pain17ification Posted October 4, 2022 Report Share Posted October 4, 2022 So, I'm a fanfiction author who also loves the HoloLive Girls. So, I asked a friend of mine to help me make a special "HoloLive Series" Deck for a future Naruto/Yu-Gi-Oh story we're working on. We spent a lot of time on this HoloDeck, so please tell us what you all think! I'd love to get your feedback on our efforts, and I hope you check out the story when it is posted in the future! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Loleo Posted October 5, 2022 Report Share Posted October 5, 2022 On 10/3/2022 at 8:14 PM, pain17ification said: So, I'm a fanfiction author who also loves the HoloLive Girls. So, I asked a friend of mine to help me make a special "HoloLive Series" Deck for a future Naruto/Yu-Gi-Oh story we're working on. We spent a lot of time on this HoloDeck, so please tell us what you all think! I'd love to get your feedback on our efforts, and I hope you check out the story when it is posted in the future! 1. Please don't post custom archetypes in the card game workshop, just in Casual/Realistic cards. 2. These are really cool and I'm going to review them anyway. First things first, DIVINE attribute and custom type means you have basically 0 access to outside support. Bellow are my reccomendations for the fusions. Would love to hear back in messages. @The Nyx Avatar can you please move this thread. Cosmic "Ceras Fauna" + "Tsukumo Sana" Must be Fusion Summoned. Each time a monster changes battle position gain 500 LP. Once per turn (Quick Effect): You can target a monster either player controls; change its battle position. (First line how you write fusion material, second is effect change recommendation) Duchess Must be Fusion Summoned. Once per turn while your opponent controls 2 or more monsters (Quick Effect): You can Target a monster your opponent controls; negate its effects and it cannot attack this turn. Nameless Must be Fusion Summoned. After damage calculation if this card attacked: You can tribute a monster you control; this card can attack again. Ocean Must be Fusion Summoned. Cannot be destroyed by card effects. Once per turn during each player’s end phase (Quick Effect): Each player must place a qualified counter on a monster they control; All monsters without a qualified counter are destroyed and Ocean goddess gains attack equal to the combined levels of the monsters destroyed by this effect times 100. Phoenix Must first be Fusion Summoned. While this card is in the GY: You can shuffle a “Takanashi” and a “Mori” card from your GY into your deck; Special Summon this card from the GY. You can tribute a “KFC” and a “Deadbeat” you control: this card can attack directly this turn. Priestess Must be Fusion Summoned. If a monster is Special Summoned (Quick Effect): You can tribute a monster you control and target a monster your opponent controls; take control of that target. If a monster is sent to the GY (Quick Effect): your opponent must pay 1000 LP or tribute a monster they control; gain 1000 LP. You can only activate 1 effect of “Priestess” once per turn and only once that turn. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pain17ification Posted October 5, 2022 Author Report Share Posted October 5, 2022 Thanks for your feedback You really went into detail about your recommendations, but these cards are mainly for a story. My friend and I just wanted to make the "cards" for them so that my readers could have some sort of reference. We're both not super experienced with professional Yu-Gi-Oh stuff, so that's why all the cards don't match the "lingo" of traditional cards. Still, I appreciate you taking time to show your own changes/edits. It's interesting how different the card descriptions are formatted compared to how we did them. Currently, the story only has the "HoloLive Series" Cards posted and described. The first actual chapter will be posted on FanFiction sometime in December. Here's a link: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14144304/1/Yu-Gi-Oh-The-Holo-Duelist Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Loleo Posted October 6, 2022 Report Share Posted October 6, 2022 I see! It's a very interesting setup. Are you interested in further review? