Titanical Universe Whirlwind

[BowWow]

Titanical Universe Whirlwind

Spell. Quick-Play

Effect. Destroy or Banish 1 Spell or Trap card on the field . You can activate this card on your opponents turn from your hand . This card cannot be negated , This card dosen't target . Your can Banish this card from your GY to send 1 card on the field back to its owners DECK , you can do this during your opponents turn . When this card is Banished or in the GY you can add 1 "Titanical Universe Whirlwind" from your DECK to your hand . You can only use each effects of "Titanical Universe Whirlwind" once per turn. (HOPT)

 

I was trying to make a Staple

[Loleo]

Destroy or Banish 1 Spell or Trap card on the field. You can activate this card during your opponent's turn from your hand. This card cannot be negated. You can Banish this card from your GY; send 1 card on the field back to its owner's deck, you can do this during your opponent's turn. When this card is Banished or in the GY you can add 1 "Titanical Universe Whirlwind" from your DECK to your hand. You can only use each effect of "Titanical Universe Whirlwind" once per turn.

 

If the effect of this card was a normal spell with the effect "Return 1 card on the field to its owner's deck" this would be broken, but you even added MST and made it unable to be negated AND it gets another copy of itself?!?

If you want to do... some of this:

1. I would recommend only allowing one effect per turn
2. Take out destroy and just say banish on the first effect
3. Add a discard cost or something to the second effect (that is 1 of the strongest forms of removal in the game right behind tributing)
4. allow your opponent to respond to it.

 

CHANGED:

Titanical Universe Whirlwind

Normal Spell

Banish 1 spell or trap on the field, this effect cannot be negated. You can banish this card from your GY and 1 card from your hand; send 1 card on the field back to its owner's deck. When this card is banished or sent to the GY: Add 1 "Titanical Universe Whirlwind" from your deck to your hand, then pay half your LP. You can only use each effect of "Titanical Universe Whirlwind" once per turn.

 

Note: I didn't do the first recommendation and instead made the third effect mandatory and cost a little and made it a normal spell. The first effect not being respondable is a little bonus.

Note 2: I think this version can be tested, it might be allowed to get a little more power back as this is reminding me of less situational "Galaxy Cyclone" with a higher cost, but the original version of this is just purely better than any 1 target destruction spell ever printed.