Casual Warrior Posted October 5, 2022 Report Share Posted October 5, 2022 The idea is to banish them and activate their effect in the banished zone. Their effects might be op, but the cost is that you can activate a specific effect maximum 3(maybe 4) times, since they flip face down as soon as you activate their effects. This example card has the ability to shuffle 2 face down banished cards with the cost, that you can use it once per duel. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Loleo Posted October 5, 2022 Report Share Posted October 5, 2022 I don't understand how youwould fusion set a monster, also fusion summon is special summon, easiest way to fix the first sentence is "Must be Fusion Summoned" thats it. There are other minor gramatical mistakes, but I think the other thing is you should specify you target 2 of your banished FD cards, but the weird part of that effect is you shouldn't know what your targeting so it should really be random. The power of this card is hard to gage without knowing its materials, but it seems balanced for the cost. Note also remove the OPT on the first effect replace it with (Quick Effect) and make it to where you can only use each effect of your monster OPD. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DifferentDimensionVanessa Posted October 5, 2022 Report Share Posted October 5, 2022 "Must be Fusion summoned or set and cannot be special summoned ." Uhhhhhhh Effect is not good. It is inferior to Destroyer Phoenix Enforcer, which I don't want to run or have. Needs at least one kind of protection. Even Five-Headed Dragon, which I'm assuming is easier to bring out than this 5000 ATK monster has...some kind of protection that we don't normally consider protection. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Loleo Posted October 5, 2022 Report Share Posted October 5, 2022 31 minutes ago, DifferentDimensionVanessa said: "Must be Fusion summoned or set and cannot be special summoned ." Uhhhhhhh Effect is not good. It is inferior to Destroyer Phoenix Enforcer, which I don't want to run or have. Needs at least one kind of protection. Even Five-Headed Dragon, which I'm assuming is easier to bring out than this 5000 ATK monster has...some kind of protection that we don't normally consider protection. Actually, I think this almost good enough for gimmick decks because the effect worth looking at here is the return of face-down banished cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Casual Warrior Posted October 6, 2022 Author Report Share Posted October 6, 2022 16 hours ago, Loleo said: I don't understand how youwould fusion set a monster, also fusion summon is special summon, easiest way to fix the first sentence is "Must be Fusion Summoned" thats it. There are other minor gramatical mistakes, but I think the other thing is you should specify you target 2 of your banished FD cards, but the weird part of that effect is you shouldn't know what your targeting so it should really be random. The power of this card is hard to gage without knowing its materials, but it seems balanced for the cost. Note also remove the OPT on the first effect replace it with (Quick Effect) and make it to where you can only use each effect of your monster OPD. Thanks for the info. Should I also change the first effect to "If your opponents targets this card with a card effect (Quick Effect): Negate it and if you do, destroy it." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Loleo Posted October 6, 2022 Report Share Posted October 6, 2022 9 hours ago, Casual Warrior said: Thanks for the info. Should I also change the first effect to "If your opponents targets this card with a card effect (Quick Effect): Negate it and if you do, destroy it." I would say either leave it as is or just make it so it can't be targeted by card effects because negating and destroying something that targets it is just a convulted way of saying it cna't be targeted. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kokoroshi Posted October 7, 2022 Report Share Posted October 7, 2022 On 10/5/2022 at 4:47 AM, Casual Warrior said: The idea is to banish them and activate their effect in the banished zone. Their effects might be op, but the cost is that you can activate a specific effect maximum 3(maybe 4) times, since they flip face down as soon as you activate their effects. This example card has the ability to shuffle 2 face down banished cards with the cost, that you can use it once per duel. Let’s begin, positives- I like the idea and art behind the card. The name is cool. The card art is cooler. now the negatives- HOW THE HELL DO YOU FUSION SET A CARD!!! Fusion summoning is a form of special summoning and special summoning will only summon monsters face up. Also, “this card can’t be special summoned “ basically means you can’t even summon this card since fusion monsters HAVE to be special summoned. The text “if this card is face-up in your banished zone” should be changed to “if this card is banished” since face-down banished cards can’t do shit. extra note, technically Angel isn’t a type but I can let that slide Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Loleo Posted October 8, 2022 Report Share Posted October 8, 2022 11 hours ago, Kokoroshi said: Let’s begin, positives- I like the idea and art behind the card. The name is cool. The card art is cooler. yes now the negatives- HOW THE HELL DO YOU FUSION SET A CARD!!! Fusion summoning is a form of special summoning and special summoning will only summon monsters face up. Also, “this card can’t be special summoned “ basically means you can’t even summon this card since fusion monsters HAVE to be special summoned. The text “if this card is face-up in your banished zone” should be changed to “if this card is banished” since face-down banished cards can’t do shit. yep extra note, technically Angel isn’t a type but I can let that slide Yeah, this should probably just be a Fairy monster Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Casual Warrior Posted October 9, 2022 Author Report Share Posted October 9, 2022 On 10/6/2022 at 9:01 PM, Loleo said: I would say either leave it as is or just make it so it can't be targeted by card effects because negating and destroying something that targets it is just a convulted way of saying it cna't be targeted. Ok I updated it I hope that it's still balanced On 10/7/2022 at 3:41 PM, Kokoroshi said: Let’s begin, positives- I like the idea and art behind the card. The name is cool. The card art is cooler. now the negatives- HOW THE HELL DO YOU FUSION SET A CARD!!! Fusion summoning is a form of special summoning and special summoning will only summon monsters face up. Also, “this card can’t be special summoned “ basically means you can’t even summon this card since fusion monsters HAVE to be special summoned. The text “if this card is face-up in your banished zone” should be changed to “if this card is banished” since face-down banished cards can’t do shit. extra note, technically Angel isn’t a type but I can let that slide Yeah another guy pointed it out. I updated it rn I hope it's okay Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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