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pain17ification Posted October 6, 2022 Author Report Share Posted October 6, 2022 Absolutely. I'm interested in how you'd adjust the lingo on the cards and alter them Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Loleo Posted October 6, 2022 Report Share Posted October 6, 2022 Non-Fusion level 4 or higher monsters (Would recommend sticking to levels 4 and 6 for these guys and 2 and 3 for the others) I would love to see more effects that affect "HoloGirls" in general. Didn't mention it before but I love that you named each of the effects. Amelia If your opponent activates a trap card: You can special summon this card from your hand. Your opponent must play with their hand revealed. If this card is used as fusion material: You can target up to 3 face down cards on the field; reveal those targets and if they are traps or monsters with DEF greater than their ATK send them to the GY. Ceres If this card is Normal Summoned: You can Special Summon 2 “Fauna” monsters from your deck. Gawr Cannot be destroyed by card effects. If a monster is destroyed by battle this card gains 500 ATK. Hakos (Would recommend making a level 6) Cannot be destroyed by card effects. When this card is summoned: You can excavate cards from the top of your deck until you excavate a monster or your entire deck; If a monster was excavated by this effect send it to the GY and this card’s original ATK and DEF become equal to the original ATK and DEF of that monster. If this card battles (Quick Effect): You can flip a coin; If heads double this cards ATK and DEF if Tails halve this cards ATK and DEF. (still a little on the weak end for a level 6, but should be fine if you fanfic logic the heads at crucial points) Mori (Would also recommend making level 6) Cannot be destroyed by card effects. Each time a card is sent to the GY: increase this cards ATK by 200 and inflict 200 points of damage foreach card sent. Nanashi (breaks a Yugioh taboo of effects activating from the deck) Cannot be destroyed by card effect. If you control 3 or more level 4 or higher monsters: you can Special Summon this card from your hand or GY. You can only Special Summon “Nanashi” once per turn. Ninomae Once per turn (Quick Effect): You can discard any number of cards; Special Summon “Takodachi Tokens” (DARK, HoloGirl/Effect, ?/?) with the effect “This card’s ATK and DEF are equal to the number of “Takodachi Tokens” you control times 500” equal to the number of cards discarded. If this card would be destroyed you can tribute a token you control instead. This card gains 250 ATK and DEF for each token you control. Orca If a monster you control is destroyed: you can Special Summon this card from your hand. Cannot be destroyed by card effects. If this card destroys a monster by battle: This card gains ATK and DEF equal to the original ATK and DEF of that monster and your opponent takes damage equal to that monster’s original ATK. Ouro While you control this card your opponent cannot attack. During each Standby Phase pay 500 LP or destroy this card. Takanashi If this card and a “KFP” monster are in your GY: You can Special Summon those monsters, but shuffle them back into the deck when they leave the field. Sana While this card is in defense position: Your opponent must attack this card with each monster they control if able. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pain17ification Posted October 7, 2022 Author Report Share Posted October 7, 2022 Nice. Still trying to understand the lingo, but they look interesting. The reason that Shylily, Calliope, and Mumei are 8 Star is simply because of personal preference. Those three are my favorites (Mumei being my #1) so I wanted them to be stronger is all. Could you go over my Spells/Equips and Traps?? Wanna see how they stack up, y'know Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kokoroshi Posted October 7, 2022 Report Share Posted October 7, 2022 On 10/3/2022 at 9:14 PM, pain17ification said: So, I'm a fanfiction author who also loves the HoloLive Girls. So, I asked a friend of mine to help me make a special "HoloLive Series" Deck for a future Naruto/Yu-Gi-Oh story we're working on. We spent a lot of time on this HoloDeck, so please tell us what you all think! I'd love to get your feedback on our efforts, and I hope you check out the story when it is posted in the future! Holy shit. I’ll get around to reading this eventually but I have to give props for dedication. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pain17ification Posted October 7, 2022 Author Report Share Posted October 7, 2022 Thank you! My friend and I are proud of what we came up with! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yusandra jetesa Posted October 17, 2022 Report Share Posted October 17, 2022 Gorgeous looking Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pain17ification Posted October 17, 2022 Author Report Share Posted October 17, 2022 Thanks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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