Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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