Kokoroshi Posted October 7, 2022 Report Share Posted October 7, 2022 Took a month off of genshin, came back, and instantly got sucked back into the game so I decided to make the bast gang in Inazuma… THE ARATAKI GANG Arataki Itto Warrior/Ritual/Effect Can be ritual summoned by the effect of a “Vision” ritual spell. you can discard 1 card, destroy 1 face-up card your opponent controls. If your opponent activates an effect while this card is face-up on the field, you can negate that effect and make this card gain 2000 ATK until the end of the turn. You can only activate each effect of “Arataki Itto” once per turn. ATK 3000/DEF 500 Kuki Shinobu Warrior/Effect If this card is normal summoned or special summoned, you can ritual summon 1 Warrior ritual monster that mentions “Vision” in it’s text using monsters on your field or in your hand as materials. ATK 1200/DEF 1300 Vision Gift Ritual Spell Ritual summon 1 Warrior ritual monster with “Vision” in it’s text using monsters on the field or in your hand as material. While this card is in your GY, if a ritual monster is destroyed, you can shuffle this card into the deck then draw a card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zamazenta the OS-Tan Fan Posted October 7, 2022 Report Share Posted October 7, 2022 Nice Cards :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Loleo Posted October 8, 2022 Report Share Posted October 8, 2022 : instead of commas for leading in from activation condition to effect. Other than that cool cards. A little on the weak side since its effects only work on your turn but cool card! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rayfield Lumina Posted October 8, 2022 Report Share Posted October 8, 2022 ooook, allow me to help you with some card grammar Arataki Itto You can Ritual Summon this card with any "Vision" Ritual Spell. You can discard this card, then target 1 face-up card your opponent controls; destroy it. If your opponent activates an effect while you control this face-up card: You can negate that effect, and if you do, this card gains 2000 ATK until the end of this turn. You can only use each effect of "Arataki Itto" once per turn. - The negate effect is pretty stronk, but that's pretty much it, I think it can pass. Kuki Shinobu If this card is Normal or Special Summoned: You can Ritual Summon 1 Ritual Monster that lists "Vision" in its text from your ??? by Tributing ??? Monsters from your ??? whose total levels equal [or exceed] the Level of the Ritual Monster. - Well, this card's original text is a bit of a mess. Ritual Summons can be performed from hand, Deck or GY, so you got to specify which, hence the first ???, then you gotta specify the kind of monsters required (if there's no requirement, then just "monsters" if fine), theeen specify from where they can be Tributed, AAAAND then, you have to specify if the combined level of those monsters must be equal or can exceed the Ritual Mons' level. If it must be equal, discard the part in [] Vision Gift This card can be used to Ritual Summon a Warrior Ritual Monster from your ??? . You must also Tribute monsters from your hand or field whose total levels equal [or exceed] the Level of the Ritual Monster. If a Ritual Monster is destroyed while this card is in your GY: You can shuffle this card into the Deck, and if you do, draw 1 card. - Pretty much requires all the specifications as the previous card. Is the ability to shuffle triggered when ANY Ritual Mon is destroyed and not just yours? If intended, alrighty, if not, needs a "you control". P. D. Kuki is too cute Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kokoroshi Posted October 10, 2022 Author Report Share Posted October 10, 2022 On 10/8/2022 at 2:25 PM, Rayfield Lumina said: ooook, allow me to help you with some card grammar Arataki Itto You can Ritual Summon this card with any "Vision" Ritual Spell. You can discard this card, then target 1 face-up card your opponent controls; destroy it. If your opponent activates an effect while you control this face-up card: You can negate that effect, and if you do, this card gains 2000 ATK until the end of this turn. You can only use each effect of "Arataki Itto" once per turn. - The negate effect is pretty stronk, but that's pretty much it, I think it can pass. Kuki Shinobu If this card is Normal or Special Summoned: You can Ritual Summon 1 Ritual Monster that lists "Vision" in its text from your ??? by Tributing ??? Monsters from your ??? whose total levels equal [or exceed] the Level of the Ritual Monster. - Well, this card's original text is a bit of a mess. Ritual Summons can be performed from hand, Deck or GY, so you got to specify which, hence the first ???, then you gotta specify the kind of monsters required (if there's no requirement, then just "monsters" if fine), theeen specify from where they can be Tributed, AAAAND then, you have to specify if the combined level of those monsters must be equal or can exceed the Ritual Mons' level. If it must be equal, discard the part in [] Vision Gift This card can be used to Ritual Summon a Warrior Ritual Monster from your ??? . You must also Tribute monsters from your hand or field whose total levels equal [or exceed] the Level of the Ritual Monster. If a Ritual Monster is destroyed while this card is in your GY: You can shuffle this card into the Deck, and if you do, draw 1 card. - Pretty much requires all the specifications as the previous card. Is the ability to shuffle triggered when ANY Ritual Mon is destroyed and not just yours? If intended, alrighty, if not, needs a "you control". P. D. Kuki is too cute Thanks, I’m not the best with card text but I try my best. And yes, the shuffle on “vision gift” is ment to be triggered by ANY ritual monster. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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